[In the early stage, urban daily life (special emphasis), no AI, no brainlessness, anti-routine, multiple female protagonists, distinctive personalities, no facial makeup.
Su Nange, an ordinary graduate. My girlfriend misunderstood and encountered obstacles everywhere.
But inadvertently, he was bound to GTA5.
Game currency can actually be withdrawn.
But high returns come with high risks. Death in the game means GG in reality.
So~
Friendly reminder, the male protagonist in this article has a lot of sex pursuits with women, so readers, please don't copy them.
Reader comments
I have read too many traditional GTA articles, so I like to read this short article. It depicts the ordinary life of a dog, and the sticky and stringy emotional pull. The description hit my heart at once, and it is a wonderful world of fate. The author's writing style is very good, and the description is very vivid and expressive, especially the emotional line, which is so sweet that it made my lips curl up. [Full]
If you haven't tried 💩, you can read this book, it's almost the same as 💩
Four stars is an encouragement, but to be honest, this book is barely three stars at most. After reading more than forty chapters, there are several typical problems in writing novels (or cool novels). I hope I can pay attention to these pitfalls when I remember to write in the future.
First, cheat, I wrote about GTA, and it turns out that the effect of cheat is over hundreds of thousands per day. If you want to press the rhythm, then press at the beginning instead of open and covert. As a result, the writing is a bit more enjoyable and no one explodes. This is the most critical question. It's better to be happy or not.
Second, there are too many character lines, including a harem but not a harem, a single female protagonist but not a single female protagonist, and even interfering with the main plot. The first forty chapters are all about ambiguities with other girls. The title of the book is like selling mutton and selling dog meat. GTA has a golden finger, so use it well. You can do this today and do that tomorrow. Where is the growth of the male protagonist? GTA is not about cultivating immortals. It still has a so-called bottleneck period. The Easter eggs that should be obtained, the plots that should be triggered, and the benefits that should be obtained are all reduced to a short sentence. I earned hundreds of thousands today, and then continued to pick up girls the next day.
Being able to continue updating with a rating of 5.6 Means that you want to make progress, but if you want to make progress, you have to be flexible, so keep working hard.
The chapters progress quickly, Goldfinger is interesting, and the offline plot of GTA is quite interesting. It's not invincible or nonsense.
The protagonist is a very smart ordinary person, relatively charming and able to stand up.
There is nothing wrong with opening the harem. It makes sense, and I guess the author took a lot of trouble to arrange it.
Although there are too many coincidences, sometimes it feels like the author deliberately arranged it, but overall it is not strong.
I have read GTA books before, but this one is considered to be fine grain. If you read my review, you hope to read the first few chapters. The arrangement for breaking up with my girlfriend is really good. I immediately established Ye Tingting as a person. This arrangement really surprised me and was very real.
Meow meow meow, I have read about 40 chapters. The subject matter is quite unique. When it comes to accepting a girl, it is indeed "slowly and leisurely". The protagonist's current strength is not enough, so it should be regarded as a growth story. It is definitely not a cool story. Some parts of the interpersonal relationship are quite detailed. I can feel that the protagonist still has a big brain.
Everyone has their own preferences for radish and cabbage. If you don't like it, don't give it such a low score. [Blow a kiss] I want to see more of meow [almost crying]
I have read Chapter 23 so far, and I give it a 5-star review, because the author writes about the little thoughts between men and women in a very delicate way. It is not a fast-food harem story with multiple female protagonists, but it incorporates the details of life into the description, which makes people feel very real.
Okay, okay, it's a very good urban novel that breaks out of the old routines. The character setting of the ex-girlfriend is quite unique and the various logics make sense. Moreover, this logic is more reasonable for starting a harem. But the update is a bit slow, I finished it in one day
Personally, I feel that it is very good. The plot is coherent and has a lot of foreshadowing. There are always twists and turns, and the logic is good. The slow pace in the early stage is understandable because a lot of background is explained in the front, which makes the subsequent plot more logical.
Overall, it looks surprisingly good, and the woman also ate it, so it's not a loss, and she didn't pull anything else. It can be considered a depiction of modern darkness, even if it's just the tip of the iceberg. But I still have some questions, where is the timeline of the protagonist's online mode [laughing and crying]
It's more of an urban novel than a gta novel. It's quite nice, and the writing is not weird. I just don't feel like the author is a novice
Hey, this kind of article's achievement is really a pity. Today's readers only like to read extremely self-interested articles.
Alas, everything changed the moment the potion appeared, but I can still accept it [awkward laugh]
Not bad, this is the first novel that made me want to smoke on the balcony after reading four chapters. Fortunately, I don't smoke.
Give me a five-star rating to encourage you.
It's okay, but the writing online and offline is not very clear, but this little mistake doesn't matter, it's okay. I am short of books now, so I beg you for something of this quality. Very optimistic about you. [Like][Like][Like]
Damn it, what you wrote is so true. Although your rating is very low, it makes me heartbroken.
So pretty! After reading novels for many years, I have rarely come across one that is so magical that people can't help but follow it. After reading this for a few days, the author is really encouraged! [Like][Like]
I have found the feeling of reading novels in the past. It is much better than the current novels with the same routine.
The characters are portrayed very delicately and the plot logic is rigorous.
In the early stage, the author spent a lot of time laying out the plot and characterizing the characters.
I see a lot of people saying they feel aggrieved. Has the author labeled it a refreshing article? If there is any, please change it quickly. For most people who like to read cool articles, they can't stand the foreshadowing.
I really beg you not to leave a one-star negative review, I'm afraid that one day I won't be able to read it anymore!
This is so well written
Very good book
It's too annoying to read too many articles on the market that pretend to be successful at first, but this kind of thin chaff (slow-growing writing style) is actually good
Not bad, the protagonist's character is indeed pretty good
It's interesting. This is the first time I've met someone who writes about GTA. Come on, author, it's best not to stop updating. [Like]
I've read half of it, it's a great book and interesting to read. It's a pity that I didn't see the complete one [smiles]
This is the first time I have seen this type of book. It is novel, a little exciting, and feels like a double life.
It's a good book, but I can tell there's a high probability that there will be a Shura field later, and everyone from Los Angeles City will come.
I have read too many traditional GTA articles, so I like to read this short article. It depicts the ordinary life of a dog, and the sticky and stringy emotional pull. The description hit my heart at once, and it is a wonderful world of fate. The author's writing style is very good, and the description is very vivid and expressive, especially the emotional line, which is so sweet that it made my lips curl up. [Full]
If you haven't tried 💩, you can read this book, it's almost the same as 💩
Four stars is an encouragement, but to be honest, this book is barely three stars at most. After reading more than forty chapters, there are several typical problems in writing novels (or cool novels). I hope I can pay attention to these pitfalls when I remember to write in the future. First, cheat, I wrote about GTA, and it turns out that the effect of cheat is over hundreds of thousands per day. If you want to press the rhythm, then press at the beginning instead of open and covert. As a result, the writing is a bit more enjoyable and no one explodes. This is the most critical question. It's better to be happy or not. Second, there are too many character lines, including a harem but not a harem, a single female protagonist but not a single female protagonist, and even interfering with the main plot. The first forty chapters are all about ambiguities with other girls. The title of the book is like selling mutton and selling dog meat. GTA has a golden finger, so use it well. You can do this today and do that tomorrow. Where is the growth of the male protagonist? GTA is not about cultivating immortals. It still has a so-called bottleneck period. The Easter eggs that should be obtained, the plots that should be triggered, and the benefits that should be obtained are all reduced to a short sentence. I earned hundreds of thousands today, and then continued to pick up girls the next day. Being able to continue updating with a rating of 5.6 Means that you want to make progress, but if you want to make progress, you have to be flexible, so keep working hard.
The chapters progress quickly, Goldfinger is interesting, and the offline plot of GTA is quite interesting. It's not invincible or nonsense. The protagonist is a very smart ordinary person, relatively charming and able to stand up. There is nothing wrong with opening the harem. It makes sense, and I guess the author took a lot of trouble to arrange it. Although there are too many coincidences, sometimes it feels like the author deliberately arranged it, but overall it is not strong. I have read GTA books before, but this one is considered to be fine grain. If you read my review, you hope to read the first few chapters. The arrangement for breaking up with my girlfriend is really good. I immediately established Ye Tingting as a person. This arrangement really surprised me and was very real.
Meow meow meow, I have read about 40 chapters. The subject matter is quite unique. When it comes to accepting a girl, it is indeed "slowly and leisurely". The protagonist's current strength is not enough, so it should be regarded as a growth story. It is definitely not a cool story. Some parts of the interpersonal relationship are quite detailed. I can feel that the protagonist still has a big brain. Everyone has their own preferences for radish and cabbage. If you don't like it, don't give it such a low score. [Blow a kiss] I want to see more of meow [almost crying]
I have read Chapter 23 so far, and I give it a 5-star review, because the author writes about the little thoughts between men and women in a very delicate way. It is not a fast-food harem story with multiple female protagonists, but it incorporates the details of life into the description, which makes people feel very real.
Okay, okay, it's a very good urban novel that breaks out of the old routines. The character setting of the ex-girlfriend is quite unique and the various logics make sense. Moreover, this logic is more reasonable for starting a harem. But the update is a bit slow, I finished it in one day
Personally, I feel that it is very good. The plot is coherent and has a lot of foreshadowing. There are always twists and turns, and the logic is good. The slow pace in the early stage is understandable because a lot of background is explained in the front, which makes the subsequent plot more logical.
Overall, it looks surprisingly good, and the woman also ate it, so it's not a loss, and she didn't pull anything else. It can be considered a depiction of modern darkness, even if it's just the tip of the iceberg. But I still have some questions, where is the timeline of the protagonist's online mode [laughing and crying]
It's more of an urban novel than a gta novel. It's quite nice, and the writing is not weird. I just don't feel like the author is a novice
Hey, this kind of article's achievement is really a pity. Today's readers only like to read extremely self-interested articles.
Alas, everything changed the moment the potion appeared, but I can still accept it [awkward laugh]
Not bad, this is the first novel that made me want to smoke on the balcony after reading four chapters. Fortunately, I don't smoke.
Give me a five-star rating to encourage you.
It's okay, but the writing online and offline is not very clear, but this little mistake doesn't matter, it's okay. I am short of books now, so I beg you for something of this quality. Very optimistic about you. [Like][Like][Like]
Damn it, what you wrote is so true. Although your rating is very low, it makes me heartbroken.
So pretty! After reading novels for many years, I have rarely come across one that is so magical that people can't help but follow it. After reading this for a few days, the author is really encouraged! [Like][Like] I have found the feeling of reading novels in the past. It is much better than the current novels with the same routine.
The characters are portrayed very delicately and the plot logic is rigorous. In the early stage, the author spent a lot of time laying out the plot and characterizing the characters. I see a lot of people saying they feel aggrieved. Has the author labeled it a refreshing article? If there is any, please change it quickly. For most people who like to read cool articles, they can't stand the foreshadowing. I really beg you not to leave a one-star negative review, I'm afraid that one day I won't be able to read it anymore!
This is so well written
Very good book
It's too annoying to read too many articles on the market that pretend to be successful at first, but this kind of thin chaff (slow-growing writing style) is actually good
Not bad, the protagonist's character is indeed pretty good
It's interesting. This is the first time I've met someone who writes about GTA. Come on, author, it's best not to stop updating. [Like]
I've read half of it, it's a great book and interesting to read. It's a pity that I didn't see the complete one [smiles]
This is the first time I have seen this type of book. It is novel, a little exciting, and feels like a double life.
It's a good book, but I can tell there's a high probability that there will be a Shura field later, and everyone from Los Angeles City will come.
Well written, a bit refreshing.
Not bad, well written
Very comfortable to watch, very good
The writing is good and the logic is reasonable.