Starting from the Death of Iruka, Naruto Became Black

I'm going to make a guarantee! This is good fan fiction. Those of you who write about the revolution of time travel should be like this book [crying] Those of you who write about Naruto's blackening, can you write it? Just write it [face covering] Authors who can write good plots without being OOC and take every character seriously are rare on Tomato [covering face] What else can you say? Five-star praise is given [crying]

The story of Naruto's darkening path is perfectly written. It's not sloppy, but it also has a touch of refreshing feeling. Personally, I think it's the best novel written by Naruto fans. It must be praised as a five-star novel.

The description of the characters is realistic, and the growth of the protagonist's personality and strength are just right. When reading articles related to Naruto in the past, I always felt that he was a time-traveler wearing Naruto's skin. However, the protagonist of this article really made me feel that the protagonist is not some unpredictable time-traveler, but a real aborigine.

The story of an indigenous Naruto becoming a black man by mistake is really well written. The author's writing skills may be lacking, but he listened to the advice and was really willing to change, and he still has a sense of being alive (òωó)👍 The characters that appear have their own arcs, which is great. Although some of the characters are functional, they have quite an NPC flavor. I have already seen the chapter where Naruto returns to Konoha to take the Chunin Exam, and I am looking forward to recycling the foreshadowing I have saved so far. For example, Jiraiya, Mount Miaomu, and how the future of the ninja world should go. It can be seen that the author has a lot of ideas. I hope the work can be completed smoothly without any long-winded details. I give it a five-star review. Come on, author! I love your work! Keep your strengths and go for it! 😎

The writing is great, and to be honest, it doesn't look like a new author who has never written a book before. Anyway, I think it's pretty good and there's nothing unreasonable about it. I'm looking forward to the follow-up plot and hope to update a few more chapters.

I just looked through the comments and saw a lot of opinions and comments, and then I found that 14,000 people were watching it. No, many people thought it was bad. Why are there still 14,000 people watching it? I'm very curious about this, really. After all, I don't usually read Naruto fanfics. I think this is pretty good. At least for now, I haven't seen any poisonous points. Maybe as long as it's not too big of a poisonous point, I can get over it. I've seen more than 70 chapters so far, and everything is normal. I'll take a look at it again and come here to give a follow-up review ᕦ(ò_óˇ)ᕤ

I really like this book. Unlike many other dark novels, this book is very logical and has detailed characterizations. Most importantly, it gives Xiao Li a lot of scenes.

I have seen Chapter 136 so far, and I have a good impression. There is no time travel or system, but a parallel universe where Iruka died in battle. This makes Naruto's character different from the original but reasonable. Because he is still the reincarnation of Asura, he is still very kind when facing Xiao Li and others, and his character is not completely deviated from the original. On this basis, other characters also follow the original work without deviation, and the characters are vivid and complete. The 136 chapters so far can be considered good, and the look and feel is considered superior among the Naruto Darkening series.

This darkening is like the darkening method of the heroine of the female channel.

Nice! There are many types of Naruto's defection. I think this is a book that I feel comfortable reading. However, I feel that Gaara was a little quick to forgive the part about killing Kankuro. Maybe the author has a different understanding. I think it can be handled more delicately, but overall it is still very interesting. Naruto's blackening is definitely not about becoming invincible all of a sudden and then killing without thinking. It is a change of stance and planned revenge. The new bond written by the author is really good👌👍🏻👌👍🏻

A very good book about Darkening Naruto

Good news: This is the first time I read a Xiaona-type novel, and I feel like it's the ceiling. Bad news: After reading this book, I can't stand other Xiaona-type novels. I'm not bragging, my wife's writing is indeed very good, the original version is relatively real, and it is very consistent with the normal people's experience of the 10 years and 80 of Konoha's unruly people, and they become evil and take revenge on everyone. Moreover, although Konata has turned dark, she still retains her kindness and desire for bonding in her heart [I understand correctly], but I don't know if the bond with Sasuke is still there, because in the article, Konata currently does not have as strong feelings for Sasuke as in the original novel, but in the original novel, Konata and Sasuke have had a vague relationship since they were very young [if I remember correctly], and it feels like the bond between them is constantly being broken; I look forward to the follow-up plot! ! ! ! ! I hope Xiao Na is happy in the ending! ! !

This kind of logic is quite rare in this book. There is no rebirth or time travel, and some details are very clearly described. The author will also leave messages from time to time, but the update speed is too slow. Why not update 100 chapters a day? [Pouts]

It's quite interesting. The breaking point is around chapter 300. It's not a time traveler, but an awakening. Step by step, you are introduced into the dark abyss. The first 200 chapters are mainly about developing and clarifying the enemy. The breakdown of mentality is step by step. In essence, Naruto is a person who has not lost his passion. But it is a pity that the story line of this book is not complete. There is no one to help him with this point that affects human nature. He has been pursuing a great career in the ninja world for about 200 to 300 chapters. However, it is a pity that Shion in the movie version of the story line is willing to die for Naruto. Iruka the dirty land denied it, plus the betrayal of Kyuubi after chapter 400. Naruto in this story line is already going crazy. The cliff of madness is crumbling. I don't know how the author will torment the protagonist in the future. According to the previous predictions of the big toad, it is estimated that Shiro and Gaara may be betrayed by some of them. I beg the author to let Naruto say it's over. After such a desperate job in the ninja world, where everyone is the enemy, consider letting Xiang Ling still stand firmly on Naruto's side. By the way, the tradition of the second-generation tomato scrambled eggs is up to you. It would be best if you could also create the kind of fanatical awakening scene where a low-level ninja NPC like Toss shouts "Evil people have saviors." It is best to have the kind of consciousness that desperately helps Naruto, and it can also bring the story line back to Naruto's not completely crazy state. Of course, it mainly depends on how the author handles it, I'm really looking forward to it. The content after Chapter 400 is too watery. A single plot of a person who is seriously injured and runs away takes several chapters to describe how serious the injury is, which shows signs of artificial intelligence injection.

Kishimoto himself secretly opened a trumpet and wrote it [Like]

It's so sacred [laughs][laughs][laughs] Xiaosheng should savor it carefully [laughs][laughs][laughs] Did the author write it so wonderfully to attract my attention? [Laughs][laughs][laughs] Great, you succeeded! Uh-huh! (Sudden illness) [laughing][laughing][laughing] Can you write more? Simply delicious! [Laugh][laugh][laugh][make faces][make faces][make faces]

There are some loopholes in the plot, such as the art that seals emotions in the Book of Sealings. Sandai and Jiraiya must know what kind of art is in the Book of Sealings. Combined with the request to see the Book of Sealings and Naruto's drastic change in temperament, they should know that Naruto used the art of sealing emotions, and Naruto is now the focus of attention.

It's okay and good to read. I hope Sasuke will be written to death. Sasuke has never lived for himself in this life. It's too tiring to watch him. It would be great if this book had Sasuke become a black man and kill Konoha. I like Sasuke better.

Good,

It's indeed logical, but I want to know what Naruto's feelings for Jiraiya are, whether he is purely a tool or a contradictory teacher. This has a lot to do with my subsequent perception of this book.

It's great. It's a dream come true. I regret watching Naruto [Like][Like][Like]

The writing is quite good. Some people may think that Naruto knows how to kill and kill in a day and is not calm when things happen. He is like a fool. In fact, think about it carefully. Under the influence of Iruka, Naruto in the original book is still a silly image of a holy mother even if he is blinded. Combined with Naruto's age in this period, when he encounters the death of Iruka, his personality changes from an extreme holy mother to an extreme killing. It is actually very real. And if you think about how old Naruto is now, this is not a cool novel. It is not that he has been in time and has a calm personality and a darkened IQ. In my opinion, the author really restored the true appearance of Naruto's darkening. In fact, I am very curious about the author's follow-up framework. For example, Orochimaru, who also hopes for the village, and Payne, who also hates Konoha. According to this timeline, Hinata, who should be grateful to Naruto (I think the emotional line can be dealt with), and whether Hatake Shiroga's son Kakashi (whose father was killed by Danzo) may go to Naruto's camp, etc. I think there are quite a lot of characters who may have darkened personalities in the background of Naruto. The author could actually consider letting Naruto have a certain bond, whether it's friendship or emotion (a dark bond of course). An alternative Akatsuki organization? Haha, I'm looking forward to the author's future plot development. If it's just one person's revenge, it will be difficult and the combat power will easily collapse (there is no senjutsu, just the late Kyuubi, a kaleidoscope may be taken care of. The Six Paths Sage should not give the power of the sun to such a Naruto. These authors can consider this, so that the plot does not collapse) The strong resilience can be matched with the Eight Gate Armor or Orochimaru's cooperation to obtain Hashirama Cells or Hinata's cooperation to obtain the Moon Secret and Rinnana. Haha, that's a bit much. Hope it helps the author

To be honest, there are many things that I am not satisfied with. The battles are always close to one breath, and the damn characters are always saved by someone. In about three battles, there are always people who come to save the scene. This kind of thing makes people feel so fake. However, the subject matter and content are indeed quite interesting.

It's not OOC, it's really beautiful, the writing is good, the words are basically correct, the plot is coherent, the setting is reasonable, I love it [Blow Kiss]

The writing is pretty good, but Orochimaru was strengthened too much, right? The Naruto you have here can use the power of the Nine-Tails, activate Sage Mode, and use King Kong to block it. He can even be at a loss against Orochimaru. Orochimaru is not that strong. He is difficult to kill at most.

It's very interesting, the subject matter is very novel, and there is no time travel or original protagonist, which makes me feel very comfortable.

Okay. What I like most about this article is that there is no system.

Hinata can't accept this. It looks very cool from the front [Like] [Like] We are destined to meet again in the high mountains and the long road.

It's great for a newcomer to write like this. I support it.

It seems that there is no poison at the moment, but I don't know how the author wants to write about the relationship with Hinata Sasuke.