Endless Dust and Snow

Read Chapter 11. Let's briefly evaluate it. There is a strong sense of literary youth, which makes the writing and readability of this book naturally the best for Tomato, but at the same time, it also tests the reader's patience. But this is an online article. As a new author, if you are not famous and do not make appropriate compromises to cater to the market, you will not be able to retain readers. From the introduction to the first three chapters and the title of the work, it is difficult to catch the reader's attention, and the overall narrative pace is slow. Of course, maybe because I am a student, I am more tolerant of this type of article. However, the logic of the plot is really lackluster. Not only are some plots clichéd, but also some places are too stream-of-consciousness or the settings are not rigorous enough, making it quite nonsensical to read. Although I have always believed that there are no clichéd plots, only clichéd authors. But I personally feel that the author's writing power has not yet been able to support his plot conception. Whether it is the narrative rhythm, plot logic or description, it needs to be strengthened. Of course, the author insists on writing, and his desire to write a good article can be seen. Looking forward to the author's subsequent improvement in writing skills. If there is a more exciting performance later, I will go back and comment again. In addition, although I seem to have criticized a lot above, but the love is deep, the responsibility is deep. I still like the setting and protagonist of this article. It feels like a brainwave article. Whether it is right or not depends on the readers themselves.

It's super beautiful, and the writing is very good. It can be said to be a great guarantee in the environment of monsters and monsters in Tomato. The writing is very delicate and touching, allowing readers to think deeply, allowing the imagination to spread into the novel to observe, to see every plant and tree depicted in the novel, to explore the inner world of the characters, and to penetrate the reader's mind. It can dig deep into the meaning of the protagonist's actions in an absurd world and watch for the future. But it is obviously not very attractive in Western Persimmon. It is difficult to follow the opening chapter, and the sense of substitution is not very strong, making it a bit hazy for readers. After all, it is fantasy. Too much content piled up at once may make readers unable to remember the causes and consequences or it may not be reasonable. The quality is absolutely superb, the writing style is impeccable in my short experience, the world view is very good, and the heavy topics are more emotional and resonant. Wu Chen stays upright, hoping that she can get the warmth and sharing of the future that will eventually belong to "her", and I also wish the author and teacher to write better and better.

The writing is meticulous and the character descriptions are in place, but the world background is not clearly described. It gives people a hazy feeling and is difficult to get into. I think it can describe the general world view and explain some settings, otherwise it will be confusing. The writing is very good. The main thing is to add a little bit. The explanation is to give an introduction to those cultivations, skills, etc., Such as the ranking of cultivations. Another point is that the color feels lighter and darker. The description of the color is not very detailed, and the picture quality is relatively poor. However, the story I want to express is OK and it is worth watching 🤔

This is also highly recommended for everyone to take a look at. Don't be fooled by the ratings. The reason why this book has no ratings is because its ratings have not been suppressed. They are all high ratings, but it has not been reviewed. Then what? Below are some of my own feelings. (Don't criticize if you don't like it) Because I watched it in a skip, mainly just to go through the general plot. Therefore, it is difficult to give too much reference for specific details and emotional descriptions. But as far as some of the content and plots I watched, there are also detailed summaries. But from my perspective, I don't know why, but I always feel that the protagonist has a certain sense of fragmentation in her personality (the difference between before and after is a bit big). Maybe it's because I skipped the movie and didn't know the details of the changes in the middle. But I hope that the author can write an overall reflection and the general direction of the plot after the volume is completed, so that we can have a reference. Then what? I see that the author has now reached the "Final Chapter" volume, and I feel that the author is going to write the finale directly. I hope the author writes more, because I feel the plot is better. It's just that the writing style still has some shortcomings in the early stages (if some readers mind, you can skip the first volume and just go through the details and the plot like me). But later on, the writing becomes quite good, and I highly recommend everyone to read it.

I have only read a small part of this book so far. What this book talks about is very grand and heavy. Judging from the introduction of the novel, Wuchen has to go through a lot of hardships, and the last remnant of the era also reflects that this book is only for one person. This book also has some shortcomings. The description of some paragraphs is strange. These shortcomings are not enough to cover up its excellence. Maybe it's because I've read a lot of books, and the article is quite tolerant, but the author has big problems with the handling of some plots, and the narration of some plots is not clear enough. However, it can be seen that the author's writing skills are not bad, and he is full of love for his characters, but the characterization is not enough to be deeply rooted in people's hearts. He prefers stream-of-consciousness writing, but I still like this book very much. I hope the author will continue to improve in the writing process and you will not lose your love. After all, the youthful spirit is a non-renewable thing!!! Tingzhou is covered with reed leaves and has shallow streams in the cold sand zone. Twenty years have passed since the South Tower. The boat under the willow tree is still not stable, but it will last for a few days, and the Mid-Autumn Festival is here again. The yellow crane cuts off the head of the river. Is the old friend still there today? The old country is filled with new worries. Wanting to buy sweet-scented osmanthus and carry wine together is not like a young man's journey Come on, the new author I am optimistic about 🤭

Beautiful, highly recommended. The quality of the book is very high!

The writing is very good, but you arranged the order of Y for me! Why are Chapters 60, 71, 72 and 323 arranged as the first chapter? I thought about it for a long time and thought I missed something. Why can't I understand it? When I looked at Chapter 60, I saw Chapter 41 at the top and Chapter 71 at the bottom, which made me laugh out loud 🙂

How dare a mortal dare to point fingers at the practicing sect? Not to mention Yuanying, even a golden elixir can kill the entire royal family. How dare they?

One thought, one stroke, one thing, outstanding literary talent, vivid characters, concise but not simple writing, just right, deep but not trivial thoughts, easy to understand (but a good article should have thought-provoking and not obvious points). At first it was depressing and immersive, but it gradually got better after Chapter 20. The sect of cultivating immortals in the article was slightly inferior to the dynasty, showing an alternative world of cultivating immortals. My suggestion is to initiate. Although tomatoes are tolerant to the heroine, they cannot eat the chaff.

The writing is really the best in a mixed environment like Tomato. However, I feel that the tragic foreshadowing of Jueling's chapter is a little deliberate. It may be that I am not used to watching this kind of plot that forces the protagonist to make a decision through the death of people around him. However, the overall plot is still very touching. I hope the final chapter can have a satisfactory and plain ending.