Dual Transmigration: I Head to Another World After Reaching Foundation Establishment

After reading a few paragraphs, there are no flaws or highlights. Will the protagonist have a heroine? Will the protagonist have adventures? Will the protagonist combine modern immortality with ancient immortality? Will the modern immortality pill Qi Fu Town be brought to ancient times? Will ancient resources be brought to modern times? Will the frequent intertwining of the two worlds not be discovered? Your description of the humanistic landscape of modern immortality is very poor. In the sky, there are monks riding flying swords to work. On the earth, there are all kinds of things that are not found in modern society but are common in modern immortality. This can make this world mysterious.

Author, Author update soon The author's soul returns... 𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌 The soul returns... Driving the long whip and setting up the six bridles... 𓀌𓀎𓀠𓀤𓀫 The soul is back... Crossing the mountain and singing... The soul is back... The soul is back... 𓀋𓀌𓀎𓀙𓀠 The soul returns... Sings high and triumphant... We share the same robe and enjoy the glory... 𓀋𓀠𓀤𓀥𓀫 Hun Xi Returns... Hun Xi When you update, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the greenness of the writing will be criticized. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the progress of the plot is more focused. When you are on the third watch, the little praise starts to sound, and the number of dead harvests starts to decrease. When you update the fifth update, readers' support will spontaneously form, and the voices of praise will become louder and louder. When you are in the tenth watch, the great Confucian scholars' debates on scriptures are deafening, and the tolerant attitude is implemented both internally and externally.

Personal pronoun, a bit weird. But the plot is okay.

Good, good, good, good It's difficult to stretch, but it's still in the water. Ai Zhennb. It seems that time has passed, but in fact, they are all partying.

It's ok, just don't keep adding me in certain places, it will look like writing a diary. Just write about what happened.

It's nice to watch, but it's a bit short. I really like the protagonist's intelligence. The villain is also not brainless.

Please tell me if it's not well written.

Many of the words "self" in the article can be changed to "I". Whoever is a good person uses the word "self" as the first person at the beginning of a sentence.

A pretty good book!

The author's writing is pretty good, especially his daily writing skills. Isn't the later game a bit long?