Naruto Goes Dark After Iruka's Death

I'm going to make a guarantee! This is good fan fiction. Those of you who write about the revolution of time travel should be like this book 😢 Those of you who write about Naruto's blackening, can you write it? Just write it 🤦 Authors who can write good plots without being OOC and take every character seriously are rare on Tomato [covering face] What else can you say? Five-star praise is given 😢

The story of an indigenous Naruto becoming a black man by mistake is really well written. The author's writing skills may be lacking, but he listened to the advice and was really willing to change, and he still has a sense of being alive (òωó)👍 The characters that appear have their own arcs, which is great. Although some of the characters are functional, they have quite an NPC flavor. I have already seen the chapter where Naruto returns to Konoha to take the Chunin Exam, and I am looking forward to recycling the foreshadowing I have saved so far. For example, Jiraiya, Mount Miaomu, and how the future of the ninja world should go. It can be seen that the author has a lot of ideas. I hope the work can be completed smoothly without any long-winded details. I give it a five-star review. Come on, author! I love your work! Keep your strengths and go for it! 😎

The story of Naruto's darkening path is perfectly written. It's not sloppy, but it also has a touch of refreshing feeling. Personally, I think it's the best novel written by Naruto fans. It must be praised as a five-star novel.

The description of the characters is realistic, and the growth of the protagonist's personality and strength are just right. When reading articles related to Naruto in the past, I always felt that he was a time-traveler wearing Naruto's skin. However, the protagonist of this article really made me feel that the protagonist is not some unpredictable time-traveler, but a real aborigine.

I just looked through the comments and saw a lot of opinions and comments, and then I found that 14,000 people were watching it. No, many people thought it was bad. Why are there still 14,000 people watching it? I'm very curious about this, really. After all, I don't usually read Naruto fanfics. I think this is pretty good. At least for now, I haven't seen any poisonous points. Maybe as long as it's not too big of a poisonous point, I can get over it. I've seen more than 70 chapters so far, and everything is normal. I'll take a look at it again and come here to give a follow-up review ᕦ(ò_óˇ)ᕤ

Nice! There are many types of Naruto's defection. I think this is a book that I feel comfortable reading. However, I feel that Gaara was a little quick to forgive the part about killing Kankuro. Maybe the author has a different understanding. I think it can be handled more delicately, but overall it is still very interesting. Naruto's blackening is definitely not about becoming invincible all of a sudden and then killing without thinking. It is a change of stance and planned revenge. The new bond written by the author is really good👌👍🏻👌👍🏻

The writing is great, and to be honest, it doesn't look like a new author who has never written a book before. Anyway, I think it's pretty good and there's nothing unreasonable about it. I'm looking forward to the follow-up plot and hope to update a few more chapters.

I really like this book. Unlike many other dark novels, this book is very logical and has detailed characterizations. Most importantly, it gives Xiao Li a lot of scenes.

It's quite interesting. The breaking point is around chapter 300. It's not a time traveler, but an awakening. Step by step, you are introduced into the dark abyss. The first 200 chapters are mainly about developing and clarifying the enemy. The breakdown of mentality is step by step. In essence, Naruto is a person who has not lost his passion. But it is a pity that the story line of this book is not complete. There is no one to help him with this point that affects human nature. He has been pursuing a great career in the ninja world for about 200 to 300 chapters. However, it is a pity that Shion in the movie version of the story line is willing to die for Naruto. Iruka the dirty land denied it, plus the betrayal of Kyuubi after chapter 400. Naruto in this story line is already going crazy. The cliff of madness is crumbling. I don't know how the author will torment the protagonist in the future. According to the previous predictions of the big toad, it is estimated that Shiro and Gaara may be betrayed by some of them. I beg the author to let Naruto say it's over. After such a desperate job in the ninja world, where everyone is the enemy, consider letting Xiang Ling still stand firmly on Naruto's side. By the way, the tradition of the second-generation tomato scrambled eggs is up to you. It would be best if you could also create the kind of fanatical awakening scene where a low-level ninja NPC like Toss shouts "Evil people have saviors." It is best to have the kind of consciousness that desperately helps Naruto, and it can also bring the story line back to Naruto's not completely crazy state. Of course, it mainly depends on how the author handles it, I'm really looking forward to it. The content after Chapter 400 is too watery. A single plot of a person who is seriously injured and runs away takes several chapters to describe how serious the injury is, which shows signs of artificial intelligence injection.

I have seen Chapter 136 so far, and I have a good impression. There is no time travel or system, but a parallel universe where Iruka died in battle. This makes Naruto's character different from the original but reasonable. Because he is still the reincarnation of Asura, he is still very kind when facing Xiao Li and others, and his character is not completely deviated from the original. On this basis, other characters also follow the original work without deviation, and the characters are vivid and complete. The 136 chapters so far can be considered good, and the look and feel is considered superior among the Naruto Darkening series.