Zhu Yuanzhang: Is This Foolish Boy My Long-Lost Son?

Regarding your update, I think five stars is fine. A brief explanation: the protagonist is similar to Li Yuanba's template, he has a system, he is not a time traveler, he just has some memories.

The emotion of the male protagonist is very empathetic. This kind of protagonist is a type that gradually grows up. Psychologically, the idiot doesn't know why he kills, but he knows that it is because he wants to protect his brother. I thought that the protagonist did not know this until after time travel. I think it is very well written, because it is not as abrupt as it appears 🤔🤔🤔 Edible

A bit like AI writing, but high-quality AI writing! Not bad!

Came here after watching the comic. The writing isn't particularly engaging, but it works well as a script to generate a comic. I like it because I feel that the protagonist is clear-minded and wise, straightforward but not stupid, has a delicate mind and can understand the sufferings of the world, and can avoid the traps set by others. Although he is not all-rounded, his words are simple and will not conflict with others, and his actions are in line with natural development. I really had such expectations in the early stage, but there were too many cheats added later. Once I started taking the road of conquering the world, I felt that the author couldn't hold it anymore, and returned to the routine in terms of timeline and details. I think there should be eight points. Eight points will be given to the end of the Northern Expedition and the demise of the Yuan Dynasty. I only read the title later, and I didn't think it was interesting so I stopped reading. It is updated three times a day very diligently.

The early writing was lively and interesting! The plot is compact and not confusing! The proportion of the system is very small, a light time travel article! But there are a lot of repetitive words around Chapter 200. Maybe the author didn't notice it when he was writing, but it will be a little uncomfortable when you read it carefully!

The naive protagonist is both murderous and humane. The later plot must be arranged well and the characters must not change. This book will be a hit.

The angle concept is quite good, and the plot of the more than 60 chapters I've seen so far is pretty good. The characters' demeanor and personality make you smile when you read it. It's just that the updates of 2 chapters a day are a bit slow lately. It's my first time reading a serial novel. I wonder if the author is crazy about it. I'm afraid I'll run out of books to read [Chigua] There are a lot of minor mistakes in the characters and timeline at the end. I don't know if the author didn't check it after writing it. There are also some paragraphs that are repeated, which doesn't look good, so I'll just read it [face covering]

It looks pretty cool for the moment, an invincible cool article! The honest and straightforward nature is exactly what Li Yuanba felt like in the Ming Dynasty.

Looks good, love watching Warriors It is indeed produced by AI, you know that the shadows are very long under the sun

To be honest, there are already system grandpas. I am not convinced if they don't give the protagonist a good mount. It's all Li Yuanba's template. Don't get a low-end horse like Wu Hao Red Rabbit. Just go to Li Yuanba's original mount Wanli Yun. It can travel ten thousand a day and eight thousand at night. Li Yuanba takes off on it with two sledgehammers. Or simply brush out the Mo Qilin from Grand Master Wen of the Fengshenbang, fly into the sky and escape to the earth, traveling thousands of miles in a blink of an eye. How exciting.