Pendor: Starting as a Prisoner of the Noldor Elves

Isn't the author's timing at the end of the article not correct? Also, from time to time in the dialogue, Cheluolun is used. If you like, you can change it.

Very good, good knight-and-blade fanfic

, I hope you can keep writing. It is very well written. It has written a step towards the Pandor riding and slashing that I really want to see. It is well integrated and the characters are very three-dimensional 😄😄

That female elf has no role to play later?

The plot is okay, but the layout is uncomfortable to watch. It's suitable for listening.

Come on! Author. Although I haven't achieved anything now, I believe gold will definitely shine.

The low-difficulty version of Bo'er Jijin's Family History

Yes, this is very good

I feel that the writing is very realistic and very beautiful.

Very good Mount and Blade, makes my f1f3 charge [sneaky laugh]