Cyberpunk: The Living Legend V

It's too childish. The Night City described by the author is just a slightly chaotic neighborhood, and the protagonist's behavioral logic, let alone in Night City, is considered a close brother in modern times [face covering] [face covering] [face covering]

It's okay, but it lacks the flavor of Night City. Since the author doesn't have any bids for female protagonists, he will accept them all. Don't do the trick of giving away girls.

It can be seen that the author has never played cyberpunk. There are so many places that I don't know what to complain about. It's too difficult. Claire simply found no such person in the next life. The locals are too civilized. The gangsters from the Tiger Claw gang don't even have uniforms. Instead, they use steel pipes. And since you dare to mess with people who were born in the past, the first reaction of the locals when they see you suddenly disappear is Sianwei Stan instead of a monster. The protagonist does not look like someone who has played 2077. He wouldn't even complain about Rogge in his heart, and when Rogge questioned whether he could do it, he just threw out the Mantis Knife and said you can check it out. I'm so awesome. Barabala (not the original text here). The correct thing for a Night City native to do is to let Rogge directly sweep him. And when he saw Rogge, the protagonist didn't even think about or mention Johnny. The rock boy cried, and he didn't even mention Jack.

Is the heroine Sasha? What about the original storyteller of V? Will he accept it? Will there be a female V in 2077?

It has a lot of hooks and strong strength, but I feel that the plot details and connection are slightly problematic. It is not as attractive as the slowly escalating 2077 novel. Is this the curse of being a sect disciple? Being invincible makes it even more boring.

You are so arrogant because you are afraid of this and that. Have you ever played games? Ah, you can't write this kind of novel just by playing a game. Don't you dare to kill the biotechnology building directly from above? What are you afraid of? You are such a big cheat. You jumped down from above and made yourself look embarrassed. Is this how you play games? You can just use the plug-in to fly up to the Huangban Building. You kill from above. Do you know how popular it is? The writing is still not good.

Very good, I really like Edgewalker. But the AI ​​flavor is too strong. It would be better if you are willing to spend time reconstructing the sentences to remove the AI ​​flavor. AI always likes to use words such as "unconscious..." Or "xxx with xxx that can't be hidden" [laughing and crying] It is recommended that the author read it sentence by sentence several times after generating it [love]

Brother, give me five more chapters. I'm dying. Please, brother, just one more chapter. I won't touch it again. Please, brother, really, just one chapter. I swear I will never touch this again. I really can't stand it anymore. I'm tossing and turning now. I beg you, brother. Please give me one more chapter. Brother, please give me one more chapter. , I'm dying, please, brother, I feel like there are ants crawling on me, I feel like I'm shaking all over, I can't breathe, please, brother, just give it, just one more chapter, I won't touch it again, please, brother, really, just one chapter, I swear I will never touch this thing again [crying] [crying] [crying]

Is a tiger playing house with a group of sheep? [Awkward laugh]

It looked good, but then I saw that the author wrote original characters, and I have some suggestions. Don't write a bunch of original characters at once. If possible, try to have both good and bad characters, and the numbers are not much different. I have seen a fan before, and a bunch of original characters, six or seven at a time, and they were all villains, not once or twice. The difference in perception.