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When you look at the title of the book, you might think it's a book about Long Ao Tianwen, which is about being a dog licker just for the sake of doing tasks, but after reading it, it is actually a fast-paced novel that can make people calm down and read the book. The description of emotions is very good, the characters are well grasped, and there is no plot of you love me and I love you. Every small world is really a story, immersive but never flat. It is not OOC and has a good foreshadowing of the characters. It vividly interprets the redemption. It is a true story where you can see the male protagonist's perspective in the fast travel. The female protagonist lives brightly and brightly after being redeemed, instead of living as a task object. I think if there are no major changes in the future, it will have a score of 8.5 Or more.

The male protagonist does not clean up his innocence, but only works silently. The story is wonderful and heartwarming, with happiness in the ordinary. Every wife in the world has her own development. Sometimes there are very touching words, which make people look forward to having such a beautiful life and parents. The male protagonist's task is to heal himself. This book also seems to be healing the readers, as if they have seen their ideal parents. It is a warm and heart-warming article, igniting the flame of yearning for a better life in the readers' hearts, and positive energy! Don't get stuck in the past and focus on the happiness and beauty in front of you.

Although I have only read more than 20 chapters, I have some ideas and it is very well written! The writing style is also very good, and I just happened to read another book where the male protagonist is about to go through time. There is no other meaning. Both books are equally good-looking, and the plot and writing are very good. I just suddenly had different feelings, so I want to mention it. I feel like reading this book so far. I feel that the protagonist is saving the "original owner's evil deeds and harming others" while also saving his own emotional "inadequacy". Therefore, I can feel that the protagonist is the kind of person who doesn't talk much but does a lot, giving people a very solid feeling. That book will be more emotionally touching. I'm not dissatisfied or anything, I'm just so happy and feel so lucky to have read these two books! Very happy! ! !

The content of the article is very heart-warming, and it will slowly lead the whole family to live a good life. It is not the traditional article that opens and closes with countless golden fingers, and the purpose is to complete the system tasks. It warms the heart of people who read it. It can be seen from the content of the article that the author is very attentive, has carefully understood the relevant knowledge of the era, and is very thoughtful. It can also be seen that the author himself is a person with a lot of knowledge. He has a certain degree of professionalism in various narratives such as mechanical design, but it is easy to understand and comfortable to read.

I feel that the author is not a newbie, nor is he imitating AI. The writing is smooth, the details are touching, and the pace is slow and not sloppy. I feel that I can really learn something. The protagonist does not beg for forgiveness, but uses actions to prove his determination. With rationality and foresight beyond ordinary people, the protagonist is not a puppet of the system. The system is more like the guide of the story, leading the protagonist to learn the warmth and sensibility that ordinary people should have. The protagonist has a great heart, does not stick to trivial matters, and has no hook-ups. At present, he is only devoted to his original wife. His son and daughter are not props, and they have a complete life growth path. However, after watching a world, I always felt a little empty in my heart. I felt that there should be some transition between the story and the new story, a somewhat seamless connection, but it is innocuous. It is a breath of fresh air in the tomato healing system. There is no abuse for the sake of abuse. I only saw a beautiful story in which Tongtian helped turn the tide and finally brought the family to live in harmony.

It's okay, it's just like writing an essay, not like a novel [face covering], maybe it's an AI essay

Yes, the male protagonist's mentality from completing the task to having real feelings for the people and things in the small world is rare in fast-traveling novels. Many male protagonists in fast-traveling novels just go there to complete the task and have no feelings for everything in the small world.

Super pretty! The writing style is light. When I read such an excellent fast-traveling article in my anxious life, I feel that my life has become happier! Because I am still in school, I have limited support every day, but I hope it will get better and better! Don't stop updating [sending my heart] [sending my heart]

The first story, I think is quite well written. The only shortcoming is that the timeline is a bit messy. When the child entered school, I remember it was 1997. Later, the child went to junior high school, and it was said to be 1987. Everything else was fine. The original owner had left for several years. After the protagonist came, he immediately took the train back and rushed back. And no, he was very familiar with his wife from the beginning. After all, he was a strange soul. He was very close and familiar from the beginning. It did seem weird. After the protagonist came, he and his wife sat in the same room until dawn. It was only after the wife asked that she sleep in the same bed. The two of them were a little embarrassed. The protagonist was slowly moved by his wife. Finally, he got a marriage certificate and officially got together. It was good, but the gold finger was a bit lacking. At the beginning, he exchanged points for more than 80 yuan. After that, he kept getting certificates bit by bit. He thought he would do business. But unexpectedly, he entered a small factory and has been doing design. In the end, the son and daughter-in-law all went their own way, including the granddaughter. In the second world, the daughter and wife were so seriously ill. As a result, there was no golden finger that could be cured. The only golden finger was actually hacking skills. Well, this is also possible. If there is a space, I can store some pills and the like. It can save lives. I can store some gold, silver, and jades. I can also exchange them for money at critical moments. I don't have to carry world consciousness. I always pay attention, and I am afraid of being expelled if I use too many points. Overall, it's pretty good.

It's good to watch. I like the kind of invincible male protagonist, but it's the kind of subtle one that survives in the big world and hides in the city, without being very obtrusive. (Now I want to see the kind of female protagonist who is a bit abused and the male protagonist who comes to change the present). The relationship between the male and female protagonists is also plain and warm, and then a little sweet [flying kiss] [admiration] [admiration] [flying kiss]

It's so good-looking, I really like it. It's the kind of flowing water, unlike some that are quick to wear, and the direct system will give you everything in one step. He is the male protagonist who has his own golden finger, that is, he has a strong ability, and then improves his life according to the current situation, and all the details are written very vividly, which makes people feel very picturesque. It's obviously a scumbag who has come to his senses, but so far both stories seem to be very heartwarming. Every story makes me cry [crying] It's so beautiful. I only like modern literature, so I only chose the modern literature aspect to read. The two that impressed me very deeply were one extending to trafficking and the other to animal rescue. The intention was very good and it was not preachy. Marvelous

The writing is flowing and the emotions are delicate. It is a rare Tomato quick time novel. I just can't read it. Please hurry up and update it. I don't know why the score is so low. I read a quick time travel book before and it was written like a running account. It also got a 9.1 Rating. I'm speechless😑

The author's writing style is quite good. The story is long and flowing, but there is nothing super. The male protagonist is also very responsible, but the character and story development process of each small world male protagonist are basically the same. This kind of warm and sweet story is very interesting, but it is also a bit peaceful and boring.

It's not inferior to some books with a score of 9.0 Or above. I was confused by the ratings at first. I read the reviews and then read the book. The content is not exaggerated at all. Goldfinger is not that strong, but people like the protagonist more. He has a truly kind nature. He is neither a saint nor extreme. It is very good.

The writing is good, and each chapter is well written. I just didn't like the chapter about the idol having a child from a secret marriage. If the idol also had a child from a secret marriage, then quit the industry!

The author of this book writes very well. You may not find it interesting at first, but the author's writing skills will immerse you into the storyline. The emotions are very restrained and delicate. It is very good. This book deserves to be read by more people.

Immersive time travel, no fixed CP, no cheats. In every world, the male protagonist lives a serious life and completes tasks seriously. In the process of completing the task, protect the task object and heal yourself.

What the author writes can be described as more than just delicate. It just moistens things and weaves a big net for you silently. When you are careless, it suddenly closes up and you feel a lot of pain. You don't know whether it is physical or psychological. Looks good, I recommend it!

I suspect that the author was cheated, but he only got 6.8 Points

I feel like the story is pretty good, but the description feels like Al's writing. The longer I read, the more obvious it becomes 🤣

Well written, I have the desire to read more

Not bad. The writing is very delicate and touching.

A very gentle book, without exaggeration and ups and downs, it just flows into your heart lightly. It shouldn't be rated so low. I can't bear to continue watching it, so I'll save my comments first and then watch it again. Come on, author!

It's well written, not exaggerated, not bloody.

I feel so comfortable reading this book! So comfortable! ! ! !

I don't understand why the score is so low. It's very interesting. In the beginning, the emphasis is on the emotional line, which is a bit boring, but later on, career development is more important than the emotional line. Every world is quite interesting.

The writing style is so delicate and well-written. The words can reach the bottom of your heart.

These chapters are very interesting, the male protagonist's IQ is online, and the author's writing is meticulous. It is a rare clear stream, but there are too many time-travel stories that cheat all the way and start at the peak. What I hate the most is that they are brainless and cool. There is no logic and no meaning. There is only a golden finger that defies the sky. Once you time-travel, you will be all-powerful and kill indiscriminately. There is no real struggle, no perseverance, and no growth that you can work out on your own. It's all just to show off. The more you look at it, the more numb you become. It's all a routine, leaving no trace of touch. This book is different. He is just an ordinary time traveler. In a strange world, with his own efforts, he slowly smoothes out his troubled life. There is no earth-shattering counterattack, no bloody exciting plot, but it has the most practical and healing power. In today's world full of impetuous and refreshing articles, there are too few people who do not follow the trend.

It's very good-looking, with delicate emotions. It's not about gold fingers, but about using the hero's own abilities to change lives. The overall tone is warm and eloquent, making people feel warm when watching it.

It's good-looking, the plot logic is clear, and the character settings fit well with the main plot. Recommended! Idols who don't like having children from hidden marriages The longer it is written, the longer it gets. The main character has very few roles, all of which are given to supporting characters. I can't understand it.