Bu Ai Sui Sui Nian's 16th Book

Author, you have to know that animals in the animal kingdom can take good care of their children even if they only have the IQ of a seven- or eight-year-old human child. So, you know what I am talking about [smile]

I'll give it four stars. I deducted one star because it was a charlatan. I said it was all-in, but it turned out not to be all-in. The plot was okay.

Come on, Brother Pervert King Loli

The author has updated it well. I like it. This is the charm of Loli. It's so powerful.

It's okay. I started to edit the animation because I read your novel. The loli in the animation are really miserable. And since I am writing fan fiction, try to have as few national characteristics as possible, just like I respect some creators from island countries who have good views, but I hate invaders and some current politicians. The bottom line of national humiliation is that it lies in the hearts of every Chinese, but if too many subjective thoughts are put into fan works, it will change the taste. Moreover, the protagonist is set to be an island country and has the soul of a dragon country in his heart. Since you are writing about lolita, you should write about lolita well. It is normal if you need the support of important characters to open a harem, but it feels like the writing is all about women, mainly about dating. There are more than ten chapters, and I don't know if it is a shortcoming of all authors. When writing about women, they have to write about their temperament and how to look good when they change clothes. In other words, a person who kills without batting an eye is as careless about feelings as a fledgling. It seems ok for now, after all, I can save these girls and then have the power to change the world in the future, but the plot is still a bit too long. For example, it is clear that Rentaro is the protagonist of the original work. He is good but cannot change the overall situation, but the fan hero has changed and he is the protagonist's friend, so he should be nicer to his friends. For example, Rentaro also made meritorious service before, but there was no mention of any reward. The whole process is about talking about the protagonist, which weakens the role of other people. Fortunately, it is not belittling, otherwise it would be a character issue. I prefer to watch group dramas where the supporting characters have different roles and the protagonist is more powerful, rather than the protagonist standing out alone. The rewards the protagonist received were also incredible. He only had a few favorability points, but fortunately the author was still able to control it and not collapse. But at this update speed, if I really write it, it may be 10 times the current progress. Will I be able to finish it?

I just like to read the novel about Black Bullet. I hope there will be more updates. It won't be like the other ones that just stop at the end.

This world is really suitable for the giant shark king. The king is born with no offspring, especially his adopted daughter and adopted son, and is particularly lacking in love. If a giant shark came to this world, he might kill everyone except Loli.

It looks pretty good so far, and the hook is relatively loose. Once it develops, there is no need to hide it, just go up and do it and it's done.

It's so cool. The writing is so good. It's the first time I've seen such a charming protagonist. It's a rare piece of black egg writing. It's really cool and not boring.

It's quite good to watch. The main plot is pretty good. There's nothing I can't accept right now. It's just that some of the plots are a bit old, but it's not a big problem. Just enjoy it.