[Apocalypse] [Space] [Hoarding] [Farming] [Infrastructure] Qiao Yin entered a book about the end of the world and became cannon fodder for the Virgin who received a box lunch in the first three chapters. Qiao Yin: Holy Mother? Doesn't exist. She sold the company, took tens of billions of dollars in capital and unlimited space, and started hoarding goods like crazy. While others were beating themselves up over a mouthful of water, she was eating hot pot and singing songs in the safe house. She originally thought that this would be the end of the story, but she didn't know that the half-dead cat she "picked up" turned out to be the fighting beast of the future most powerful leader of the base. One day, the decisive and ruthless leader of the base came to her door. He looked at her room full of supplies and her leisurely life, and fell into deep thought. Later, he piled all the crystal cores and trophies in front of her and said in a low voice: "My life and my base are all yours. I just want... A meal."
Reader comments
It feels relatively immature, with a few points:
1. A bit wordy.
2. It's also a bit over-descriptive.
3. The heroine's space is a backpack, not accompanying it, which means anyone can take it away.
4. The heroine has no special powers.
5. The heroine was just a CEO before wearing it, but after wearing it, she became extremely powerful without any special powers.
630 Million to build a fortress, just don't want it.
The writing in the opening chapter is a bit immature, with a lot of tedious descriptions in just a few chapters, as well as not-so-brainful character creation and plot advancement. Maybe the follow-up will be exciting, but I can't say just the beginning.
It feels relatively immature, with a few points: 1. A bit wordy. 2. It's also a bit over-descriptive. 3. The heroine's space is a backpack, not accompanying it, which means anyone can take it away. 4. The heroine has no special powers. 5. The heroine was just a CEO before wearing it, but after wearing it, she became extremely powerful without any special powers. 630 Million to build a fortress, just don't want it.
The writing in the opening chapter is a bit immature, with a lot of tedious descriptions in just a few chapters, as well as not-so-brainful character creation and plot advancement. Maybe the follow-up will be exciting, but I can't say just the beginning.
I like the rhythm very much [laughing]