Open Up********

The combat power is too low. Even if it is to write more fighting scenes, Xing's combat power will not be reduced to this. It feels like a peer has gained a little bit of power, and there is always a feeling like using AI, and the writing of Xing here is a bit too silly. Even if she behaves stupidly in some plots, she will not directly tell her weaknesses to a few people she has just met. Apart from being fond of digging through trash cans, there is a faint OOC feeling everywhere.

The plot is smooth and the writing is natural. However, I still have a suggestion: at least increase the combat power of the star a little bit.