Cultivation *********

How come there are so few reviews with low stars? The writing is okay. I have been reading novels for more than 20 years. I am very picky. You can trust my vision. There are no faults, and the writing and plot are all fine. This is obviously the invincible Goudao ➕ development of farming style, so why are you afraid of troubles caused by the plot? It's not the type where the protagonist is struggling. When trouble comes, it's a moment of pretentiousness and slap in the face, and it's basically the younger brother who takes action. Support the author and increase his confidence. Your book is fine. The traffic is low and it needs to be updated. In addition, the spiritual veins need to be solved. The first-level primary spiritual veins can only be used by seven or eight people, which is obviously not enough. In addition, to be honest, it feels a bit wrong to still develop it as a martial arts gym. The martial arts gym can be changed to a peripheral one and the sect can be re-established secretly. After all, there are only so many entries, and the people are already very mixed.

Just make sure to update it every day. It doesn't seem to be a big problem at the moment. It's not a masterpiece, but it can be considered a good idea. As long as you don't keep the most evil people alive, it doesn't matter if you have a female protagonist or not. Don't write too much about the relationship between men and women, but there can be more interactions between masters and disciples!

It's okay. As for it, isn't it normal to have constant troubles, let alone in a place like a martial arts school? In addition to legal protection, the few encounters we have in real life have a lot to do with our poverty [face covering]

It's okay. This novel is slow-paced, but it's not the kind of nonsense, so I think it's pretty good. Some people care about the reversal of martial arts levels. In fact, there is nothing to worry about, because he is originally cultivating immortality and not ordinary martial arts. Some people are also concerned about why so many people have spiritual roots. If you read carefully, there is an explanation in the book.

This book is very nice, and the entries are written with new meanings, which is considered a good source of food 👌(｡•̀ᴗ-)✧ I read the latest chapter in one go. Don't stop updating and keep writing. There is potential for follow-up. It is better than many similar novels.

Recommended good books,,, read more later

I hope I can write it down

I'm following this author. I've read dozens of chapters of the new novel. It's pretty good. I'd like to support it with 50 points.

Leave your own footprints

Very good novel

Very good. I haven't seen such a work in a long time. I like it.

Yes, it's a novel worth reading. I highly recommend it to everyone. Keep up the good work, this novel will definitely get a score of 9 or above

I feel that when writing a book on Tomato, it would be better if the pace is a little faster; the latest chapter 116 is only the sixth level of Qi Entrainment; at this rate of advancement and update, this book will take 1-2 years to write at least [face covering]

It's very interesting, the logic is online, the content is relatively new, and the writing is good. It's worth reading.

This kind of subject matter is rare, and it is not a constant enemy, which is a little bit refreshing. There is a saying in it that Yu Jing does not have too many words, which is very good. Give a good review to support the author. [Praise]

It is indeed slow to heat up, and as plain as water, [laughing][laughing][laughing and crying][laughing and crying]

The subject matter is novel and worth a look

Not bad, quite fun The plot of this story is quite novel. It's not the same. It's quite interesting.

Can speed up appropriately

After seeing Chapter 220, it's okay! The author is ready to cut it!

It's still pretty good. It has a system and a panel. It's normal for the development to be slow.

It looks good, but it feels like everyone has spiritual roots.

It's okay, it's pretty cool, but updates are too slow.

Not bad, I can watch it Setting: Immortal cultivation is stronger than martial cultivation

It's okay, not bad, nothing bad, but the upgrade is a bit slow. The protagonist should be stronger.

Not bad! There are very few interesting ones with this kind of subject matter! Really well written!

It's pretty good, I hope the author can write more.

Not bad, worthy of a five-star rating. The plot unfolds slowly, which is what I like.

Business-style development, the system is just right

The writing is still good and I have some ideas. I wish I could update it soon.