(The rating just came out. You’re welcome to give it a try.) [Clan Cultivation] [Mortal’s Journey] [Behind-the-scenes] [Ensemble cast] [System] [Longevity]
Lin Yuan, an unlucky wage slave, transmigrates into a dying, busted System and binds himself to an equally bankrupt, shabby cultivation clan.
The System gains energy by absorbing unconscious energy sources and through its Hosts willingly sacrificing their life force.
In other clans, cultivation means stockpiling resources, raising spirit beasts, and scheming against one another.
For the clan Lin Yuan binds himself to, cultivation means: Come on, sacrifice some of your lifespan.
From then on, the clan’s whole approach changes.
Cultivation? Sacrifice three days, and I’ll unlock a technique that corrects your form.
Farming? Sacrifice a month, and I’ll provide recipes for spirit wine and medicine.
A bottleneck? Sacrifice three years, and I’ll point out the key to breaking through.
A desperate situation? Sacrifice five years, and I’ll calculate a way out.
A powerful enemy at the gates? The clan elder grins and burns away his failing body. “Ancestor, take these hundred years of my life in exchange for a hundred years of prosperity for the clan!”
The cultivation world is baffled: How does this family get stronger the more they sacrifice?!
Then the Immortal Alliance besieges them, demanding to know their wicked technique.
Lin Yuan, watching from behind the scenes, gives a helpless chuckle. “What wicked technique? We simply entrust ourselves to one another. For them, I calculate every path to Longevity!”
I don't know what you think. Why should the first important supporting character introduced in the family story and the most talented person in the family be a girl? It's not discrimination, but the current environment of male videos hates female supporting roles with a heavy ratio of standing in the early stage, because most authors can't write well. You haven't rated this book yet. Four out of ten people can read it, and you also have it in your introduction. There is no introduction to whether the girl will get a son-in-law or get married. The reader will subconsciously think that she is getting married, and the impression will be even worse. You may have started writing without an outline when your mind was hot. If so, I advise you to change your career. Readers have no idea about the taboos of family stories. Even if you insist on it, but don't make changes, unless you are lucky, you will most likely remain a middle-class and low-class author.
Jingxin Tan wasted 10,000 days of life energy just to hang out, absorbing a large amount of spiritual veins and triggering a beast wave. At this time, the system has not even returned to the host, and it is completely unable to understand the meaning and value of this bridge.
This book is indeed relatively novel at the beginning, but as for the last two chapters, I feel like it doesn't have the qualities that the protagonist should at least have. I was impetuous for a moment, and then caused this kind of disaster in the world I traveled to, this part of the beast tide in the small secret realm. It makes people sick to their stomachs. It's all about having fun for yourself, and then letting others bear the cost. Don't you understand the principle of fishing when the lake is exhausted? I don't quite understand it. To put it mildly, the protagonist is not from this world. There is nothing wrong with coming to this world to develop. However, you directly destroyed the spiritual spring, triggered a beast tide, and caused the death of so many people. Obviously this result can be avoided, but just for the sake of having fun, I feel that this behavior is a bit anti-human.
This system or the protagonist's words are so secretive that he has to say one out of ten sentences when others are discussing things in the hall.
The subject matter is novel and beautiful, and every little character is well-described, and everything is well written. But the only thing that I can't accept is that the male protagonist sucked up the source of the spiritual veins of the secret realm and killed tens of thousands of people because of greed and ignorance. This is the great cause and effect. It can't be washed away at all.
Sudden illness cannot be cured
It's a very good book. I don't know why the score is so low. I hope the author will read more. I always thought it was a fairy grass until I read Chapter 120, when I saw the protagonist howling and sucking it dry, sucking up the entire spiritual vein and triggering a beast tide. Then the author suddenly wrote a long paragraph about the glory of humanity under the beast tide, including the nephew who sacrificed his life to save his uncle, and the brother who resolutely broke up. The key is that the genesis of all this stems from the greed of the protagonist. The brighter the glory of humanity in the face of disaster, the more he hates this greedy protagonist.
Well, it's a slow-paced history of family prosperity. If anyone likes to read slow-paced novels, you can give it a try. I didn't see many bad points. The overall plot is step-by-step. Visually, at this cultivation speed, 1,000 pictures should be there, unless the cultivation speed becomes faster later.
This protagonist might as well just be the system. His early psychological activities are too active. You are useful, and others can't do anything to you, so I worship you. Put aside your sincere worries and worry about yourself first. If this family can refine the weapon spirit, but you haven't repaired the shell yet, it may be the same as if you can get into the shell and become a system. Others will use their mental power to brand you and refine you directly.
If you consume 3 days of longevity, your hair will grow gray. So speechless