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It's not bad. I don't insist on transforming into a yellow hair. No matter what level of transformation, the normal strength is really strong. However, you can really try Super Four. It is really handsome. It has a 4000-fold increase, is stable and airtight, and can absorb energy. It is a perfect form. It will not change back to normal even if it is knocked unconscious. Come on, author, keep writing. As someone who has read most of the Dragon Ball novels, I will definitely come to help with the new novel.

It's not bad. Although there is a little deviation in the private parts, it is not incomprehensible and has little impact. I hope it can be serialized. The protagonist does not follow the path of a Saiyan reckless man, and his character design is not the type that likes fighting. After all, Sun Wukong and the others are the saviors. It is better to follow the mechanism to cultivate the protagonist's combat power. I guess the follow-up daily routine will be "meditation" training, making money as a cartoonist and singer, and falling in love on the 18th. The most powerful route should be to take the route of mysterious lunch, super four and divine power training. After all, I am tired of seeing blond hair transformation, and it is good to have a different black hair transformation. Still watchable, recommended

This is my first novel, to express my longing for watching Dragon Ball, recalling those passionate days, remembering how I imitated the "secondary" move in Dragon Ball, and commemorating my youth that I can't get back [I understand] Come on [Please pay attention] [bookshelf plus one][bookshelf plus one][bookshelf plus one][bookshelf plus one][bookshelf plus one][bookshelf plus one] The Saiyan invasion chapter is finished, and I have been dreaming about battle scenes for several days. The subsequent timeline will retain the original story while adding a lot of the protagonist's own growth and participation; while retaining the memories of youth, try to weaken some of the original stories. [Please update] However, we will try our best to rationalize growth and cultivation, and add some side stories to witness the growth of the protagonist. I hope that book fans will support me greatly. In any case, I will not interrupt the first work. [Top post] Come on [please pay attention]

It's very comfortable to read, unlike other Dragon Ball novels where you like to play crushing games. I really like this kind of slowly becoming stronger, using my own "love" to slowly integrate into the world, and slowly becoming stronger. I feel that the protagonist's training method will make it easy to practice the ultimate self-control skill in the future. Will the heroine be number 18? Comparing Clint and the child No. 18 Has no impact on the subsequent plot, and it feels quite suitable.

I haven't read much yet, but I personally feel it is good. Let me give you an idea, which is to cultivate the golden elixir of immortality by treating the body as a pill. The meridians form a circulation, and the acupoints are connected to the outside world but do not leak air to the outside world. Personally, I think the Super Sailor God is still necessary later on. Note that Sai Blue superimposes a Super Saiyan transformation on top of the Sai God.

10000 Hours Old Bookworm, this book is very good, it doesn't seem to be calculated based on combat power from the beginning, and then the fighting scenes are very perfunctory. This book follows the line of life levels and spatial abilities based on the Kamesen style. There is no AI in the real-person writing. The main reason for the low score is that the author is a bit slow in updating.

Some small details were not handled well, but overall it is good. The setting is quite novel and must be updated.

OK, just a little short

Good-looking, really good-looking

It's very interesting. It's one of the best Dragon Ball novels I've read on Tomato. I like the author's protagonist who doesn't pursue new forms. I also hope the author doesn't stop updating.

It's pretty good. It's logical. I don't know why the rating is so low. Is it because it meets the Tomato Dragon Ball audience and requires a harem to be called Invincible at the beginning? [Laughs][laughs][laughs]

Needless to say, five stars [like][like]

Give it a five-star support.

Can be very nice and good reviews

Like 🥰, well written

The best among fandoms, you put your heart into it

Come on, keep an eye on you [exploration] It's a pity, I look forward to the sequel.

It's okay, but the protagonist is only in his teens and he has to engage in cp with No. 18?

This book is really good, but I don't know why not many people have read it.

Not bad! I even feel that Dragon Ball is about to reach its peak again, but it seems that it has never reached its peak. . .

It's great. After the first few chapters, the impression gradually gets better.

Very good, much better than other Dragon Ball fanfics, the content is not verbose, and it is not completely consistent with the original! Support

It looks good. Although there are a lot of complaints, it is very good. The combat power has not collapsed. Other novels only use combat power to compare, but this one is very good.

It's a very good book. I can see the author's respect for the original characters, which is rarely seen in other fan fiction, so I like this book very much.

You can tell he is a new writer. Although his writing style is very immature, it is very comfortable to read👍

This is the best looking Dragon Ball I have ever seen

It's not bad. There are few growth stories in Dragon Ball that don't focus on becoming a Super Saiyan. The pace is not very fast, but it's not very slow either. It's quite good to watch the protagonist grow step by step.

It's not bad, it's novel, and it's not the kind of thing that treats readers as fools. The author must persist.

It's very good-looking, not clinging to the Saiyan blood, and wants to make his own way.

The content is not verbose. I like this refreshing fan novel.