Curse Return: the Time-Stop Technique of the Girl with Strange Eyes

After careful consideration, I finally came to the conclusion that this book is really interesting, especially the description of Lu Bu fighting Sun Wukong for hundreds of rounds for Diao Chan. However, Xue Baochai is really too strong. If it weren't for Nuoshou's outer ring + Noxus guillotine, this wave of M4 six times strafing would have killed him. But I am more concerned about what Zhuge Liang said to the 108 monkeys in Huaguoshan, "Young man is proud, don't show off in front of your brother Liang", which shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkeys who knocked him to death with three sticks. All in all, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, and many foreshadowings. The fighting scenes feel like you are there, and the character descriptions are also very good~

It is indeed a better book in Tomato. It mainly controls the rhythm of the plot, and the progress of daily life and main plot. It is well detailed and detailed. Many authors of Tomato write books that are too complicated and cannot be completed at all. The main plot cannot be pushed forward, and there are a lot of other messy things. Then there is no OOC in the characters. I think it is better not to use OOC in the fanfic, because most people who read fanfic will have a certain degree of understanding of the original work and the characters of the original work. Basically, it's the first impression. If OOC is not written particularly well, it would be a demerit. Finally, it is the plot. The biggest highlight I have seen so far is Shi'er's part. Shi'er kills the protagonist and Riko first, angers Gojo Satoru and then uses the information gap to kill them. Then he takes the protagonist's body to collect the reward, and then comes the highlight of the protagonist. It is a very cool point. The process of this section is very different from the original work. The changes are very good. I look forward to what the first-hand author will write in the future.

The writing is quite good. The changes in butterfly in the high school, the interactions among the high school people, the daily descriptions, and the changes in the characters are all well written. It can be said to be a top-quality work before the Huaiyu chapter and the Huaiyu chapter. It can also be said to be more reasonable in the entire Shibuya Incident and the Death Return chapter. Although the Shinjuku Decisive Battle is not particularly exciting, it is excellent, but after finishing it, in the present Everyone in the high school insisted on writing the bad ending of Tokyo Tower when they heard that they were bound by Kensuo. It was even more inexplicable than the decisive battle in Shinjuku in 2.5 Being cut off by the mysterious space. It is recommended that readers ignore the ending chapter and the first extra chapter, otherwise it will affect the perception. If the next two extra chapters have true endings and read this fanfic, it can be regarded as a 9-point high-quality fanfic.

The writing is okay, but it seems a bit more everyday now, and there are still relatively few battle scenes, but Die Xinai is really funny [face-covering] [face-covering] No, there is a knife. I hate you Xiaomo [smile]

The writing is very good, the protagonist has flesh and bones, not some show-off machine, but can there be more HD endings? Why can't the protagonist change anything? ! !

Feeling lost, why feeling lost? After thinking for a long time, I suddenly realized that it is growth, and growth means losing something and gaining something. This feeling is better reflected in the reader's perspective. From the Nai whose legs and feet trembled when she saw the cursed spirit, but who innocently stepped on the grid of light and dark, and laughed and played with her classmates, to the one who could eradicate the cursed spirit with an expressionless face, Nai was still the same Nai, she just grew up, and even with the time realm, she could never go back. We cannot arrange all our experiences from childhood to adulthood into a book of less than 100 chapters. Life is too long, and we have lost some things and forgotten some of our growth. We are just moving forward, constantly losing and growing, and we cannot truly be indifferent. So, constant pain, constant crying, and finally numbness.

The protagonist is quite likable, and the description of the battle scenes is also good. It's worth watching (looking forward to the follow-up patch to strengthen the protagonist's spells [smile]). I really don't want it to end [crying]! Although some of the plots are a bit abrupt, overall it is still a masterpiece with no flaws, and it is definitely top-notch among Tomato's Cursed Returns fans.

It turned out that he was not married because he was dead. What a hell (but I don't think I should marry anyone even if I'm alive) [Petrified] The sky fell when I saw the ending. Good looking, recommended

It's good to watch. I've watched it with gusto even though I've never watched Spell Return.

It's a fairy tale among Juhui fanfics. The control of the plot is very smooth, and all the characters are non-OOC, which makes up for a lot of regrets in the original work. Even though the ending is a bit dark, it can be considered a tribute to Gojo Satoru. The beating of Sunuo is a must-have. My biggest pleasure in watching Jushui fanfics is the sayings of gods and the protagonist's fancy fighting of Sunuo [Eating Melon]

I really like the descriptions in this book. Whether it is the depression in the dark or the joy in the joy, I think it is similar to the original atmosphere created by the Spell Return. It is very restored. There is also Die Xina herself, who usually has nothing to do, but will protect the people around her at important moments because she does not want to have nothing. However, the tragedy of the ending seems to be able to be optimized, and the progress is a bit too fast, as if it is a reproduction of the original work in which Gojo was cut off in half. I am looking forward to the author's next work and hope that the characters can be changed.

In fact, Satoru is a bit OOC. For example, when he wanted to kill Jie before the Hundred Ghost Night Parade, Satoru would never take the initiative. When he found Xia Youjie on the street, he could have predicted what Jie would do, but still let him go.

I have read too many stories about rescue and making up for regrets. When I started reading this book, I thought the author would change those knives. After all, the heroine's warlock is about time. But when Riko died, especially in Chapter 68, I understood that the fate of the characters in the book cannot be easily reversed. They are all different. Jay, I feel sorry for him, but this is indeed the path he will take. In this book, there is a complete growth line for the heroine. Author, do you know that I have been crying? I can understand their fate, but I really cry for them. [Cry][cry][cry]

Yes, the final double ending is very good, but I personally think that the extra version is more suitable as the original ending, and is more in line with the image and relationship of the story and characters. The content is also good, and it can be regarded as a masterpiece. It can be recommended

The overall rhythm is very comfortable, and the characters and settings are basically in line with the original work and my expectations. I can't find any faults except that the ending is a bit uncomfortable. This ending makes me feel that 5t5 has cut ptsd in half, but overall I still like this book. It is 99% rare in fan fiction. [Blowing kiss]

The story starts from the year before the Huaiyu chapter, depicting the pure and sincere youthful friendship between the protagonist and Gojo, Natsuyou, and Glass, to the death of Riko Tennai, the protagonist and Gojo becoming the strongest, and finally Natsuyou and everyone completely parting ways, the entire clue is indispensable. Only when Riko dies will Tian Yuan gradually alienate to the side of the cursed spirit, which is the core premise for all subsequent conspiracies of Kensuo to unfold; without this past, there would be no series of main line conflicts such as the Shibuya Incident and the Return of Death, and the story would not be fully developed. The friendship between the protagonist and everyone in the college and the protagonist's own transformation and growth are very moving [Like]

It's a masterpiece. The plot advancement is in line with the original work, and everyone is not OOC. I feel that after watching the plot again, the main character is more exciting. The ending is a bit awkward. If you read the last chapter of the extra chapter as the real ending, it is the perfect Jushui fanfic in my mind. Come on, teacher.

I have to say, it is really a very good novel. In my opinion, this book is already very good in Tomato. It rarely makes me stay up all night until 9 o'clock to catch up with the progress. All in all, it is highly recommended and it is also very satisfying. Come more, come more

The protagonist fits the Jusukai worldview, whether it's spells, characters, or emotions. In my opinion, this book is the first-tier Jusui fanfic from foreign persimmons. I don't understand why the rating is so low.

I have a question. It seems that Gojo Satoru and the others didn't know how to expand the field when they were still at level one. Once the protagonist knows it, he should be at the special level. I remember that the anime also said that distinguishing the first level from the special level depends on whether they can do the field expansion.

It's great. I really like the author's character creation. It's very three-dimensional and full of emotions. Although the bad end made me a little sad, fortunately there is another line [Blowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss]. Can Xiao Nai help me remember it? [Cool]

Hao Chi, I haven't tasted such delicious work for a long time.

Overall, it's good enough for 5 stars. However, it's uncomfortable to put be in the main plot and he in the side story at the end. The main story of be is that I learned the essence of enlightenment in 2.5 Chapters. I can't be in the side story. I can send be first and then h as long as it is marked as a side story.

There is even a bad ending. The protagonist here has a strong sense of empathy, which made me feel deeply and unable to control myself. This book is well-written, and the four stars are because of the bad ending, huh~

This is my favorite fanfic so far

A little more, it's not enough

I saw the true ending and felt comfortable

I don't know much about reviews, but from a personal perspective, I really like this book.

I saw that BE was about to kill the author Lao Feng with the power of thunder, but I found that there was an HE episode behind me and I urgently stopped the knife😋

The 7.0 Rating is a bit low. It's a good fanfic.