Being Gender-Swapped Was Bad Enough, So Why Did I Turn Into a Monster?

A very interesting book, but some problems can be seen The most interesting thing about this book is that the author seems to have deliberately used some wrong information at the beginning to cause some misunderstandings for the readers (should it be a mistake? I'm not sure), that is, telling the readers that the protagonist's ability is abnormal awakening, which makes the early part of the book very depressing, especially the Public Security Bureau. The police officers in this book are quite difficult to deal with. They can watch videos, blockades, and reduce the range to catch targets, such as If it weren't for the fact that the protagonist is biased towards the position of a villain, then I would say that the residents of this city have a sense of security. Then you will find that there is a situation in the early stage that 80 Sheriffs can't solve, so there is no way to solve it. However, as soon as the heroine commits an offense, the Sheriff immediately gets involved. She can be called a model worker. This makes it difficult for the protagonist to leave in the early stage. He can't eat people even if he wants to, and then a miracle comes 🤦 Because this book is about Gaowu. As we all know, there is a big gap in the level of the Gaowu worldview, but the protagonist himself actually broke this gap and brought the Gaowu world back to the urban superpower. Then there was a very strange scene, because at first I really thought that the protagonist had an abnormal awakening. Although he was strong, he still needed to develop and upgrade. But later I found that the protagonist had reached the full level 🤦. This led to these police officers, the better they investigated the case, the more they felt like they were about to die. I think this was handled well and quite interesting. Then came after the school massacre. I saw that the author later said that the school massacre was caused by him not being able to control his writing. It was obvious that the author had no ideas for the follow-up, so he let the protagonist return to his daily life, and continued to think about making money and live broadcasting, and even became a scam anchor 🤦 🤦. I think the author needs to change this paragraph because the logic is broken. Returning to daily life shouldn't be handled this way, at least in those chapters, you shouldn't think about live broadcasting, because you have disappeared. To be honest, it is not easy for the Sheriff in this world (this is also a good point in the early stage). I think it is very simple to follow the Internet to find you, unless you make some settings later such as the Public Security Bureau cannot find the Internet account, but I think it is completely unnecessary. Let's go to the Public Security Bureau. I can't tell whether it's powerful or not. The main reason is that such a big cult has not been caught there. If you ask me to say that if you encounter someone who is completely invincible, if she can still communicate and fight to the end, it is better to just offer an olive branch. At least it is worse than pushing the monster to the enemy. As for the world view, if you are confident in what you have written, it is best not to give all the details of the world view so quickly. The previous readers were still guessing whether the Eye of Heaven is heaven, aliens, or AI. The author directly threw the world view into the book. It is better to hide it.

Objectively speaking, it's not bad. Excellent: The characterization is very good, the subject matter is relatively novel, the plot line is on track, the full text is smooth, there are no poisonous points, and the quality and quantity of updates are very high. Shortcomings: Judging from the 50 chapters updated so far, there are too few emotional lines and it is a bit delayed. (Personal feeling) Summary: Except for the emotional line, everything else is pretty good. Some legitimate characters can be added appropriately. There are too many villains, but there are only a few decent characters. There is a lack of descriptions of decent characters, so some plots can be added appropriately.

To be honest, they are really good-looking. They are villains, and they are also married. There are only two of them. I will optimize the image of the monster later to make it feel better. If I don't want to look at a big white lump of meat, a dragon will do, but it will be more elegant if I change it to a dragon.

It's great, but there are too few updates. It's basically like this now. If you want a lot of people to watch it, you can only make more updates. I hope the author can stick to it for his own hobby. The advantage is that it is quite invasive, the world view is also stated, the plot rhythm is moderate, and overall it is very interesting.

Good looking 😘😘😘 It's just too little, I'll keep it for a while first. I hope the author will not stop updating. The setting of the book is relatively novel and worth reading. The difficulty with the setting of double-crossed male and female protagonists is the emotional drama. To be honest, most Tomato authors are not good at emotional drama. If the author fails to handle the transformation process of the heroine into a real woman, as well as the emotional drama with the hero. Then this book won't be rated too high. Maybe my requirements are too high, but the author is still capable and is already very powerful among all the online writers. Come on, author [fly a kiss] [fly a kiss] [fly a kiss].

Reader: They say that if there is an end to the urge to update, I will be the savior. Reader: But why is there no one behind me now... Reader 1: After the end? Write your own book Reader: It's not bad to write your own favorite stories. Reader 2: I want to be a normal person. Reader: This cannot be called a wish. Reader 3: It's time to tell the difference. Reader: Then stand up and compete with me to see who can rush more! ...(Reader 3 has run away) Reader: Why… Reader: Why… Reader: It was you who took them away from me! Reader 4: I hope there will be no more interruptions in this world. Author: Reader, why are you working so hard? Reader: It turns out... I just want—"█████" ? : If, this is not the last chapter. ? : It's up to me to continue writing. ? : Until I finish writing all the chapters by myself. I have been urging you during the break... There is hope of resurrection recently.

Well written, this idea of ​​observing time-travelers is very good. I have thought of this setting before but have never found a novel with this setting. I am very interested. The foreshadowing is really long, covering 100 chapters. The relationship between star rating and power level is not explained in detail, but you can probably guess it. There are also stars. There are very few people with 7 or 8 stars in City G. The freshmen from the university in City A said that there is at least one 7-star person when they come up, hoping that their combat power will not collapse in the future. Looking forward to the next plot 👍

I originally came in after seeing Chang Yeyue on the cover, and found that it wasn't from Bengtie, but unexpectedly I found it to be pretty good-looking, and it can be regarded as a normal bowl of rice in the history I eat 🍉, very good, good luck to the author!

Yes, the environment rendering is OK and has potential.

So far, the writing is pretty good. At present, the writing is getting worse and worse, and poisonous points appear instantly, so I still endured reading it. For example, when you go home after killing, you don't quickly pack up your things and run away, but you are still sleeping at home, and you even want to publish your work online. Are all the police stupid?? At this time, the male protagonist should be asked to help directly. Also, when they were killing everyone in the teaching building, were the reactions of those students serious? Several classmates have been turned into strings, and they are still there. You will go to hell, and you will receive retribution. I really can't bear this. When I heard the author say Kawen, I had an ominous premonition. Now it has really appeared. Let's see if it can be changed in the future.