The Martial Arts Genius Is in Trouble, I Have No Bottleneck in My Breakthrough

The first part is really well written, the writing is smooth, the foreshadowing is natural, and the climax is even more beautiful. What about the second part? The protagonist practices the turtle to pretend to be a pig, and has reached great mastery to become a pig spirit. Readers who like ninjas are in luck, so don't worry!

So far it looks pretty good, there aren't many flaws, the writing and plot are smooth, but the volume is too little. It's a bit long-winded. I haven't even started writing dozens of chapters for a single trial, but I can finish it by the palace exam.

Start as Orion - enter the martial arts gym - everyone looks down upon - rise to prominence - the martial arts gym is proud of the protagonist - new maps and new forces - still look down upon - has some investment value - rise to prominence and lick all kinds of things [face covering] Hahaha I made myself laugh so hard

It's good to watch, the plot is tight, and the climax is constant. There is no water character, not too much nonsense, just do it. The routine is still classic. Upgrade flow, change the map, and the book wasteland can still be read. It's just too much fighting. Can the protagonist enjoy it? Keep fighting. It's a bit boring. Pretend to be cool. Enjoy life. Take it easy occasionally. Keep up the good work and look forward to updates.

Excellent work, author, please hurry up, the later part will definitely be popular, I might as well add a few female protagonists later, it's too lonely to be alone. There are too few updates in one day. It's gone before I read it. Don't go to bed and write more chapters if you feel sleepy.

The protagonist's character is ok. It's time to hide and take action. It's just that the author's method of advancing the plot is a bit forced. It's all about what the protagonist is forced to do. In fact, a novel with this level of proficiency can be slowed down. Write some semi-group portraits and increase the protagonist's proficiency to make the story slow and urgent. Let at least half or a small half of the protagonist's decisions be based on what he wants in his heart rather than being forced by the current situation. Come on, I'm optimistic about you.

I have seen the latest chapter of Chapter 202. I haven't seen much poison yet. It is a rare high-quality article from Tomato. I can continue to collect it for a while. Of course, if you feel it's not suitable, you don't have to watch it. 😁😁😁 I saw Chapter 230. 😁😁😁

The writing is pretty good and can arouse people's positive emotions. The protagonist is a decisive person who kills and will not wait for the other party to fully show his malice before killing the other party.

It's okay. If you're really bored, you can read this book. The only bad thing is the passers-by. No matter what the protagonist does, no matter whether the protagonist has a breakthrough in strength, they don't believe it. Even if they beat several characters who are stronger than those passers-by, they don't believe it. They have to wait and slap their hands on the face. It hurts before they believe that the protagonist is really strong. I think in general reality, there should be no passers-by who slap the protagonist on the face.

It's an okay novel with this rating. It's not brainless, and the protagonist is a bit sluggish, with no obvious poisonous points. There is a heroine, but it needs to be done in the back. Those who want to improve their qualifications in the front are explained in the back, not unnecessary but required. It may start a little slower in the front but pick up later. It's not an AI novel, and the author is relatively active.

The writing is very good, there are no peeing spots in the whole process, the logic is clear, and there are not many bugs. I suggest that old bookworms can catch up and update it [Like]

I listened to it in one sitting. Although the story is not very new, it is well told. The author is quite good.

The writing is good, the golden fingers are powerful, and the pig's feet are used very reasonably. Kill decisively and take revenge overnight. Be decisive in doing things without procrastination. The number of words is too small, so that's all I can comment on.

Five ⭐ Recommendations Plot flow Although the plot is a bit cliche, it's worth watching

Once you swipe it, you will be lucky. It looks good. Please support it!

I like the protagonist's character and style of doing things.

Wisdom, courage, and good books. . . . .

Great, great, great, great

Good, good, good, good

When do you create your own method, do you always use someone else's?

It's okay, I could read the book in one sitting.

After looking at a few pictures, he threatened to clean it up directly, which was neat enough! The main thing is that the parents are healthy, no matter what happens later, the five elements will be sent first! ! !

It's a good read, it doesn't overwhelm the fighting force, it kills the clan decisively without procrastination. Similar novels can be ranked as high-quality. I read the new book in one sitting. Please add more five stars.

Just when I heard something wonderful, it stopped abruptly. Please, please update quickly.

I feel like this book is pretty good. The plot is a bit classic, but it's not exactly the same. It looks pretty good. Anyway, you'll get better if you can endure it and read later.

Okay, support me

Not bad, it counts as food and grass

Very very beautiful

You can take a look at Shu Huang

Then the Li family won't kill them?