Black Bullet: No One Wants Lolita? I Take It All

Author, you have to know that animals in the animal kingdom can take good care of their children even if they only have the IQ of a seven- or eight-year-old human child. So, you know what I am talking about [smile]

I'll give it four stars. I deducted one star because it was a charlatan. I said it was all-in, but it turned out not to be all-in. The plot was okay.

Come on, Brother Pervert King Loli

The author has updated it well. I like it. This is the charm of Loli. It's so powerful.

It's okay. I started to edit the animation because I read your novel. The loli in the animation are really miserable. And since I am writing fan fiction, try to have as few national characteristics as possible, just like I respect some creators from island countries who have good views, but I hate invaders and some current politicians. The bottom line of national humiliation is that it lies in the hearts of every Chinese, but if too many subjective thoughts are put into fan works, it will change the taste. Moreover, the protagonist is set to be an island country and has the soul of a dragon country in his heart. Since you are writing about lolita, you should write about lolita well. It is normal if you need the support of important characters to open a harem, but it feels like the writing is all about women, mainly about dating. There are more than ten chapters, and I don't know if it is a shortcoming of all authors. When writing about women, they have to write about their temperament and how to look good when they change clothes. In other words, a person who kills without batting an eye is as careless about feelings as a fledgling. It seems ok for now, after all, I can save these girls and then have the power to change the world in the future, but the plot is still a bit too long. For example, it is clear that Rentaro is the protagonist of the original work. He is good but cannot change the overall situation, but the fan hero has changed and he is the protagonist's friend, so he should be nicer to his friends. For example, Rentaro also made meritorious service before, but there was no mention of any reward. The whole process is about talking about the protagonist, which weakens the role of other people. Fortunately, it is not belittling, otherwise it would be a character issue. I prefer to watch group dramas where the supporting characters have different roles and the protagonist is more powerful, rather than the protagonist standing out alone. The rewards the protagonist received were also incredible. He only had a few favorability points, but fortunately the author was still able to control it and not collapse. But at this update speed, if I really write it, it may be 10 times the current progress. Will I be able to finish it?

I just like to read the novel about Black Bullet. I hope there will be more updates. It won't be like the other ones that just stop at the end.

This world is really suitable for the giant shark king. The king is born with no offspring, especially his adopted daughter and adopted son, and is particularly lacking in love. If a giant shark came to this world, he might kill everyone except Loli.

It looks pretty good so far, and the hook is relatively loose. Once it develops, there is no need to hide it, just go up and do it and it's done.

It's so cool. The writing is so good. It's the first time I've seen such a charming protagonist. It's a rare piece of black egg writing. It's really cool and not boring.

It's quite good to watch. The main plot is pretty good. There's nothing I can't accept right now. It's just that some of the plots are a bit old, but it's not a big problem. Just enjoy it.

We agreed to raise lolita, but ended up letting them go because of the main plot.

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It's so beautiful that it makes up for the regrets of childhood

I have read more than 100 chapters. Generally speaking, the writing is okay. The writing style is average, the writing power is average, the characters are average, and the plot is average. Overall, it is okay in Tomato. When I first read the comments, I was surprised. They only wrote a few pictures about dating. Although it was long, I didn't go out of my way to talk about it. But after I read it, I realized that it was really Pure Water. I looked at the update date and saw that you update one chapter a day. How dare you spend at least eight days on this daily chapter that is still a bit boring, because I read eight chapters and I am still writing about appointments. No wonder others complained about it. After reading my daily life for more than a week, if you write ten pictures a day, I guess no one will say it alone. If you take one picture a day, no wonder others say it and give it a low score. Overall, the writing is good, and it makes up for the regret of reading the original novel. After all, the girls in the original novel are really miserable [face covering] Not just eight, but more than a dozen. I remember it seemed like 17 or 18? One date is enough, one chapter will be updated in one day, and even one chapter will be updated in the next two days. There are few 2,000 words per page, most of them are more than 1,000 words, and there is nothing to be done about poor grades. Later on, it started to suppress the combat power. It was obvious that a few of them were 100% locked. The dolphins also grew slowly and behaved differently in the early stage. Generally speaking, the writing is okay, but not even if you have good grades. If you have good grades, this book will probably be gone [laughing]

Good luck! This is the first time I've seen this fanfic [Adoration]

Digging, it's so good, I finished it in one go

So pretty, hehe, little loli

When I watch the anime, I feel these children are so pitiful. Watching the fanfic can help soothe my feelings. Come on, author.

About how a sense of deservingness can make people feel relaxed

Not bad. Come on, author [eating melon]

Come on, comrade, look forward to it (*°∀°)=3

Not bad, keep it up

Okay, it looks good [like][like][like]

In fact, you should first increase the favorability of those little guys. It would be better to take action again.

The author greatly hopes to write about Bushui

Alas, the author of Main Black Bullet... If only he could finish it [face covering]

Although the hang-up is a bit large, overall it is still within the normal range.

It's pretty good-looking, but the words are a bit short.

It's a little poisonous, it's not a big problem, and it's okay from a fandom perspective.

Looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good.