After Forced Marriage, the Sick Beauty Just Wants to Survive

Those who attack and control will run, those who are controlled will run, those who are tired of stupidity will run, those who hate the repetitive plots will run, those who read the text with their brains, those who can't stand the aggrieved plot, and those who don't like femininity, weakness and condensation will run even more.

It's really delicious! ! The protagonist is really written as a weak, childlike sick beauty, I like it very much! Big cheers for the author!

Author, I understand the story you want to express and the protagonist's emotional journey, but I would like to give you some suggestions: The plot lines you updated throughout the article all revolve around Gong Shou and Lin. Don't they have any social interactions? All the things that happened to Shou happened in that villa? The only thing in his mind was to find a way to make Gong hate him and then Shou went home. From the beginning of being obedient, obedient and afraid, he suddenly turned into indifference towards Gong (although there were two or three sentences to explain this) and the sudden system The reminder that Shou is a time traveler is not very well connected, as if there is only a shell but no soul. Every day when the two of them open their eyes, Shou: I want to go home, but I have a little attachment to Gong, I can't let him go, I can only be more indifferent to him to numb my feelings. Gong: Why is he afraid of me? He just wants to push me away... Not to mention Lin, who acts like an NPC every day, either coming to the villa to deliver documents or attending a banquet with Gong, and then a series of bloody plots from ancient novels happen... But the author knows that they are human beings... The complexity of human nature, the diversity of people, the changes in society, and life must go on. You are not just trapped in this house and watching the three of them perform a puppet show. You have to construct a complete social system. Since you want to write about the emotional expressions of boys, you should first dissect them from the different ways of thinking and emotional expression of men and women, and understand them thoroughly. They are not male and female protagonists cloaked in gender! ! ! Their relationship and development are like three robots with preset personalities, language expressions, and body movements. They will automatically connect and talk when the time comes... Generally speaking, the overall framework is not perfect enough, the details are not rich enough, the transformation and connection between the characters and the plot are not skillful enough, and everything expressed is a bit impatient. Of course, this is my own opinion and understanding of this article. If you, the author, have your own expression logic and way of thinking, just treat it as if I didn't say it... Don't worry, I don't mean to give low marks with any malicious intent, it's just a friendly opinion. Of course, author, some of what you wrote is really good. Keep this love and harmony part, and throw away the cumbersome and boring "puppet show". Come on

It's very interesting, the plot is very rich, and it's exciting🧠

I opened this book casually on the recommendation list, and it tied the book in less than three hours in one night. The plot is very compact and the development is very fast (personally think. And when I read it, I felt so unhappy [crying] that I kept crying. Of course, I also like this kind of book (little

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I really, really liked this book. I read it for four hours and it ended suddenly. It was so sudden. But I still want to give it four stars. It really made me heartbroken throughout the whole process. The only shortcoming is... [Crying]

It's really very good to read. I've always been very picky about reading, but I couldn't stop reading this book. It's a pity that it's not updated. I really want to see their daily life after marriage after defeating the system [crying][crying][crying][crying][crying]

In fact, this book is really good. There are so many reversals and some very delicate emotions that can be written without using a frame. Although there are many descriptions in the passage that are repetitive, at least the previous content makes me feel very novel and I have never seen it before. It's a pity that this book was cut off halfway. When I first read it, I thought that this book only had so much content, and I would definitely finish it quickly. I didn't expect this...

It's so beautiful. I was very nervous when I watched it. I was always worried about Shi An.

The author is great, do you know? Today I was criticized for memorizing history and not chatting with my friends. No matter how hard I tried, I couldn't get into No. 1 Middle School. I feel so bad that I haven't fallen asleep yet. I thought about reading this novel to divert my attention, but it turned out that I felt even worse after reading it. I didn't finish it... [Crying][crying][crying][crying][crying][crying][crying][crying][crying]

I really like this book. I didn't expect the end... But it's still good. At least I can understand the meaning of the whole book. Shi An is a good baby, Jiang Yu is good, Jiang Shi 99. I hope the author can come up with the next good work [crying]

Highly recommended. Well, this book is quite good. It's just a pity at the end (it's not finished) [Crying] The details and characters are very vivid. [Like] Overall, it's a good read. Recommend! ! ! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

Very nice! Very exciting!

It's not bad, but it's not completely finished. I hope the author can fill this hole in the future.

I didn't finish it, I was sad [crying] I finally found a book I was interested in [crying]

After reading the first half, I felt a little bit sour. Well, I'll wait until I'm done reading it before continuing my review.

It's very interesting to watch, the plot has many twists and turns, and the characters are very interesting. I highly recommend it.

It's good to watch, but the ending... It would be great if it was finished. The young couple is so sweet.

Five stars for the new book, I like the setting

It's so good, the more you look at it, the better it looks

I like it so much, it's so beautiful, [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

It's very interesting, please give it a thumbs up to the author [blowing kiss]

It feels pretty good, I like it

Nice. Totally hit me XP

Very pretty, not bad

I like it hahahahahahaha, it tastes right I was wrong😭I cut it in half

I like to watch it more and more from now on

The author is afraid of a bad ending. It's so good, why not have a more complete ending?

There's nothing wrong with it except that it's not updated yet.