Big Luck with an Elbow at the Beginning, Failed to Cross Teyvat

+1⭐ For having the courage to write, +1⭐ for novice writers, +1⭐ for great fortune, +1⭐ for lazy authors [laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly] Ha Jizuo is just an ordinary old casual party player, not a research party in the strict sense! So you may not understand or forget some information. I am trying my best to make up for the previous information. If there is any mistake, please don't delve too deeply into it! You can tell me in the comment area and I will change it. If it is really difficult to change it, please become a second-hand person. If you are serious about it, you are right. [Laughs][laughs] Everyone has their own preferences. Please don't impose your opinions on others. If you really don't like it, you can just leave it out or give it three stars. Haji accepts suggestions humbly. If you have any ideas, you can tell me. I will adopt them as appropriate, but please don't criticize me. I am a marshmallow. If you offend me, you will be stepping on marshmallows. You will only secretly get angry [cry][cry][cry]

Come on, author, now the Witch Club is the latest plot, taking the lead, and the author's writing is really good.

Does the heroine have Alice?

It's a good start, but I personally don't like to read political articles. I like to read more light-hearted articles.

Very nice, good luck to the author

Super nice and complete plot

You can update more of the new author's writing. But why does this seem to be... Forget it, I'm a little panicked. It won't sound good if I say it out loud.

Not bad, this reversed Noelle is really 6 [laughing]

The overall impression is okay. It would be better if the number of words in each paragraph could be controlled. Too long paragraphs will have a great impact on the reading experience.

Love to read good books

Good, good, good, good

Overall, it's pretty good. It's just that Noelle's reversal of the pill should take effect for a while, rather than permanently.

The introduction is very attractive and the content is coherent.

The writing is pretty good, please keep up the good work, author.