Mortal Girl Knocks on the Gate of Immortality and Begins to Escape from Famine

The first ten chapters are very interesting. The heroine is calm, decisive and quickly breaks away from the toxic family and takes revenge. She has survival wisdom. The author has good writing skills, and the plot of the first dozen chapters has a bit of a Chinese Cthulhu feel. However, there is a lack of female awareness. There are many, many male passers-by. The protagonist is referred to as a girl instead of a boy.

It's a very interesting article about cultivating immortality. The author's writing ability is not inferior to that of some authors from Qidian; However, there is a problem with the rhythm of the writing. The biggest problem is that it is "not exciting enough". The heroine is very powerful, hard-working and cautious. I think I want to write a lone wolf heroine who prefers killing and decisiveness. However, it is usually best to end the revenge within a few chapters. This kind of small fights are followed by others, and some brainless villains pester people who cannot see clearly. It is very tiring. What I want to see is the heroine's exploration of the secret realm upgrade stream, but after the heroine joins the outer sect, there are constant trivial matters, and there is a problem with this part of the rhythm. The above is my impression as a reader

The writing style is okay, but the obvious phenomenon is that there are many supporting actors! Too much! The female to male ratio is about 3:7, emm, and I saw that 90% of the more than 60 chapters are senior brothers. The only one who was good to the heroine in the early stage was described as being involved in the relationship. On the contrary, the "senior brothers" accounted for a larger proportion, so the impression is that they are all friendly... There are not many supporting female characters, but there are many supporting male characters. I originally liked the writing style of this book, but why are there so many so-called senior brothers! Emm, there is something I really want to complain about. They are all senior brothers and junior sisters. There is only one senior sister who appeared once (never called her again in the later period). There are no junior brothers. Moreover, women who are obviously top sects rarely appear. Instead, they are portrayed by passerby male costars a lot. You can refer to it yourself.

It's a pretty good slow-burning growth story, I recommend you read it after reading it. There are no major poisonous points in the plot that need to be avoided. The overall plot and character descriptions are very detailed and appropriate. The characters are not black and white and can be seen to the end at a glance. The plot can explain everything clearly most of the time without making people confused. Occasionally, there will be some small foreshadowing and reversal that serve as surprise easter eggs. Those who like slow development will like this arrangement very much. The heroine's personality can be regarded as straightforward and decisive. She has a certain level of pretense, a certain level of morality and knows how to repay kindness, but she also has her own bottom line and principles. Even the savior will find a way to solve the problem when his own interests are involved. Although some people will mind this, as a female protagonist of the video, being able to do this is already rare. However, every cautious and cautious effort of the heroine to gain a chance of survival often ends up with no good results. This kind of plot is a little too much, giving people hope but also disappointing the plot, which can let everyone have a deeper understanding of the cruel reality of the world of cultivation. However, every time we see the heroine struggling but not getting a good result, it is easy to be discouraged, even if we are just bystanders. Just like over and over again, and again, and again, and again, as the plot progresses, the sharing of perceptions between us and the protagonist will be deeper, and we will care more about the protagonist's mood and situation. After going through all kinds of hardships to the end, we thought we were seeing the light of day, but in the end we found that it was just another desperate situation. After repeating the cycle several times, we can Some people may feel desperate and give up. For readers, they click in to read the development article hoping to see some results. However, they find that the heroine will encounter a dead end no matter how she goes. In the end, she may give up after raising her because she cannot see the fruits of victory that the heroine can pick after accompanying her to grow up. Although I will struggle with this kind of plot, it is actually quite good to write it like this. Instead of blindly pursuing the excitement brought by the exciting plot, it is a different flavor to write the story with all the hardships and joys when conditions are ripe. It's just that the plot advances slowly, and there is a tendency for long serialized articles. It is most difficult to follow up on articles like this in the early stages. I can't wait to see the rise of the heroine in the later stages, but once I see the progress, I can only look forward to it anxiously.

It's really good. I don't know why people are so picky. They say that the heroine is a doormat. This is a grassroots cultivating immortality. If you want to see a cool novel about a heroine cultivating immortality, there are a lot of them in 🍅. I just got tired of watching that kind of thing, so I chose to watch the grassroots type. Secondly, the heroine is very ambitious and wants to get involved in everything. I want to say to everyone, others are writing novels and not really cultivating immortality. How can you write something without plot? I talk about farming and cultivating immortality every day. Aren't you bored? The author has deliberately spent a lot of space on the heroine's caution, and has tried his best to pave the way for the heroine's various outings and experiences. But this is how the grassroots female protagonist cultivating immortals wants to develop. The last sentence is, don't give five points for fear of being proud. (I hope the author will work hard to update more)!

I feel that this is not the first time the author has written a book. The plot of the first chapter is very attractive. Every progress and breakthrough of the heroine is very interesting. The plot of the secular world is also very exciting. The author will work hard to write a full-length novel. As a bookworm of ten years, I feel that the rating of this book will rise to above 9 in the future.

Highly recommended, the writing is very good, and the psychological description of the characters is particularly realistic. What I like the most is that the protagonist almost always gets something from his treasure hunt, which is a great article in terms of rewards. This is much more enjoyable than some articles that like to have the protagonist experience nothing but gain nothing, and even post the resources to the people around him. The plot of this article is twists and turns, but the protagonist can always benefit from it, and his cultivation and various skills have steadily increased. Second, there are no entangled interpersonal relationships around the protagonist, and there is not much emphasis on any supporting characters other than the protagonist's experience. This is very good. I only love the protagonist when reading the article. It's not that I don't like to see any supporting characters appear for an extra second when the storyline requires it. The most annoying thing is the kind of novel where the main character is trying to cultivate immortality by dragging along a plane with frequent relationships. This kind of novel will only be described when it is useful for supporting characters. The protagonist's handling of relationships with everyone is in line with my expectations for the protagonist of immortality novels. The best relationship between the protagonist and anyone else is such that the friendship between gentlemen is as light as water. Seeing that there is nothing that makes me uncomfortable now, it is a refreshing article that I prefer. As of the latest update, the logic of the story of Moon Village has become smooth, and the actions of the protagonist also fit the character. However, it is still a little unreasonable and too unsuitable for cultivators. That is, the protagonist is obviously a monk, but his method of dealing with mortals is too simple - when facing a frightened and crying person, he can only "softly comfort"? I feel that the method is weak, which reflects the kindness of the protagonist too much. Instead, there is no sense of immortality. I can neither cast a spell to make them tell the truth, nor can I use a spell to make people calm down. When handling the case, the lack of means makes the protagonist very weak. The logical description has not been very smooth since the Moon Village dungeon. After reading Chapter 224 and some subsequent chapters, I am reviewing it. Starting from this chapter, I entered a Shadow World dungeon. The plot of this dungeon is very unsmooth. The actions of the protagonist seem very inexplicable. The author does not use the inner thoughts of the protagonist to indicate this behavior. The reason for the move is that the medical center exploded for no reason, and then he met several partners. The protagonist also had a headache for no reason. Many chapters have been describing the protagonist's weakness, but even the protagonist himself did not investigate the cause. The readers have been kept in the dark and have no idea what the reason is. What is the purpose of this copy and what is its significance. The plot arrangement of the story seems to be unrelated and has no logical turning point.

It's very good. It's very similar to the traditional fairy tales from a few years ago. It can be seen that the author has a good foundation in writing and the writing is very solid, but it is too short. I also wonder if this is the author's trumpet and whether he has a vest.

I just finished reading a very good female channel about cultivating immortals some time ago. The beginning of this novel was really good when I first read it. The logic behind it was a little problematic, and the story line development was also very bland. She wanted to become an immortal, but she was taken with her. She was obviously a poor peasant girl, but she behaved with etiquette and grace that did not suit her status. She could swallow a monster in the golden elixir stage without killing a mortal... Although in the golden elixir stage, it was still impossible to find out whether she had spiritual roots... Apart from these problems, everything else is pretty good! The writing style is very good, and the ancient Chinese characters are not out of place.

I've read more than 100 chapters, so I'll update it quickly! ! ! So far, the plot is still tight and exciting, with some flaws in the details, but the plot direction is very reasonable. Although Golden Finger arrived late, the heroine's resilience, diligence, and sense of crisis are all empathetic. Finally, I see that the protagonist is forced to do so by various circumstances, rather than a smart one. I have a small suggestion. For example, in the life-devouring formation in the mortal world and the Baicao Pavilion being used as bait, the heroine only touched the edge of the truth. She doesn't know the truth, but she can't make it unclear to the readers. She can use the perspectives of other characters to clarify the truth, so that the readers will have a more sense of involvement. The world view is grand and it feels like a long novel, and the main character is from the physics department. I want to see the combination of physics and immortality. I look forward to the author's long and steady updates! @ My rice jar

It is a particularly good-looking and authentic ancient fairy tale. The heroine is beautiful, and she is struggling to pass every step. It is really all about survival on the edge of life and death. It has a comprehensive description, no surprises, and slow plot development. It is a traditional fairy tale. The proportion of proficiency panels is not high. The heroine is very defensive. She is very cautious, but she is also very humane and has a high proportion of female characters. The heroine is not a brainless golden finger, each one is obtained by herself through hard work and perseverance on the edge of life and death, a type of self-made genius novel.

The author's writing is fluent, the descriptions are detailed, and the writing style is traditional and solid. The heroine is kind and courageous, calm and smart. I like the heroine's decisive and decisive character. Among them, the 4 skills of cultivating immortals are good, but cultivation is the foundation. The heroine's learning is a bit messy now. I don't see how these skills specifically help the heroine. And those spells that can be upgraded by gaining experience have been put on hold. I learned these to assist in cultivating immortals and becoming stronger. I can't distinguish the priorities. Everything is difficult at the beginning. I hope the author will continue to work hard and don't forget the golden finger system. Give full play to its role, such as the points, what will happen if you get full experience, is the Hunyuan Qi training method better than the sect's, etc.

I couldn't help but write a review for this book. It's so good! Can the author of the familiar orthodox cultivation stream [shy][shy][shy] update five million words a day [shy][shy][shy] Xiaonian was tragically betrayed at the beginning, but after some thinking and operation, he decided to escape to the mountains to avoid being hunted. On the way, he met an evil cultivator and plotted against the immortals before entering the sect. Even though he was just a handyman disciple, he was smart and capable of scheming. After entering the Baicao Pavilion, he made rapid progress, learned how to make alchemy, and entered a larger conspiracy... I feel that this part is a bit dark. Everyone must be careful when they appear, and every word and every appearance must be considered. Now I realize that the book review has not been posted hahahaha. Please give the author a big boost and update it! !

This book is full of joy and I can't stop reading it. The heroine has a strong heart, and the other characters also have their own thoughts, selfishness, and human nature. The heroine's excessive caution is forced by the environment. The plot is also coherent and not procrastinating. It's great to read!

It's very interesting to watch. The heroine is calm and will take revenge (although the cycle of revenge is a bit long), but it's still very satisfying. The heroine is also a decisive person in killing. It's very interesting to watch. Moreover, the author writes about the real world of cultivation. It's really beautiful! Come on, author!

The first part (rural area➕escape) is too lengthy, but the rest is fine. Two small wishes: give the heroine a space-related item or bring it with you; the heroine can find some natural and earthly treasures to improve her qualifications. Then, I hope there will be no male protagonist and fewer pets (at most 1). These are my own suggestions, and it's OK for the author to adopt them or not. Please don't stop updating, come on! Around chapter 280, the heroine is like a demented person. When others want to harm her, she does this and that. Now she is 293 and is not dead yet, and she still wants to save people. What kind of Holy Mother is this? It pissed me off. It feels like the author is writing for the sake of writing, and he hasn't thought about many things.

I think it's very beautiful. I've read so many fairy tales, and this one is considered top-notch. The heroine's IQ is online, and some of the short descriptions are very cute. The battle descriptions are also very good. I hope the author can continue writing.

The writing is really good. I have always wanted to read an orthodox fairy tale. The heroine's character is also very cautious. I like Lone Wolf very much, but the sudden accidental entry into the secret realm is a bit tricky. The writing is not a noob. It's okay. Come on, come on.

It's very interesting, the writing style and the control of the plot are very good. I originally planned to hypnotize you before going to bed, but it was so fascinating that I couldn't fall asleep until five o'clock. Finally, I am no longer a novice. Come on, come on!

It's great to watch, every character has brains and can be called evil, and the heroine's decisiveness in killing is really enjoyable to watch. Enemies can't stay for more than a few episodes, which is still rare in female videos. It's just that the update is too slow, and it's gone after reading it. The author would like to update a lot

Finally, I met a heroine who was the same as Wei Xin who had traveled through the cyberspace. She was decisive in killing. And unlike other fairy tales where you can easily become a god, the protagonist grows very slowly, making progress little by little. Judging from the worldview in the book, it should be a full-length novel. Come on author, I hope your book will be on the list

It's very interesting to watch, and it does tend to be slow to develop, but it seems to be quite good to accompany a protagonist to grow up slowly. There will be some small twists and turns. The people in it are not brainless, they are profit-driven people. Like it.

It was a great read and I read it all in one day. The author's writing is very solid. It is systematic but not the usual cool novels. The heroine mainly relies on herself to practice. Compared with other systematic female protagonists, the heroine in this book is like an ordinary person who relies on hard work and perseverance to climb up step by step. Except for one or two life-and-death moments, she rarely relies on the system. It's not easy to become super powerful in cultivation. I think the only thing I would like to suggest is that the pace is too slow. I have already read Chapter 170. The heroine is still in the refining stage and has reached so many realms according to the author's introduction. If the pace remains unchanged later on, this book will have over a thousand chapters [laughing and crying]. However, the pace is so slow that I have never been bored once in the middle of it. I really can't say that the plot is boring. Come on come on!

It's tied, it looks great! This article is relatively slow to develop, but every growth of the heroine is written very carefully, and it is still very interesting to read. The heroine is very cautious, she will seize the opportunity and kill decisively. The world view is very detailed and huge. I look forward to unlocking larger maps as the heroine grows~

Super Invincible is a good-looking movie. The heroine is very stubborn and not sentimental. The writing style is also very recommended. The bottom-level exploration is not a junior sister, but her own perseverance. When she encounters someone who wants to kill her, she is directly designed to kill her. The details of the environment are very well portrayed.

The writing style is very good, not like Tomato's writing. The protagonist's overall upgrade is slow, but the plot does not feel sluggish. PS: I feel that the author is very suitable for writing horror infinite streams, or he has written this before. The atmosphere described in some places makes my scalp numb.

It's rare to see such a tough heroine. She's not just gifted, she's lucky enough to be brought into the Immortal Sect, she's also at the bottom of the class, but she's pretty good-looking, and the heroine works really hard. It somewhat suppresses the heroine's IQ

The author said that if you don't want to read the secular chapter, you can start reading it from chapter 28. I read chapter 28 from the first chapter and came to write a review. It is a very wonderful secular world. A nine-year-old child's body and adult soul, in order to survive, constantly plan, fine judgment, bravery, flexibility, patience, tact, very real and touching. It's not a cookie-cutter hydrology. I'm going to watch the Fairyland chapter, let's go together!

It's good-looking, not too big a cheat, and it's a very serious fairy tale. I've been enjoying reading this kind of story about struggling to survive recently. The heroine's various schemes are particularly interesting, and the reflections on the little calculations are also very real. There are currently more than 100 chapters, and I look forward to the follow-up.

Wow! Very well written! I particularly like this kind of detailed and realistic escape. The protagonist has a modern soul and does not have any assistance. He relies entirely on himself. I like this type the most! Come on, author!