After Being Tagged by the Crazy Critic Lao Gong, He No Longer Pretends to Be an A-Lister.

The two strong men doting each other really love each other, okay. Crazy criticizing the beauty Gong really dotes on his wife. In short, my wife is always right in whatever she does. Anyone who hurts my wife will die. Shou also falls in love with Gong at first sight. She treats Gong as his wife and does not allow anyone to hurt the "wife". The emotional pull between the two is also well written. I look forward to the later stage of Crazy criticizing the beautiful woman falling off the horse and domineeringly protecting his wife. Come on, it's very well written. I hope you keep writing and it will stay with you until the book is finished! ! ! [Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

It's a sweet book, with a little bit of astringency in the middle (really just a little bit, as big as a fingernail). Very nice😍😍😍😍😍 E attacks (Beauty, 186), A receives (185) Who knows the feeling of "thinking that you are the marked party" but turning out to be the "marked party"? . . The tenderness of attack is given only to Shou... I'm really looking forward to the climax (identity being revealed) described in the introduction. The author is great, and the writing style is also very nice. Come on☺ (I'll add more comments after reading it…)(=^▽^=)

Good-looking and beautiful. Ming Xu is simply a cute creature (by Mr. Li's side) acting coquettishly anytime and anywhere. Li Zhan is also super doting on him, and they directly give each other a sense of security and love. Both of them support each other. Love is possession and protection.

It's beautiful and awesome [Love] [Love] The two of them are so in love that they don't know what the universe is about [Admiration] [Admiration] This is the easiest way to defeat a horse I have ever seen! Sure enough, a love brain should be matched with a love brain!

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, this book is, is really well written. It's super beautiful. Xiao Ming was really handsome when he rescued Xiao Zhan. But those chapters are really touching. We, Xiao Zhan, have been thinking about Xiao Ming. We know that we may not be able to hold on anymore. What we think of is Xiao Ming. You should always be happy. Ming Zhan has been 99 [almost crying] [almost crying]

[Twin strong favors + exclusive preference + falling horses] Ming Xu & Li Zhan The narrative is very smooth, the emotional line is rigorous and not procrastinating, it is very coherent, and the writing style is also good. After all, as the author's first BL, the quality is quite good! Please continue to persevere. The world you write really attracts and moves me. What you can get more easily is the tacit understanding between two people, such as some moments of tacit understanding when two people get along, and some small details. This book handles everything well, and there are no poisonous points so far. Moreover, the combat power of the two people is distributed very well, and they do not create a "weak" image of one party for various reasons, which is very good. As for the horse-falling aspect, this is the most exciting time for the double-power story - the husband and wife face the enemy together. If I came here for the introduction, it can be said that it is very tasteful. Because this part of the plot is really comfortable, the settings are very reasonable and not abrupt at all. Take a look, it is definitely a worthwhile trip. In addition, this article does not have any "dumb" plots in the traditional sense. The situation of "stopping talking when faced with a difficult question" does not exist at all. The two people in this article either explained it immediately or practiced it directly. Regarding love rivals, both people have love rivals. But I think this aspect is still handled well. There are no major poisonous points. The overall response is very good and the explanation is quick. This reflects the advantage of both people being possessive and asserting their sovereignty at the first opportunity. As for the plot arrangement, the arrangements so far are very consistent with the development of the story, and the character creation is also very three-dimensional. The arrangement of the main story and the daily small theater is also very reasonable. There is no long single content. It still looks very smooth and refreshing. Yun Lan, a hard-working migrant worker, and so on, are all well portrayed. From the above points, we can also see that the emotional line of this article is not a very gentle one, but it can also be considered a "growing" relationship? Two people learn from each other and improve each other. It won't be too bland, but it won't be full of content that affects the perception. In short, it means that the emotional line is very good. Finally, this article can give you one thing - [Recommended Reading]. I hope the author will continue to update and wish you a happy life and all the best.

Nice! ! ! ! The writing is good, and the setting is also on my XP, but it's just not enough to read [crying], please work hard, waiting for the update [shy] Friends are quick to share their praise with me [sending heartfelt comments]

A Zhan and A Xu get along very warmly and happily. In their eyes, each other is their special case, and they give each other a love that is always available to them (in my opinion). The plot is plain but they show their care and love for each other. The two love brains are super matched. Li Zhan knows that Ming Xu's identity is full of doubts, but does not doubt it (the love brain is indeed A Zhan's best dowry). Ah Xu is a typical dowry. Hei (pretending to be Li E) cares about A Zhan's feelings, but also cares about his own identity because he loves A Zhan too much, fearing that the other party will know that he is not an omerga and will feel alienated. In fact, as far as I can see, I think Li Zhan loves Ming Xu himself, whether he is gentle or paranoid, I think both parties love each other very much, and they are the special salvation of each other's relationship. Forgive me for not being able to describe the plain but healing love between A-Zhan and A-Xu in a few words. Anyway, this book gave me a good reading experience and it is my favorite type. In the follow-up plot of Qi Shi, Ah Xu's identity changes [Adoration] Of course, it's good now. I hope A Zhan can be nicer to A Xu. I think Ming Xu is very cute. He restrains his sharpness and doesn't want to let A Zhan know about his bad experience. He has scruples about A Zhan and others. I love this so much, and I want blatant love. My review is for reference only, not everyone will have the same feelings about this book as I did. I hope Li Zhan and Ming Xu will be peaceful and warm, and be happy and healthy for the rest of their lives. The author has updated it a lot. Their relationship is so cute [blowing kiss]

It's really good-looking. The double strength is so delicious. I'll just say it.

Come and support this author. It is the first time he writes an article and he can write it so well. The logic is clear and not sloppy. The plot is very exciting and the thinking logic is very good. It makes people have a strong feeling of reading. If you can accept the birth of a baby, come on! ! ! If the unacceptable baby enters by mistake, otherwise it will hurt the author. The author is a very good baby [flying kiss] looking forward to the follow-up sweet plot and the plot of raising cubs [making faces] There may be children in the future. It is recommended that the baby enter by mistake! Entered by mistake! Entered by mistake! Anyway, this is all I want and I will always follow you [making a face]

It's super good-looking, and the slap-in-the-face plot is particularly enjoyable. I haven't seen such a slap-in-the-face plot in a long time. Some of the stories can't even pretend to be cool. And the relationship is completely ok. I think I can watch both attack and control, because I do love each other, but some mutual love stories also have a lot of pitfalls. This one has none of them. There is no annoying group of relatives and friends, and there is no disgusting third person crush (here refers to the third person with a strong sense of existence, because I think the love rival in the article is the love rival) A cannon fodder with no sense of existence), there was no hesitation about feelings, the whole process was passionately in love, no misunderstandings, no crematorium, no one fell in love with the other but didn't realize it, there were no confessions that were grinding, I really like the emotional line and slap in the face of this article, the author, I will follow you forever [Send my heart][Send my heart] This seems to be DaDa's first male-to-male novel. I think it's very well written, because I don't pay much attention to writing when reading novels. I only focus on the plot and setting. The emotional line of this article is my favorite in Tomato. I hope DaDa can publish more works [Blow Kiss]

The character creation is very good. They join forces and show off their sweetness at any time. They are the two strong male protagonists that I want to see. The only flaw is that the emotional line is concise and decisive, while the others are lengthy and detailed. Although this is for the emotional needs of the two male protagonists, fortunately, there is not much other development after the two confirm their relationship. I am really looking forward to the two of them showing off their sweetness every minute, so sweet that it overflows the screen.

Li Zhan is really gentle to Mingxu, always pampering him, doting on him, and tolerating him. Mingxu also loves Li Zhan very much. Love brain is the best dowry for a man. Later, they have Xiao Qinming, and their relationship is still sweet. Xiao Qinming is also very good. After all: "Sensible children are never here to distract love, but to fulfill love." Looking forward to the next new book ❤️❤️❤️ [Blowing Kisses]

It's beautiful and delicious. Don't be too doting on Mr. Li. Mr. Ming is just a sweetie in front of Mr. Li. To the outside world, it freezes to death. It's hard not to love the contrast. The comments in the comment section make me laugh to death because there are too few about babies [crying]. I want to read it. I just finished watching the extra story. Oh my god, I have no regrets. I'm so happy. I'm so happy [crying]

It's good to read. This novel touched my xp. I like it. Ming Ming and Zhan Zhan must be 99. I will keep chasing it. The author must not let me down, a poor little reader~ฅ( ̳• ◡ • ̳)ฅ

It's so good-looking [blowing kiss][blowing kiss] I really like it [admiration][admiration] Li Zhan is a sunny and handsome guy, Ming Xu is a gentle beauty (to Li Zhan) [shy][shy] Yun Lan is so hard, working hard as a worker [smirking] [smirking]

Awesome class. This is really beautiful. Both of them are very good babies. One word can be said along the way: sweet! I quite like the characters of both parties. They love each other and the double arrows are very thick. There is no misunderstanding. Both parties have their mouths. It's so cool! 😋😋

It's nice to look at, and it's not abusive at all. It's really to my liking. There are no messy misunderstandings. Both of them love each other unswervingly. They don't like to see abuse for the sake of abuse. I won't poke this needle! ! Recommend! ! I cried several times while watching it😭

It's so beautiful. I wish it would be over as soon as I wake up.

Although this book has just been published, the pull between the characters written by the author is very interesting, the author's writing style is also very good, and the plot is also fast-moving [cool]

Super pretty! ! ! ! The emotions are very delicate, I love ε=ε=(ﾉ≧∇≦)ﾉ more and more! ! !

I have finished watching it all offline. It is indeed a book in my favorites. The emotional line is really good, and I like the setting of the characters very much. Ming Xu is strong but gentle, and Li Zhan is tolerant and loving. Although the writing style is a little green, the plot is still very good. I really like it. And Xiao Li Qinming is so good (^~^)

It's an interesting beginning, and even more interesting is the ambiguous pull between the two. I'm looking forward to what kind of wonderful expression Li Zhan will have when Ming Xu explodes in strength [laughing evilly], saying "good boy" every time, hahahahaha It's good-looking, don't miss it if you like double strength! ! !

It's really beautiful, I cried when I watched it emotionally [Blowing Kiss] Li Zhan is gentle, strong and yet arrogant. After meeting Ming Xu, he has a whole guiding character. It's great. Ming Xu gets love, learns to love and love. It's a really gentle article, but the famous scenes are quite passionate. I love the side-by-side fight [Adoration]

It's very well written. I've been following it for a long time. I deducted one star because I don't like reading about childbirth (the author didn't specify this at the beginning), but today's update is about pregnancy, so that's it. The pampering and pampering between the two of them before this was pretty good. You can watch it for me later [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking]

It's so sweet. If it is made into an absolute masterpiece of a TV series, E's exclusiveness and full preference for A, and A's redemption and preference for E, would be so sweet that I can't help but [fly a kiss] [fly a kiss] [fly a kiss].

It's so good-looking~ The double strength is super super super super good-looking~! ! ! ^0^[Send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][shy][shy][shy][shy][shy]

It's good to watch, if you want to see possessiveness, come here if you want to see sweet love, come here if you want to see a and E. I want to see the two strong ones come. (づ￣3￣)づ╭❤～

Super pretty! ! ! A true duo. Many novels write about two strong characters, but one of them is still weakened. Not this one. And except for the slight sourness, most of it is sweet. Worth it. Sweet. There was no misunderstanding or misunderstanding between the two parties [shy]

Ahhhhhhhhhh so sweet and delicious! There is almost no abuse in the whole story. They like each other and dote on each other. There is almost no misunderstanding. EA text. There is a possibility of giving birth to a child. The article reads very well and the writing style is also good. [Love] Mr. Li and Mr. Ming must be together for a long time!