One Punch*********

The writing is okay, but there are a few things that are not according to the original setting, but it is okay. As for the heroine's suggestion that the protagonists become Zog Niang and Tatsumaki Lily [smirk] [smile] [smile]

There is more green in the north and south of Hakimimo, but it is difficult to be green in Axiga, hahagu, Ouma Zili, ding dong chicken, ding dong ding ah Hakimi, the big dog is one by one, the bigger the big wave is, the harder it is to be green, hahagu, Ouma Zili, Mambo Kimi is one by one. ——"Here comes Kimiha"

Overall, it's still good, come on

Good-looking and good-looking. It doesn't matter to me if there are multiple female protagonists or single female protagonist or no female protagonist. As long as the protagonist is strong, it will be fun.

If you want to see the protagonist transform into Zog Niang, you can just apply it.

It looks good, the author will listen to readers' opinions

I think it's okay. The main theme is quite new. As long as it doesn't collapse, it's good.

Pretty good, pretty

It feels okay, the subject matter is novel

It's beautiful, and the subject matter is quite novel.

Don't worry about the plot and timeline, as long as it's reasonable.

So far, I think it's okay. There's too little content to talk about. I'll re-evaluate the plot in the future.

It's quite novel, except that some of the settings are a bit unclear.

Ah, after doing so many One Punch Man fanfics, I finally found one I can read.

It's a very novel subject matter, and the writing is very good so far. Except for a few shortcomings in details, there are currently no major shortcomings. I personally hope that the two heroines, Tatsumaki Kazog, will be