Reborn: Saving the Day, Starting with a Pair of Little Sisters

It's okay, it's quite enjoyable, but the plot is a bit tight, and it doesn't describe the kind of Shura field, which is confusing and confusing. The main character has not returned, so it's time to go straight to the show, but the harem starts too fast [laughing evilly]. Although I quite like it, I feel that the two little loli scenes at the beginning are less, and I don't hesitate to kill the bad guy.

Brother, I directly praise the handwriting, but I have a suggestion. I feel like I can see a trace of myself in it 😂. The pace of each chapter is too fast. If you write poetry, I have no objection, but writing too fast will lead to flat characters. For example, the relationship between the first female protagonist and the male protagonist at the beginning is a bit brainless. I am not saying that I am picky, but I want to make it comfortable for people to read without thinking. You can consider using AI to polish the color and encourage support.

It's quite good-looking, with a little bit of emotional detail [admiration]. There are a lot of beauties, and I picked it up quickly. I also wrote a few bad poems. It's not trashy 🤭, but the rhythm is unstable in some places, a bit too fast.

Throughout the novel, I only saw three words: kill, kill, kill, and it's fucking kill [laughter]

Not bad, it's the big harem I like [laughing evilly]

A good harem story. If you like Lolita, it's a no-brainer. Remember, it's a no-brainer.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking Why doesn't anyone read such a good book? Author, do you still have the motivation to write [rolls eyes]