Traveling Through *********

There are a lot of supplementary explanations in (), it looks like it was written by AI, but overall it is much better than AI. It may have AI assistance, but it looks pretty good. AI assistance is nothing, so it goes faster [laughs]

The logic is clear, the writing is natural, the writing power is acceptable, and it looks good. It is rated as ram [flying kiss]

I feel that the writing is very immersive, very cute❤️, I like it very much, it would be nice to have more chapters (ω)

I like it very much~ I have read Chapter 25 so far, and I have some guesses of my own: I feel that Xiao Hao actually gained some powers after logging in, but something went wrong because he couldn't stand the stimulation, and he forgot a lot of things. Little K is Xiao Hao's fantasy, second personality, or schizophrenia, so that he can calm down and deal with survival problems. He may be able to travel through time and give entries, but because he forgot, he needs the medium of Xiao K to remember. [Bookshelf plus one]

It's very good-looking, with exciting games and heart-warming stories. However, it lost a bit of passion in the later stages and could be sped up a bit (I think the academy chapter can be passed in a dozen chapters, so five stars are given) ( '▿ ' )

It can properly promote the development of the plot. The progress is a bit slow now (for me). Also, can you make the protagonist have a certain fighting ability? Please, I beg you.

Kitty Gray is very interesting

Identified as ram, it's not easy to find something good in tomatoes

People who watch Man of Steel will probably like this [got it]

The writing is still beautiful

If the content of this book is not critical, it feels very smooth. At the same time, there are no logically confusing parts, and the content of the book is well connected. At the same time, the development of the plot is relatively in line with expectations. You can see the direction you want to see in your heart, and you can see the entire world view more completely. At the same time, to a certain extent, the degree of freedom in the world view is relatively high. There are some incoherence and logical errors in the content later on, and there are also more sci-fi settings in the latter part. Logically inconsistent

The plot is well paced, a pretty good work

The writing style is natural, the content is not brainless, and it looks good [Adored]

It's a very interesting subject matter, but I feel like there is no passion in the later part. I hope the quality of the author's subsequent plots will get better and better, and include some things that children will like to watch.

Good-looking and novel themes

As long as it looks good, that's it

Come on! So pretty!

Surprisingly good

Beautiful, no need to say more

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration] [adoration]

The writing is meticulous and the plot is reasonable. It's a hit! ! !

A very good book with a relatively novel subject matter

It's good to watch, there's nothing wrong with the plot, characters, etc., And it's also very novel.

Well written, with good characterization

It's good-looking and not mindless.

Nice to watch, love to watch, like [like][like][like]

It's beautiful, but why is there no one there [exploration]

Please work hard, the author~ The overall writing style is flawless, and I look forward to a novel of 2 million words.

The pace is moderate, there are games, and the content is good. As long as you want to knock it, you can knock it with wood and stone. , Needless to say which two should I knock?