Reborn as Gu Long: I Evolve into a God by Sleeping

Not bad, but the description of the protagonist is a bit childish, but it is also a way to downplay the contradictions, which can be considered good and bad. Okay~_~, these updated two pictures feel like the protagonist treats the protagonist as a dog, rubbing his face and letting others touch him. It makes me sick.

Well, the writing is okay, and the setting is quite novel, but the author has integrated too many elements, including Western fantasy, Eastern prehistoric times, modern urban elements, and rules-based elements. I don't know if it will collapse in the future. For now, there is no big problem. But, for now. These elements are written in varying lengths, with Eastern Prehistoric being the longest, and other elements being written in just a few chapters. It feels like there is no outline. I write whatever comes to my mind. I would like to give the author some suggestions here, hoping to optimize them. [Exploration] The writing in the first few chapters is okay, but in the later chapters, I feel that AI is used, and the left and right brains compete with each other. If AI is not used, it means that the author has no outline. If the accuracy of the previous chapters is maintained, the score should not be too low. Okay, now revise it, this is written by AI, and the left and right brains compete purely with each other.

It's not bad. There's basically nothing wrong with it. It's just the mental energy aggregation, the ability to refine falsehoods into reality, and the logic behind it. All in all, it's pretty good, and it's quite a life-oriented thing. Looking forward to what the author will write next, update soon

Blessed are those who have never seen Li Jiayu [laughing] It's so good-looking, as good-looking as The Summoner of Darkness [laughing]

It looks good. I love watching it. Hurry up and get more.

Why did he suddenly change from a young lady to a girl (•Д•) I can't accept the sexual reassignment, so I'll withdraw first.

The subject matter is novel, the writing is good, the brains are fighting each other, the male protagonist is a gender-changer, and he is also very naked😋Be careful before entering

It's okay, but sometimes the left and right brains fight each other. At first, I used spiritual manifestations to fill my stomach crazily. Later, I said that only the taste was the same as if I hadn't eaten. Also, the corners were purified and divided into forks. Later, I said the spiral horns

It's not bad. If you maintain this life-oriented atmosphere, it's not bad. To paraphrase Douyin, it's the large-scale documentary "I Am Here", "Monster Hunter Journey to the West", daily life in the modern world. Not bad, but I don't like the protagonist changing into a female, and I don't like the latest weird copy either.

Overall, it's good. It's quite comfortable. I finished reading it without realizing it. There is a problem with the front and back settings. In the front, it's just the practice of pretending to become real, and in the back, it's just the mental power condensing into reality. When you enter other worlds, your body is still in the same place and time is paused, but time is not paused later. Ah, until the latest chapters, it feels like the body has traveled together. If this problem is solved, it will be perfect.