Gao Wu: at the Beginning, My Brother Gave Me Lobotomy Company

I hope the author's introduction is true and doesn't trick me into trying to kill her (Bo Mo has too many scenes, and he has such a tacit understanding with the protagonist, I'm a little flustered and scared). I can accept Lily, as a single or anything, but as for marriage, I can't accept it because of the protagonist's personality. Make sure early (Chinese people don't lie to Chinese people [sending hearts])

To be fair, although it is a refreshing novel, the description of the monthly plan is quite reasonable, but the specific content can be slightly modified. After all, most people who read this novel actually have a certain understanding of it. Although the novel has just begun, there may be settings that can be added later, but the plot development personally feels a bit cumbersome, and the values ​​are too monotonous. However, the plot development is not bad, and I give it five stars (there are too few novels on the monthly plan on Tomato, and I personally feel that it is generally good) Second evaluation, in terms of plot development, the plot development feels a bit rigid. Although the logic is self-consistent and the character description is also very good, there is nothing particularly attractive. Although it may be that the author is laying the groundwork for the following, it will inevitably make people lose some interest in watching. As a high school student, I am not lucky to be able to read such a novel during my short breaks, but this novel will not be my first choice when I go home every day to watch for updates every day. It is worth reading, but it can continue to be improved. Finally, I hope that the author can speed up the update frequency and speed up the pace a little. The too slow pace is not suitable for this style of writing. Although it is marked that it is not a cool article, the pace is indeed a bit slow.

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I particularly like this book. The plot is very good and the writing is also good. I like the character of the protagonist very much. ദ്ദിᵔ.˛.ᵔ₎✧I hope I can keep writing and not just stop updating like other monthly articles.

This is just a subjective evaluation without any criticism. The protagonist's weapon settings are monthly, and the world view is relatively old-fashioned with humans fighting alien beasts (but there are NB alien beasts😎), but the description of the story is still very delicate, and the various details in the battle are also described very well [like]. The protagonist's character has changed from a robot who only wants to practice (I heard that it seems to have been changed a bit) to slowly becoming more human-like. It's just that the progress is relatively slow, as if I'm writing day by day. There are nine levels of combat power division, each level has four levels, and each level has three levels. The improvement of combat power is too slow. Moreover, the introduction introduces that the protagonist can also transform into Bai Ye, I'm really looking forward to it😏 That's it for the review😓, my memory is not very good and there may be some discrepancies, please forgive me, thank you [Salute]

This book is really good, especially when it describes how Lu Bu fights Sun Wukong for hundreds of rounds for Diao Chan, but Xue Baochai is really too strong. If it weren't for Nuo Shou's outer ring + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4 six times strafing would have killed him. Apart from that, I prefer Zhuge Liang's battle with Huaguoshan 1 08 Monkey said a sentence, "Young man is proud, don't show off in front of your Brother Liang", showing Zhuge Liang's indignation at Monkey beating him to death with three sticks. All in all, this book has an interesting plot, clear system, many foreshadowings, the fighting scenes are immersive, and the character description is very good [laughs]

He said that there are few people who resonate, and those who resonate are geniuses, so that's no problem. But when I looked at those few pictures, I didn't see that the Gongming people were treated like geniuses. And when it comes to that classroom, I have no problem if Bai Pin suppresses everyone. He said that the resonaters may quit Class A in the second month. I felt so funny when he said this. He told the second person that dual powers were good. It feels like he looks down on the resonaters and thinks that those with super powers are the most powerful. The writing is pretty good, neither amazing nor bad.

After reading about a hundred chapters, I have to say that as a newcomer, this book is still very good. Although there are still many problems: The description of the battle needs to be improved; I don't see what's special about the rare resonaters at all - the school and the state apparatus don't pay enough attention and protection. Most people in the early secret realms and assessments will despise the protagonist when they first meet them. In real fights, the suppression power is not that high, especially the protagonist is not an ordinary resonater; Bai Helei's attitude and behavioral logic towards the protagonist are rather strange - such as conducting experiments and research. From my perspective, the protagonist looks like a surrendered alien, not a human cub 😂. One thing to say, if you really feel that the protagonist has a problem and you can't solve it yourself, you should report it immediately; Of course, the above are all my subjective opinions. Please support the author [sending my heart]

The future is promising, the updates are stable and the chapters are basically non-stop. The most important thing is that someone finally wrote about Bai Ye as a girl (I hope Bai Ye will come out soon)

I have read more than a dozen chapters for the time being, and I feel that it is okay so far. However, the AI ​​feeling suddenly becomes heavier for no reason. During the simulated battle, it is particularly serious and affects the perception. Other worldviews are okay. I plan to continue reading. I have read a lot of novels, and I have no objection to the use of AI. However, I hope that the author will not use AI mindlessly. After AI polishing, he can read it himself. If AI polishing is too obvious, it will affect the perception, such as some unreasonable descriptions, and some descriptions of left and right brains fighting each other. The example will have some spoilers, but it can be considered a poisonous point. For example: When I first entered the simulation battle, I said I wanted to go to the mall because it was easy to defend but difficult to attack. Then after going in, it comes out again immediately. This is very difficult. So what is the point of going? You stay in there for a while, and then go out to fight as soon as you finish testing your abilities. It's like writing whatever you dream about. I hope the author can greatly improve it or come back to revise these chapters.

So far, I can't find any obvious shortcomings, nor can I find any obvious advantages. Of course, the author's writing is still relatively good, and I still feel very comfortable watching it. It makes me want to play a protagonist. Don't expect the author to be able to write good results, just keep improving the frequency and quality of updates slowly, and don't force yourself. All in all, it looks good, I love watching it, and I will continue to watch it [laughs][laughs][laughs]

It's well written, it's great, it's so enjoyable, damn the traffic lock, why isn't such a good book popular [angry]

So far it seems to be okay, at least there aren't many flaws. The author is considered a newbie, so I'm more tolerant if I can forgive it. As long as it's comfortable to watch, I'm very satisfied.

Excellent monthly article. There are some minor issues with the content but not too serious. Overall it's very good Speaking of which, is there a CP of effeminate abnormality?

Let me talk about the conclusion first. This book is extremely versatile, has extremely high total damage, and extremely good dps. Overall, it belongs to the super cup category. I forgot about it in the middle and forgot about it later. In short, I recommend most players to watch [Chigua] Just keep it for now, and then look at it again when it turns into a white night.

It's okay. Among the novels I've read, it's pretty good. But the pace is slow, and the protagonist's more than 300 realms are only in the first turn, and the author said that White Night will be in the fourth turn. Most of them are training and rehearsing battles. Mainly reflected in the training pace is still too slow for me. Occasionally there are some actual battles in secret realms.

Personally, I think it's okay, but there are some places that I can't explain, and I feel aggrieved. It's not normal, and I don't know any invincible cool articles. I don't know Lobotomy Company very well, but it's okay to read this article. However, my suggestion is that I hope there are no summoned Abnormalities in the later ones, otherwise it will be a bit difficult to just rely on the ego. Also, this is a CP problem. I feel like it's the same now and it's not clear. I wrote it wrong, it means summoning the abnormality, otherwise it would be a bit difficult to eg later.

Personally, I feel that there is no "chaos" like ordinary monthly calculators, which is rare.

Author author! Are there any local Abnormalities/Stars? [Praise]

A very good monthly article, much better than others, good luck to the author [laughing] [blowing kisses]

It's pretty good for a novice author, but there are still many shortcomings. 1. The character dialogue is too mechanical. The dialogue between the characters feels like those automatic replying human-machine, and even feels inferior to artificial intelligence such as Beanbao, which greatly affects the viewing experience. (This may be due to the author having little experience in these. It is recommended that the author read more books of the same type to understand how to write dialogues.) 2. The plot is procrastinating. It's hard to imagine how a new reader would feel when he read more than 100 chapters in a row like a running account and suddenly discovered that the main character had only just turned around. I feel that this problem is quite serious and will test the patience of readers. I personally think that this will cause many readers to abandon the book. I also think part of this problem is due to the writing style. I feel that there are many paragraphs in a chapter that can be combined into one paragraph, and some can be simplified. (My suggestion for this question is similar to the previous one, that is, look at the plot rhythm of similar books and learn from it. I have only read novels for a few years, so I can't make any better suggestions. However, it seems that this cannot be improved quickly. I can only read more, learn more, and write more) 3. The update is short. The issue of updating the length is mainly for readers who are following up. After the book is completed, this problem will disappear, but the premise is that it is completed. I see that on Tomato now, the updates are generally twice a day and each chapter costs 2,000. The author's updates are slightly inferior to this. There is a common saying in Tomato updates: "Updates may not solve many problems, but 99% of the problems are caused by insufficient updates." (Forgot the original text) So updates are undoubtedly very important for serialization. (This problem is related to the author's writing skills and experience. It is still recommended that the author writes more and practices more to increase the update speed.) To sum up, I hope that the author can work hard to correct these problems and write an article that is stunning, almost perfect, and satisfying to himself. 😊😊[Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Adore][Adore]

It's so delicious. It's really a pleasure to read this book! Although there is not much content related to lobe management in the middle and late stages, I can't stand the daily writing. It is really fresh and elegant. I like it [Like]

It must be Lily, oh no

Okay, it looks good, but it makes me very uneasy to ask you if the ending is a slap in the face [laughs] In fact, I feel that after watching it, there are a lot of scenes between the protagonist and Ning, and there are a lot less teammates. I feel that the friendship between them is actually quite good. I don't need to deliberately reduce their interaction (it's just a self-feeling. Don't call me orz) [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry]

The author has decided to write about Lily. Can you give some spoilers about when it will appear? I've read dozens of chapters and I'm a little curious. Um, five stars is okay, it can be read in the lobe, but the emotional line makes me a little bit uninterested. The age at the beginning is junior high school, and it doesn't matter until sophomore year... Author, how many words are you going to write? I won't say anything about the original cp. Anyway, it has been changed, but this feeling is really a bit inexplicable. Wonderful, anyway, I read it strangely. Mainly I still think about the problem of the emotional line. Does any book friend know that the book about The Fraudster Xiaolu Anxin is also too long and the ending cannot be concluded. Don't write too long when writing on Tomato without considering publication. It will be very tiring and may also damage the early reputation. The author writes long The literary intent is too obvious. There are more than 50 days in the lobe of the brain, which corresponds to more than 50 paragraphs of the protagonist. If you write the article according to your current meaning, there will definitely be problems. It is too long. More than 60 chapters are still at Z level. The fastest A level is about 18 days. After getting a special one like Bai Ye, it will take 12 days, let alone It's said that you don't just finish your work one day, and you have to upgrade realistically. How many chapters are you going to write? You still have my brother to take care of it later. I can only say that the number of chapters that others have finished is almost over before the early stage. The problem will be exposed little by little. If the author can really write that many chapters, it will be fine, just read it as a paper book.

It really can't be compared with the era when all the gods came out a few years ago. But among the more than 2,200 chapters I've seen, one chapter of 3,000 words that is not boring is already extinct (sad😭) Fortunately, it doesn't give me a headache. Plus, I'm also a monthly planner, so I won't be stingy with the stars🤓👍 Brothers, I have the idea of a villain🤓👆 No, it was too cruel and was rejected by the author😭 Poor villain be like: [wisdom ripped out] It's not strong enough, brother🤔

The process of getting ego is not fast, but each one can still fit the current situation, and it is not a super model. The protagonist has a cold temperament. I like it very much. The overall evaluation is that I like this book very much.

It's a good story. I suggest you improve the dialogue description. It's a bit stiff. It's better to compress it a little bit more on the theory of cultivation. It feels a bit slow.

It is non-toxic and edible. The current team flow is good, and the rhythm is well controlled. As a novice, the narrative can be clear, the language is not awkward, and the reading experience is good. The plot follows the tradition of Gaowu Academy, but at least it has managed to get rid of the dregs and slapped-in-the-face plots, and the protagonist and supporting characters have normal personalities. It's rare for a monthly article to be updated normally.

It's a good story, but the plot feels a bit slow. Whether it's hiding secrets, emotions or improving strength, it's very slow. I hope it can be faster.