Double Penetration: Fantasy Holy Spiritual Root, the First Immortal in the City

I give five stars to this genius script, it's not too cliché. Well, okay, it's very cliche. At most, you can follow the bad and become the best. Why is this plot so familiar?

Not bad, there is a plot Seeing someone helping you solve a trivial problem makes you kneel down and lick someone else's elixir. It's very disgusting to see here. Last time I helped heal someone's paralyzed daughter and confiscated nothing, so it's fair to say they were friends. This time, she just made a phone call and used her authority to help you solve a trivial problem, and then she knelt down and licked you and gave you a pill worth 500 spiritual stones. It shows that the author actually saw those so-called important people just giving gifts and so on. You are a mortal, you can do business, no problem. But you are an immortal. I am not asking you to look down on others, just like a great master in the Tribulation Stage who sends the essence and blood of the ancestral dragon to a young monk in the Qi Refining Stage. You can write like this, but you don't have the brain, or the author doesn't have the brain to think when he was an immortal.

One of the most enjoyable and favorite books I have read recently, please update more often!

The plot is okay, and the writing is coherent at the beginning. Although the urban plot is a bit bloody, it is readable. In the middle and late stages, I felt that the plot of the book jumped very fast, as if it was fast forwarded. Only at the end did I see the author's realism. It turned out that there was no achievement in order to reduce the plot. It was a bit regretful that I didn't finish the book [face covering]

Good-looking, very cool Very beautiful.

It's fun to watch, but it's too short [face covering] [face covering]

This book is very good. Don't worry about the reviewers. Please update it.

Not bad, quite cool [like]

It was okay, but it was a pity that the results were not good and it ended hastily.

It's good-looking and good in every aspect, whether it's the rhythm of recruiting girls or the character of the protagonist.

The author is too short, not enough to read, not enough to read at all

After reading it, there are two books in the front and the back, both of which are good and interesting.

After reading books for many years, I feel that the protagonist is very good in terms of emotions and problem solving, and the characters and plots in the book are also okay.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking It's so beautiful, it's such an invincible harem

It looks okay, author, cheers

This drama is good and worth recommending. It is well organized, decisive in killing, and does not procrastinate in personnel. It is not like other time travelers (selling wood, elderly machines, and motorcycles 🏍). In the world of immortality, getting some elixirs, gold, and beauty to live longer is no faster than those who make money.

Not bad, I can write it

It's still pretty good, nothing bad about it.

I generally don't comment. If I comment on a batch of good-looking ones, please support more updates.

It's pretty good-looking and suits my taste. Come on

I finished reading it in one day. I am happy with every word. The story in the city in the early stage is a little bit unpleasant. Everything else is fine. The author worked hard but it is not enough.

Above average, you can read it. If the book is exhausted, you can read it. After reading it, the double penetration story is indeed pretty good.

The writing is smooth and okay.

Full five-star rating

Very good looking very good looking

Okay, okay, a little more! ! ! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

Very good, wonderful

Good, good, good, good, good, good

I personally like the content, it's patriotic

The three iron laws are: investment in inflationary areas, consumption on the involution track, and making money on the bubble track. The core essence is just as the video says - "simple and concise". [Baring teeth]