Jobless: Reincarnated as an Illegitimate Son, Is Paul My Father?

It's very interesting to see that other Wuzhi fandoms are all about the main character practicing magic, and some also write about how to practice swordsmanship as an assistant. It's the first time I've seen this type of professional swordsmanship. It's quite novel. I guess it's the ancestor who wrote a different style of opening chapter in Wuzhi fanfic. Some people may not like this style, but I often read unofficial fan fiction, which is a novel feeling. The protagonists written by others have indeed written all kinds of dazzling magic, but the protagonist in this book, the kind of close combat is too comfortable. Rudy will never be able to defeat the dragon god in his whole life. Although the upper limit of magic is endless, if swordsmanship really reaches a certain place, it really feels stronger than magic.

This is currently the most interesting of the jobless fanfics I've read, although I've always been resistant to having multiple female protagonists? If the emotional scenes were better written, it would be acceptable. I hope the author can write smoothly. The protagonist is a swordsman, which is an interesting setting. If Luo Qixi is accepted, how will the human god be sealed in the subsequent plot? Rudy and Luo Qixi's daughter Lala is the Guan Jian of Boss Long's seal of the human god.

The writing is quite good, but I have to point out one mistake. The protagonist Ankylosaurus was born in the third year of the calendar year 403, and was only ten years old when he arrived in the royal capital in Chapter 42. According to the setting, Princess Ariel (404) was only 7 years old at this time, and Luke (405) was only 8 years old. Ariel's image should be that of a blonde lolita, not a lady. But her sadism still exists, but it may not be as playful. It can only be said that the author still thought too little when writing it. Also, I would like to remind the author to pay attention to the timeline and age of this article. According to your setting, the protagonist is ten years old, so there is a 2 to 3-year age difference between him and Luke, Ariel, and Isaruti. The protagonist is older than them. Of course, I know that people in the world of jobless reincarnations are very precocious, but I still find it difficult when Luke calls the protagonist a child. According to his character, he should be called "this guy." In addition, Isaruti had a very reserved personality when she was a child. She relied more on her brother Dantoris, and the two of them usually sparred a lot. I really hope that her brother will play a role in the next story. If the author is really too lazy to change the character setting of this article, I will read it as a parallel world. Best wishes to the author! [Laughing]

After reading Chapter 7, let me first say that the summary has great potential, but the details are interesting without going into details. Then there is the catch. Blaser looks very similar to Rudy, and Paul said he was looking for his biological father. Why didn't Senise doubt it, and Blaser didn't suspect that Paul was his father? I remember Graylat's green eyes were very iconic in Jobless ( And Rudy was only 6 years old in Ankylosaurus year 413 There are many shortcomings, and overall there is a lot of room for improvement. I will take a look again.

I think it's OK. It feels like it's the first time the author has written a book and it's already good enough to attract others.

It's a pretty good book, but it overwhelms the combat power of Kyrenu, the Water God, etc. The assessment is just like Alice's Sword God. Really, it doesn't make any difference if you take Kyrenu or not.

It looks very comfortable, nothing poisonous

Don't break the ball

Not bad, come on, I'll take care of it first

Good book, well written

It feels okay and looks pretty good

Not bad, pretty good-looking

Na exploded, violent explosion

It's okay, I can read it The more I write, the better I get, and I have corrected a lot of previous mistakes.

So far, it looks pretty good, a good product.

Very beautiful, but the output is very low

Author, please do it faster [angry]

Okay, I just want to ask how many female protagonists there are, are they the same three as mentioned in the introduction?

It's not bad. The first few chapters are the author's original creations, but the turning point at the end should follow the main plot.

I've read more than 20 chapters so far, and I feel it's okay. At least the writing is not so white that it can be read. Just support it.

Now that I have read Chapter 56, I wonder if the protagonist will join the Dragon God. If so, what will happen to the Water God? After all, he is also a master

It's very well written, a rare treasure among jobless people.

It looks great, please give it a thumbs up to the author, I read it back and forth two or three times [laughing]

If you like Isaruti, you must read it [laughs]

It's very, very beautiful. The author should be able to finish it [crying]

Don't you still want to love summer with this trend?

I only saw it later. 👀The flaws at the front of the book review have been improved a lot. Those who like being unemployed can read it.

There are a lot of jobless novels recently. Isn't it so casual that Lu Mao is kidnapped at the beginning? Why don't you round it up a bit? Please update more from the author. There are still 10 chapters in one day.