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Very cool. Because I wrote it. This novel is my first novel, so it's normal to say it's a bit rubbish. After all, it's my first time writing it. Then, uh, uh, I was introduced to it by a friend. Anyway, I have been reading it recently. If you are interested, you can read my second book.

Be careful, everyone, I have tried the poison for everyone, don't be fooled by the label "dual heroines". The protagonist is a boy who turns into a girl. After being imprisoned, he wants to escape from the heroine. The heroine dies in the middle of the book. Later, the protagonist gets married and has children and lives a happy life. Who knew it was a change of marriage from the introduction [crying] [crying]

I would like to ask the author how the book will develop in the future, whether it will be a marriage, a couple, or a single. The first 20 chapters are very well written and amazing, with a strong sense of immersion, but the pace is very fast. In less than 20 chapters, all the information revealed in the title of the book is completed. Moreover, the plot after Chapter 20 has begun to become obviously rigid. Zhao Ming's sudden betrayal and the reasons for his betrayal have already had many similar plots in the first 20 chapters. Including the subsequent love affair with Ajie, it is difficult to understand and creates a great sense of separation from the previous part. I think the author should have finished writing what he wanted to write. Then this book is actually finished, so why not keep the excitement of the first 20 chapters and stop here, leaving the rest that I want to write for the next book. [Praise]

Well enough. Because I watched it.

Reasoning like Luna, but how to say it? The villain went offline again too quickly