Gaowu************

The writing is quite good. There are no mistakes in the basic routines and writing, but there are problems with the logic. You wrote a sin point system to fight crime. It lasted for dozens of chapters and you did not cooperate with the police at all. What does it mean to let the protagonist go to school and play games all the time? You want to take the exam to defeat the genius to upgrade, but your golden finger is not a combat upgrade. The author did not explain clearly why he did not cooperate with the police system to kill criminals to quickly increase his strength. You can even say that the police system has been penetrated. Unfortunately, it does not seem that the only role of the police system is to suspect the protagonist and stumble the protagonist. The police are all cute.