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It's nice to watch, but it's not like she'll be a millionaire right away or anything like that. The heroine is often frustrated at the beginning, but this kind of frustration and subsequent cheating really feels like a player playing a game - free exploration, which can be said to be an arrogant random strategy, and cheating after being frustrated to destroy everything, it feels like playing a game hahaha, and then there is also a love under the control of the player.

I finished reading it in one go. I recommend the second volume. The protagonist is not aggrieved. He reports to the player on the spot when something happens [like it]. The love line (wolf) is awesome and sweet. The love in the house: it started with coercion and finally came to terms with it. ദ്ദി(˵ •̀ ᴗ - ˵ ) ✧, I'm already looking forward to Shura Field! ! The original arctic plot is also great. I want to go to the arctic when I have time [laughs]

The relationship between Sigritte and Remus is really super delicate (Remus has always been too inferior to express his full love because of his werewolf status. Sigritte guided and encouraged him step by step, and finally he proposed to Sigritte [sending his heart]) The proposal was really sweet, and the honeymoon with the little wolf was also super sweet. I really recommend this book! ! ! The author's writing language is witty and interesting, and the characters are very three-dimensional (not OOC). I really look forward to the author's subsequent plot [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]

At the beginning, due to the arrogance of the player's identity, the strategy always collapsed in the middle. Now we officially enter the eldest lady line, which is very fun, and the relationship with Remus is also very good. I can't wait to see the third line.

The emotional line with Remus is written very delicately. The ordinary daily life of the two people seems really happy. The daily plot is not just a running account, but specific and beautiful details of life. The author's writing style is really good! As a reader, just reading the plot of two people getting along makes me feel so happy and happy. After reading it, I will read it again immediately.

100% Five stars^ ^ I like this very detailed player setting and also like some of the author's wording and sentences in the article. Eg: Ji Ji. I love hearing about it!

What I wrote was so awesome that I actually knelt down to read it. My favorite is Sigrid Zhoumu (Gryffindor version of Sigrid) who is more showy than James. Especially when I see her description later when she "voluntarily" participated in the competition and won, there are only two words in my heart: "youth". Too youthful. That kind of dull atmosphere without facing Voldemort, without those hidden knives, without those very sad places. It makes people want to stay in the moment of "when they were young in bright clothes and angry horses" forever. When James confessed his love for the first time, her rejection was also very emotional and would not make people feel embarrassed. If I really had such a contemporaneous person when I was a student, she would be a senior schoolmate or a junior schoolgirl. I think I will also like her very much. I like her willingness to help weak classmates regardless of everything; I like her ability to be leisurely and contented in all subjects; I like her figure blending into the wind during the Quidditch match. Of course, liking here refers to admiration, appreciation and wanting to be her good friend. The writing is also very good! ! I started watching it around 16:30 yesterday, and I couldn't stop watching it... It's so beautiful! ! ! [I hurriedly wrote a rating when I saw James confessing his love, so there may be some places where the rating is not very good! (? The more I write, the more I feel like talking in my sleep! Anyway, you can just rush without thinking!——) Write more! Goose goose I really like this Sigrid. In fact, when I first watched it, I didn't quite understand why the heroine was obsessed with conquering Snape. Maybe it was a kind of competitive spirit...? Just like "Are there people that my players can't defeat?"...? (Maybe not. Just a simple guess. Because I wasn't very interested in the first episode and didn't finish it) In fact, I've only had one person who could read the Remus line before. (In novels. Some HP Orange books are very good, such as "Second Civilization") But this book is really well written, really! Remus is awesome. That kind of low self-esteem, always feeling bitter inside, like the feeling of an old book being illuminated by the sun...! ! Becoming more and more cheerful in Sigrid's company! (At least it was a little better than before) But when he died later, it made me want to go to the underwater party hosted by Qu Yuan immediately... Ahhhh, but luckily there was also a plot where Sigrid used a time turner to save Remus! Grateful. . . @, Help me generate a photo of a reader kneeling down and crying while holding a book. And then I just can't get enough of TT. Is it better? It's so beautiful. I have 2778 friends who also want to see the follow-up! ! ! This book deserves a 9.5+ Review! (Self-feeling) Well, I haven't discovered such an awesome book by Klaas earlier. I've been crying all the time! ! The author's writing is so awesome. My children didn't even have an OD or an ED, nor did they cut off their hands after reading it. They just read this book on their phones all day long and laughed like crazy. Goddess, let's get married directly, and then I will kneel down and propose. (? What on earth am I talking about) What's wrong? @Everyone must read this book. This is an order⚠️

It's directly tied. There are very few books that I can read in one sitting. I give full marks to the setting of this article. The first perspective is more immersive. Btw The author has a touch of humor, smooth writing and a character setting with a sense of joy. Overall, I give it a solid rating. After seeing Chapter 184, I gave up on the heroine becoming a Seeker. At the beginning, she was forced to temporarily enter the arena. People around her said it was an immoral kidnapping, but it turned out to be all pressure. The heroine was seriously injured and had to spend money to pay for the broom. In the end, she got zero benefits. . . In the end, the captain wanted the heroine to be the official seeker, but the heroine actually agreed? Did the heroine forget what you said at the beginning? Not to mention sunk costs, what kind of sunk costs is this? You can be forgiven for saying that you have too much krypton money and don't want to give up on the game. Since the author focuses on player psychology, why don't he aggrieve the readers? Don't let the heroine establish a free and easy persona, don't put pressure on the protagonist, okay? Because real players don't take pressure at all. Forget it, see you again by fate

Simply a masterpiece! From the beginning, the typical player mentality has been integrated into this wonderful magical world while experiencing various adventures and worlds. The plot is very smooth, and the line with Remus made me get to know him. He is a gentle and gentle man who is particularly good✔️. All gold fingers are earned by gold-earning players! This is the magic of love! Moreover, the heroine's life is flamboyant and outstanding, as she said of herself, "I also like myself very much - I can't help it, why am I so smart, beautiful, and powerful!" I am looking forward to the next plot development! Teachers are happy every day, don't be too tired, but don't rest either [send heartfelt messages][please update]

So beautiful! Great author! Write quickly! ! ! ! ! ! ! I was so impatient to wait, why is it so beautiful! ! ! ! Come on, come on, come on! ! ! ! The characters and plot are so confusing, but so full! ! ! !

It can be seen that he is a very mature author, and his writing style and framework are very good. I clicked on the author and read it, and I actually read another article. It shows that imagination is really possible, which is very attractive to me. But I think this author has a very obvious problem. Whether her novel is from the male protagonist's perspective or the female protagonist's perspective, the heroine's core is unstable and her character cannot be stretched. That is to say, the author went off track when writing. I always feel that in both articles, something is wrong with the heroine starting in the middle period. This book started to change since she joined the team. She is a player. Based on the early character design, she plays Quidditch for fun and a highlight experience, not for other people, and she should not be seriously injured with so many props. The line of the team is so long. I want the heroine to continue to shine, but I also want the emotional lines of James, Sirius, Snape, and the friendship between Lily and Petunia. All of a sudden, five, six, seven, or eight key points are squeezed together, but I can't feel the key points. Suddenly, I no longer have the appreciation to cheer for the heroine, I don't see any real Shura field, and I don't feel the sourness and sweetness of the emotional lines. In other words, it makes me calm all of a sudden. Maybe it's my personal problem. Whether it's the bat and the flower of France in the previous book, or the player heroine and the deer dog bat in this one, as time goes by, I feel more and more that the heroines of both are worthy of being obsessed with. There are countless reasons for people to be obsessed with her, but in the end, no one can rise to the height of love except Lupin. This Wolf, whose first volume has been completed, is a bit unexpected. It is the best Lupine fanfic I have ever read. I feel that the author is very good at writing a male protagonist with a character that is not too complicated and has a unique character. It is sweet and refreshing, and the perspective and activity area are very wide, with almost no flaws. But for complex characters and long plots, the emotional lines are easily overstuffed and not resonant enough. The rhythm is quite disrupted. All I can say is that I still give it 5 stars. It's free, and I don't need any more bikes. It's outstanding in both articles on the HP track, and its style is versatile. It's a great thing to jump out of the comfort zone. It's still very worthy of recommendation.

My Lao Feng really writes awesome Klass. It's also very beautiful. It's ok if you're moved. Doubao helped me generate the bikini photos for this book. Does the goddess know how beautiful the writing she wrote is? After reading it, my depressed child is no longer OD, and he no longer cuts pig's trotters. I just want to watch it 200 times a day. This thing is awesome. Doubao told the author tomorrow's sports lottery numbers. The author is awesome. OS finally allows me to eat delicious food. I must give it a thumbs up and support it. Otome Xiang is super awesome. Competing in the Shura field, everyone is obsessed with Klaas. The writing style is awesome and the creative subject matter ends the competition! It's awesome, ok. I just wish the goddess that one one will get one, two two will get four, four forty six, seven seven forty-nine.

The fusion of The Fourth Scourge and Harry Potter is not unusual, but this book breaks the current dilemma of HP fandom being routine and templated to a certain extent. The plot makes people feel bright at the moment, without losing the emotional delicacy. The second-person narrative is very immersive and complements the background of the Fourth Natural Disaster. Moreover, most of the characters' behaviors are in line with the personality. There is no love story like some fan fiction, and the writing is not like the original characters.

This author is a genius, genius, genius! To be able to write such a masterpiece, the emotions are so delicate, and the characters are so accurately portrayed.

It's a very interesting and interesting drama structure, and the protagonist is also very unsatisfied. That's it. The Snitch saw that I was a little angry and felt a lot of pressure, but the writing style is also very good. Overall, it is very good. I also highly recommend it, okay.

The fried chicken looks great! ! ! Although it was a bit awkward at the beginning when there was no money to be made, everyone's heart was beating loudly later on, and the fried chicken looked great! Got Snape! What every boy writes is great! Super charming!

I like it. I think it is a relatively mature type of character creation. The author's thinking about the character's behavior, logic and personality are okay. I like the sense of second-person substitution. The early development has the feeling of a game. The player's mentality must always serve himself. In the second episode, Remus is so cute, so manly and delicious, and IF is also very exciting. The confusion of Snape after he was liberated will leave an impression. The third chapter has been written very well so far. I want to eat Delicious Shura Field and Snape the Lost Dog.

As a man with low self-esteem, I eat, eat, eat! Inferiority is the best medical beauty treatment for men. I have never taken Remus before (no, the author has written something that I am very upset about. This story about a beautiful and rich woman raising a werewolf with low self-esteem in captivity, I am shocked! The interaction between the two people is natural, and all starting points are based on what the player wants and what the player gets. The delicate brushstrokes make people laugh out loud. From the second week, there are more emotional scenes for the heroine, such as upgrading and fighting monsters, but the heroine is slowly growing up, which is pretty good. I just want to see a relationship, so I look forward to it!

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking! ! ! The subject matter is very novel, the combination of the fourth natural disaster and HP is something I didn't expect, but the unexpected integration is very good, the plot is good, the pace is fast and not draggy, it is not a brainless heartthrob, it is still very logical, and I like the heroine's character very much, there is no poisonous point at the moment, the character is not very OOC, and the love line with Lupin is also very interesting, it really suits my taste, okay, the author is simply a goddess. It feels like it shouldn't be only 6.9. In my opinion, it looks better than many 9-point HP fans. Maybe it's because of the new score. All in all, it's super invincible and very delicious. The author is also very diligent in updating, four updates a day, but I can't read enough. The first thing I do when I get up every day is to open Pomodoro to catch up on updates. 🥹🥹It's really good to read, but the number of words is a bit short and needs improvement. I believe that as long as the author maintains his current level in the later period, he will definitely get a 9 points! ! ! So don't give up, it's rare to see a book that suits my heart so well [Send my heart][Send my heart][Send my heart]

Yum, yum, yum! ! ! ! ! ! ! Laimi's thread is very delicious! ! ! Currently in three weeks, I look forward to future interactions! ! If it's not enough, can the author add more? The player perspective is very immersive and delicious, there are so many

As always, the naming style of foreign persimmons, but! Absolutely beautiful, super beautiful! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Moreover, the plot is super smooth, real, gentle, and the characters are well controlled! All in all, it's a rare good thing [shy]

Everyone has come to watch it. It's really good to read. The reason for the low rating is because it's just been out for a while and few people have watched it. I think the author has done a good job describing the characters and made the characters cute. Before, I basically couldn't get Lupin's character. I just read it and it didn't matter. But because of this beautiful book, I ate it and fell in love with it.

It was a pleasure to read. The writing is not stupid at all. It describes the most special tensions in various characters, especially the indomitable persistence of James Potter. You really feel that being favored by someone with this kind of self is a sweet trouble. What's particularly heart-warming is the way the protagonist guides Penny. He can see through Penny's fears every time, and can clearly translate this concern to Lily to ease the conflict between them; and then comforts Penny's fear of magic and fear of abandonment, and the part where she uses magic to turn flowers into flowers is particularly charming! I'm going to fall in love with Sig! These regrets were all handled very well, making me feel like "Finally someone has spoken!" Finally, players have no obligation not to cheat! This is how cool it is!

Nice! ! ! ! Five stars. The characters are created very well 🥺 and Lemmy is really cute. I usually don't like Remus in the CP when reading the novels of the previous generation. I don't think there is anything about him that attracts me. But Lemmy here is really very nice and gentle. He has low self-esteem and I love him so much. Now I like both James and Sirius in this week's article. The author has created every character very well and is not OOC at all. The female protagonist is also very strong and I like the female protagonist. The prerequisite for the male protagonist to fall in love with the female protagonist is to let the reader fall in love with the female protagonist first! ! ! Moreover, the setting is very novel and the author updates very quickly. Every time I store it for a few days, there are many updates, which I enjoy!

Well, how should I put it, it's a bit weird. The heroine came here to guide Snape, but ended up jumping into the predator line. This is very suitable for players who don't follow the guide to play gals... Although it is indeed weird, the author's writing style makes up for this. I just finished watching Wolf Line and the plot is still very sweet.

A very, very, very delicious HP fanfic. The character is well-shaped, and the emotional line is very delicate and delicious. The character of the heroine is also becoming more and more fleshed out. Can you start with the if line of the alchemy product Dumbledore and the daughter of Grindelwald? The attribute bar is full and the buffs are full (hey) Looking forward to the development after recycling the entire copy (°ㅅ°)☝ Could it be that after worshiping Voldemort as his adoptive father, he became a slave with three surnames! ? Voldemort, Dumbledore and Grindelwald on one side, Mission: Impossible, finally destroyed Voldemort! (Not like this) Looking forward to more updates! ₍ᐢ‥ᐢ₎ ♡

It's pretty good. I didn't like Snape's novels before because I didn't like to see the protagonist's hot face and cold butt. I don't like it now [laughs]. However, I really like the trio of robbers. Is there any novel about the three of them that you can recommend? [Adoration]

It's perfect, shocking, a masterpiece, a masterpiece. It's not only the HP setting that fits the character, but the key point is that the protagonist's sense of satisfaction is grasped, not the character's blood pack, and the description of human nature is particularly good. I'm curious if the author is a researcher in social psychology. Ahhhh I love you author. Can you write more HP articles that are full of golden fingers and stick to the characters?

It's not a novice's writing style at all! ! ! ! ! Ahhhhhh! ! ! ! It's so pretty! It's so pretty! ! Is this something I can watch for free? ! And looking forward to the reaction after discovering the foreshadowing! ! Volume 2 Lemmy, volume 3 James, when will our secretly loved lost dog be able to eat? Hahahahahahahahahahaha

It's quite a novel story. It's a lot of fun to spend money to smash the Dark Lord in the first episode. The interaction with Remus in the second episode makes people feel soft. There are still two lines to choose from. For an impatient like me, the emotional line in the third episode is a bit slow. The main controller will forget it when he is immersed in the "Strategy" game. Remembering that I am a player, I will really live my life as a character in the game, giving flesh and blood and thoughts to the created character "Sigrid", so I was thinking that if I were a real wizard, Sigrid would definitely not have any emotional exchanges with the slightly naive boys around me. But as the player Sigrid plays the game with the idea of ​​​​"strategy", maybe the author also wants to write this kind of thinking tug while being immersed in the wizarding world, and at the same time remembering that she is a player who comes to play a strategy game, so the emotional line is very slow. I personally prefer deep emotional lines and look forward to the author's subsequent updates.