Broken Iron************

It can be written quite well, but it feels a bit strange to call Xing a pioneer. Why should she be called a pioneer when she already has a name? Moreover, Himeko called her a pioneer when she was fighting Doommon, and she hadn't joined yet.

It's really good, at least so far, the writing is very delicate, and some plots are really deeply rooted in people's hearts. When describing the villain, can you describe the villain's motivations a little deeper, whether it is extreme evil or helpless pleading, and portray the details of the characters. It would be better if it can bring out the changes in the protagonist's mental journey.

To be honest, I quite like this book called Xiu Xian × Beng Tie. It is more acceptable than those books that do everything under the banner of great love. It's closer to the book about cultivating immortality, but the author doesn't know how to write it.

Well, basically I made all the mistakes I should have made, but the main issue didn't pose much of a problem to me. You can read it as a fictional historian, after all, you are a fan. In most Bengtie worlds, the Bengtie in the game and the Bengtie in the setting are two different situations.

Give yourself a thumbs up

Regarding the cultivation of immortality, the author, you can read "Into the Cultivation of Immortality". Tomato has a book about the linkage of "Into the Cultivation of Immortality" and "Beng Tie" but unfortunately it has been discontinued. Author, you don't understand enough about the cultivation of immortality now. Since you have determined that it is a modern online novel about the cultivation of immortality, then you must read the book "Into the Cultivation of Immortality" by the author. I believe it will definitely bring you rewards.

So far, it seems that the writing is really good, the collision between the system of cultivating immortals and the iron collapse system, the protagonist is well portrayed, he is a very sophisticated cultivator, he does not have any surprises, no abstractions, he thinks twice before doing things, he just focuses on the key points when he makes a move, his moves are not fancy, he is a reliable adult man who is very stable and experienced.

It's good-looking, and the protagonist has great potential [laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

Is there a heroine? I hope not. It's okay if there is. Don't be Liuying. [Smile] I am the Yingxing Party

The theme of cultivating immortality and the fate of collapsing iron are well integrated. The self-created planet story also makes sense. The character has no ooc You pass!

Great, the protagonist is a serious person [Like]

It's okay. The only thing is, does this one have a female protagonist?

It's not bad. It's readable. It would be better if it were longer. I hope it doesn't end up halfway✋🏻😠🤚🏻

It's beautiful. I want to fast forward until I can't even speak [laughs evilly]

In fact, according to common sense, this book currently only has a four-star level, but I like the extra chapter very much, and it received a five-star rating [like]

It's awesome. I didn't just follow the main line. It should be interesting to see if it doesn't collapse later. The author is Sang Tonic 😭

Good looking, good looking, good looking, good looking

So beautiful!! (I'm not very good at writing)

Not bad, the family man aspect

Good and interesting

Shipping on Christian Day

Please give me the original cover picture, meow●ｽv●

Hiss, I didn't pay attention at first, 230,000 words and 36 chapters? ! ! [Shock]