If You Already Live Forever, Who Wants to Grab the Throne?

The writing is very good, with style, narration and lyricism. This is the most stable immortal novel I have read in a long time. The plain language narrative slowly shows the calmness and indifference of an immortal [Like][Like][Like][Like]

It looks good, and the emotional descriptions are very detailed so far. When Lao Zhao Died, my throat was a little sore after reading it. Good luck to the author. I recommend it to a twenty-year-old bookworm.

This novel is really good. It is different from other immortality novels. It has a different flavor. The first dozen or so chapters are a bit nonsense and make people feel like they can't stand it. Just skip it. It doesn't affect the reading at all. To be honest, I wanted to give it two stars at first, but I patiently skipped a few chapters and saw the surprise at the end. It felt good. The rating of this book should be about 8.5. You can take a look. Well, it has been updated evenly. Although it has shortcomings, you can take a look at it. Some things are very frustrating to read, like the kind of things that you will feel very happy immediately and have already started to feel good, but then suddenly stop, and the protagonist written by the author gives people a sense of superiority. I don't like this, but after all, it is a novel written by someone else, so my personal taste may be different.

So far, there's no big problem Okay, I caught up with the latest chapter and retracted my review. The writing of this princess was a failure. The protagonist's mood was okay when Wanwan was there. The character of this princess was not written well. Some people in the chapter reviews found it unpleasant. The protagonist was asked to help again and again, but Wanwan always came back for help. So in the future, if anything happens to someone in the imperial mausoleum, you will take action? Then wouldn't the persona you established for the protagonist in the first hundred chapters collapse? He breaks his own principles time and time again, saying it sounds good to protect one's shortcomings and being humane, but saying it sounds bad means he deserves to have his own demons and cause trouble for himself. He has no principles and no position.

It's a very classic story about protecting the land and immortality. It doesn't have any bells and whistles about living forever. I haven't seen a female protagonist yet (I don't know if it's a saint yet). I just don't know what the end of the old eunuch is. I hope you don't kill me.

The work is wonderful. The characterization is also very good and seems to have motivation. The timing is okay. The overall plot is still very good. It's very exciting. The content of this novel is still very interesting.

This is the first book I've read in more than three years, and I often read it with tears in my eyes. This book may not have been so thoughtful in the film and television changes, but the author's large words are more realistic than the pictures. It's a good book, I hope the follow-up will not be boring!

The writing is overall good. Especially in the middle and late stages, it is very good. There are two early chapters, especially the one where the old eunuch pleads for mercy, which seems very vicious. But except for those two chapters, I felt that the rest were very good, especially the middle and later stages. Some people may think it's a bit poisonous that the protagonist doesn't go out to save people or something. But I can say that the protagonist is already ranked first in combat power. If he goes out, the book can basically be said to be over. Regardless of the continuity of the plot or the so-called monasticism of this novel, the protagonist cannot go out in real time, or intervene, or save some people in real time, and correct chaos. Otherwise, there would be no way to write the plot.

Now that I have read more than 100 chapters, I will review the general content. The protagonist is an immortal. I really don't know what the protagonist is thinking. It may be due to his own world view. When the protagonist faces the separation of relatives and close friends, he immediately looks down on life and death. As an immortal, he allows his relatives and friends to die. The dynasty created by his own family, he ignores the things that are left behind by his old friends. Anyway, he is bearish on life and death, and the girl in the cold palace. His father had his legs broken by himself, which made the girl miserable. Later, the protagonist found out and said that he was indebted, so he gave him a soul mark. Please, I am his father's biological uncle. I even said that I was pitying but did not give him any mercy. Isn't it better to move to the cold palace with him? Is the protagonist's behavior disordered? I want to ask. Now I see that chapter 100 has been updated to chapter 158

The score of 7.2 Is a bit low. It is written very emotionally. However, I probably didn't think about the cause and effect theory well at the beginning, and the power system is also quite confusing, so it sometimes feels awkward to read. If you can really sort out the opening chapter and the power system, it will definitely be a masterpiece with a score of 8 to 8.5.

The content is substantial and objective, the plot structure is clear, the story is developed, and the characters are full-bodied. It is a good book.

The emotional description is very delicate and makes people watch it. It's not AI.

Come, the author, read with me I solemnly swear: Start today and never change. I will not watch dramas, travel, or get sick. I will play no games, no hydrology. Strict self-discipline, cherishing time like gold, perseverance, hard work, advocating first-class, striving for brilliance, taking pleasure in coding, being tempered into steel, and worthy of readers, worthy of youth, and worthy of the future. As an author, I solemnly declare: I firmly believe that I am an excellent author. Coding is my bounden duty. I have unlimited potential and am not afraid of hardship! I can code words diligently. I am a keyboard in the dark and a guard on the Great Wall of Internet. I voluntarily dedicate my life to code words every day and every night.

It's a very delicate book. It's a pity that it basically ended after Qingluo's death! Although immortality is a curse, cultivating immortals can also lead to immortality (for ordinary people). It's not that it's not good to introduce Xianxia, ​​I also know that the follow-up cannot unfold without the introduction, but in my opinion, the story after Qingluo's death has been separated from the previous one. It's been added to the bookshelf, and I'll probably wait until it's finished to read the rest. Come on, author

Well, don't read a cool novel with your brain in mind. If you read it with your brain in mind, it will feel weird anyway. If you enjoy reading it without your brain, it's still okay. There are also some minor problems in the plot. Well, anyway, it's just to show off that it's cool. It's okay. If you like reading cool novels, you can read it.

I've been chasing Yun Yi recently, and I'm very enthusiastic about it, so I enjoyed reading this novel. If there is no male or female CP, I will give it five stars [shy][shy][shy][shy][shy][make faces][make faces]

To be honest, it's really a pity for the few people around the hero! I feel that the male protagonist is not a righteous man, but the Supreme Laojun's way of forgetting love! From Lao Zhao's death to Li Qingluo's death, the Li family was finally destroyed! It can only be said that the male protagonist was noticed by the system's retelling!

Since the author is both an immortal and a time traveler, he suggests an idea. If you get bored, you can develop the dynasty into a modern society, and then the protagonist uses technology to go to other planets and start exploring the universe, transforming the planet, etc.!

Why not take the imperial power of the protagonist and set up a puppet emperor to handle affairs? It's so peaceful and no one dares to disturb you To be honest, you can change the style in the middle and later stage, otherwise you will feel a little tired of aesthetics, and you haven't written the next chapter yet. I can probably guess how you want to write it.

As an immortal, you can quietly watch him build tall buildings, watch his buildings collapse, and do what you want to do based on your mood. As long as one idea is clear, it is difficult to write such a novel without a certain life experience and the depth of independent thinking. I hope the author can bravely and diligently write the following articles, and I will definitely follow up and read them. Hold fist

It was okay in the beginning, but when the protagonist enters the world, there is nothing interesting to watch.

This is the best book I have read so far. In previous books, I would more or less skip some chapters, but after reading this book, I found that I did not skip a single chapter. I read it completely. Xiaodao is also very warm. Although it is a bit uncomfortable, it is very interesting. I hope that the subsequent content will be as exciting as the previous chapter.

Personally, I suggest you write down Lao Zhao's martial arts level. After all, breaking the limit can increase your lifespan, or retaining his soul is also a direction. The little princess can practice martial arts.

Except that the year written is different from what I imagined, everything else is fine. For example, my brother's nine-ring bell, where I thought he was about to burp, suddenly didn't burp after thirty years, and the old eunuch who thought he was going to die only burped ten years later [awkward laugh] lived a bit long, hahaha [thinking]

(Early stage): Acquired Heaven Realm (ninth level to first level): skin refining, meat refining, refining Bones, viscera refining, marrow refining. Xiantian Realm (Grandmaster): One qi penetrates the whole body, and the true qi is released outwards. Zhixuan Realm (Grand Master): Understand the mysteries and borrow the power of heaven and earth. Celestial Phenomenon Realm (Land Immortal): Inspire the celestial phenomena and make one person an enemy of the country.

It was okay in the early days and worth reading. After becoming a disciple, it slowly turned into a mess, but it was still remarkable.

This book is okay, not so strict, but also very stable.

The content is good. It is a non-traditional passionate article. Reading it will not make people feel emotional, but it can make them feel calmer.

The writing style is very delicate, and the emotions are also very rich. It is a bit sharp. If you say it is immortality, you may use it to see all the different aspects of life. I feel like the one-star rating may be intentional to increase the points!

It's really beautiful and a different kind of immortality article. It's worth recommending.