I Only Edited a Plot, Why Did Chengmei Become so Powerful?

I think the author's setting is very good, but as the protagonist (whether the protagonist of this article or the one in the setting book), he spent too long in the first small "dungeon". I feel that the development route of the subsequent two protagonists Ying Helin, which is the direction of the entire book, was not revealed. You can only see the entanglement of characters in a small copy, which is too one-sided and limited. If the author wants to bury a foreshadowing in the small copy, or add important subsequent characters, then the content of this "copy" will be too protracted. I came here for Ying Wu Shi Long She. Before reading it, I hoped that he would have divinity written on him, but everything depends on the author. What I mean is that many readers actually want to see the relationship between Ying and Lin because of the foreshadowing of the previous content. When I saw this "copy", I thought it was just a transitional chapter that would end soon. Because this "copy" was too procrastinating, I tried to skip the content of the "copy" from the table of contents and focus on the relationship between Ying and Lin. But I didn't see it from the title. If the author's book does not focus on Ying and Lin, but only on Ying, I can accept it. In fact, as long as the content is interesting, it doesn't matter who the protagonist should interact with. The main thing is that the content of the "dungeon" is too protracted and there is nothing to see from it. In addition, the plot has no ups and downs and is boring. But the setting of this book by the author is really rare. I am super looking forward to the development of the plot in the future! ! I hope the author will not take this comment to heart. This is just my personal opinion. Big cheers for more updates! !

The storyline is pretty good. [Thinking] The characters are also very distinct, but the text doesn't need too many "..." Ellipses. It's a bit uncomfortable to read the book after a few pauses. Overall, it's okay. I don't know if the author wants to enter the forum/comic theme.

It's okay. I was a little impatient when watching the fantasy. I hope I can finish it quickly. In fact, I think that for this kind of subject, I prefer to read the forum body. I hope I can fast forward to the forum.

I only realized that I didn't post a comment when I tied it. I was so fascinated by it haha [laughs] I would never say that I was seduced by Ying Buji's beauty with black hair, red eyes and long hair [rolls eyes] The setting is quite attractive, the plot is also very touching, and there is a lot of suspense. The "ex-husband" plot is written very naturally, and there is also a fan meeting plot (I won't say which characters are punned) haha, but it feels like a knife is like the tip of an iceberg showing up [Pout], I hope there will be a happy ending, okay [Blow a kiss] There are some problems 1. After reading the first copy, I kept thinking about how Lin Xuan passed in the original work alone. Could it be that the original work is fake? 2. I still don't understand the current situation of the protagonist and his body, which is what the fallen angel explained. I love this book so much. I don't want the author to update it more, but I want it to be updated continuously. At least he can update it to the finale! Although the fragments are scattered to the corners of the world like a goddess scattering flowers, and the collection process is probably very difficult, I believe that they can be put together safely [laughing] Don't let the protagonist turn into darkness and directly blend into the world to moisturize things silently in the end. Author, you'd better drop the scales at the end of the introduction. In fact, it is a feint shot that has no effect at all. You also know that respect between people is mutual, right? [Laughing] There must be a happy ending [smile]

It's a rare book that doesn't look like a tomato! 🥺🥺🥺 Although I can't write a long review yet... But it has stolen my heart in just a few chapters, and the characters and everything are quite touching! Looking forward to the next plot🥺🥺🥺

Nb666 is so good-looking, and the protagonist's personality is really good! The author updates so many times a day, it's true, there is no crash point at the moment

I have read Chapter 48 so far. Here are my personal opinions. At the beginning, it was said that the protagonist has traveled through time in an unfinished novel, but as far as I can tell, it has not reflected the characteristics of a time-traveling novel. Occasionally, plot points and modifications have been mentioned, but very few. The layout of the first story is too long. The article is about the protagonist, who came to a "cocoon" because of a series of things. It does not expand too much about the world view, and it does not show the characteristics of the protagonist's new identity. Instead, the protagonist uses another identity to help the other person realize his dream. (I haven't finished reading it here, but I personally don't want the protagonist to fulfill his wish for the other person in the ending. It's a boy who has a crush on another girl. Maybe it's because of the disparity in family backgrounds between the two parties. The way the boy chooses to chase her is more like a prank, such as being funny. At least from the girl's perspective, there is no good point about this boy at all, except for his academic performance). Original text: The vague memory about the wristband and the toad was brought back, along with the secret joy of succeeding in the prank, the inexplicable excitement when she saw her angry, and the deeper feeling of annoyance afterward... All came to his mind. That desire to be seen, even in the worst way; that kind of hand that you know is wrong but can't help but stretch out... The protagonist is introduced at the beginning as a background board in this novel. However, the protagonist Lin Xuan in the novel does not have any special features in the previous chapters. It is more of a soothing effect for the protagonist. (In the original work, the protagonist met Lin Xuan after a tiring day and saw his complaining expression and expressed similar emotions) The first few chapters were very attractive to me, and the identity assigned to the protagonist was quite big. It's a pity that I didn't see this special identity again later on.

Cold-faced cuteness is so delicious! ! ! The cold-faced Xiaolong is simply not too cool! I ate a lot!

I finally came across a uncensored game where the main character is a dragon. Coupled with my favorite settings of beauty, strength, misery and death escape, the writing is also very good, and it perfectly meets the preferences of this dragon controller. . Also, no one understands that dragons can be mothers, right? Especially the kind of cold-faced and cute dragon, wouldn't it be nice to lick it? [I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry] In short, author, I will follow you forever! [Shy][Blow a kiss][Send a heart]

It's okay, I just hope the illusion will pass soon.

It's nice to watch, but what does this illusion mean? I feel like I've lost my B-frames, and I still want to see the real world.

It looks good, the plot and writing are good, but the number of pictures is too few. . . It is recommended to save it and read it again

This is the first time I have encountered a book that fits my xp so well. . . . Don't stop updating, boss, don't stop updating, don't stop updating, boss😭😭😭I beg you, keep updating, keep updating. I really want to see the finale. . . Woo woo woo 😭😭😭😭

It's really good to read. Although it's a new one, the fantasy part in the middle is a bit long. If you read it carefully, you'll still find a lot of eye-catching descriptions. The beauty, strength and misery are handled very well. There are no other stories where the misery is forcibly exaggerated. This one is quite exciting [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration]

Super pretty! The plot is super interesting! A must see! The identity of the protagonist is very clear, and the author's writing is very smooth, and the scene description is very realistic and picturesque! The setting of "Beautiful, Strong and Miserable" really pokes me! ! A must see! A must see!

It's really beautiful, but it's just a little lacking [blowing kisses]

Happy Valentine's Day. I have read this book until now. I really like the author's writing style. I feel it is shocking and delicious. [Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss]

Hey, I like this setting, it's written in my heart! Although there may be some problems at the beginning, the author is very persuasive and believes that this book will get better and better (~‾▿‾)~

Personally I think it looks pretty good! ! And the author's writing style is really good! [Shy][Shy] I also like the character setting and plot of the protagonist very much! [Learned][Learned]

Yes, rare gold

It's really beautiful! But there are so few...

So far it feels okay, I hope the boss can persist (ง •̀_•́)ง Come on

The description of the later scenes is full of lingering charm. The portrayal of the protagonist gradually blends from the relaxed and happy time traveler to the cruel experience of the past, and the portrayal is very vivid.

It looks good, I love watching it, and I will update quickly while sitting there [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]

It's currently non-toxic, looks good, feels good, and doesn't have too much fuss.

You know. Sometimes being awkward and funny is also an advantage. And it looks very cool. [Laugh][laugh][laugh] I prefer to read books that are enjoyable, and the author's setting really pokes fun at me. So cute, so cute. I just feel that sometimes the plot is fast, and sometimes the plot is slow. Maybe it's because of the serialization. But it's delicious. I hope that the characters can be more detailed. After all, the characters are multi-faceted, and many details can be criticized a little more. For different people, there are differences in attitudes towards other people. I personally think it is not OOC or anything. And when a new book comes out, some people will definitely want to criticize this point, so I will say it first. Also, the main character is really cute. I read the author very quickly, and I hope that the author will make an update one day. I would like to ask if the book's low rating is because the rating has just been published. . .

It's quite interesting, and I saw the author asking for comments, so that's it.

Keep up the current pace, come on

It's delicious! Tasty! Tasty!

Come on, teacher, it looks great [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]