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Not bad, the writing is good, but I suggest adding Daphne as one of the heroines.

It's a rare hp fan novel. It's very interesting, but the heroine is recommended to have multiple heroines or two heroines. The scenes between Daphne and Hermione are too heavy @Mozishan Mountain Keeper

The beginning is very toxic, but the subsequent plot is good. It is a rare high-quality article in the same genre (except for the beginning). It is creative and not homogenous. It is not considered a nanny, but I don't know why the score is so low (although the beginning is indeed very toxic, really) Attachment: It is strongly recommended to add Daphne to the heroine (although I support the single heroine Hermione when reading other novels, this Daphne is so well written that she really should be added to the heroine. If not, the protagonist may appear to be a bit scumbag)

I see that everything is good now, but after reading other comments, I am afraid of giving away a girl. Basically, what male book lovers hate is giving away a girl. Instead of giving away a girl, it is better to sacrifice the female partner. It is really poisonous to give away a girl.

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It's very interesting. It's one of the few HP fanfics that I can finish completely. It's still my favorite single female protagonist, Hermione. The male protagonist is a very versatile and qualified Slytherin. At the end, he is already the strongest in HP. I don't know if there are any extras. I really want to watch it.

Author, your book is the best one about Harry Potter that I have read so far. The only thing that is not so good for me is the plot about Fleurney. Your book has more than five stars in my personal mind. It can be said that the writing is very good, but the only regret in my heart is Furong Ni. Come on. Looking forward to your follow-up.

If I need to choose a wand... I choose the Sword in the Stone (⑅˃◡˂⑅)

The atmosphere is very relaxed and not tiring to watch. If you have a novel that you mainly read, this one is great for leisure time. If you happen to be interested in the wizarding world of Harry Potter, that might be a little better. It has a layer of magic world skin, but the main attraction is the charm of the characters in the Harry Potter series.

The author is great. I originally thought this book was very good, but I would like to ask, who is the heroine of this book? (Sorry, this is really important to me)

There's nothing wrong with it, it's not toxic. Give me 5 stars to encourage the author. I didn't charge any money. The author's works are considered very good in the Tomato Harry Potter fan series.

Very good, keep writing

By the way, can you make the Ten Commandments like the Mandarin and wear them on your own hands or give them to your family or something? Brothers, there is a reason why I have added a rating of 6.6. The writing is as funny. Brothers, there is a reason why I have added a rating of 6.6. The writing is as funny. If it doesn't work, go read the Venom and get another month before writing a novel. It is purely funny, and the rest is like a joke.

Not bad, pretty good, but the rating is a bit too low, not even 8 points

It's okay. The only drawback is that the beginning is a bit cumbersome. It would be better if it could be abbreviated.

Better than Malfoy's appearance, better than Percy's learning ability, first-class and half-class family background

Not bad, why is the rating so low?

I don't know if it's my problem, the protagonist was fed bad meat by the dark wizard, and then he saw Dumbledore and didn't let him help?

Great book, really worth reading I don't think you need to finish it so early. After you finish school, you can go back to the farm to raise magical animals and search for various magical animals to come back to. Or you can open a time travel that can be used to travel through the Lord of the Rings, Pirates of the Caribbean, etc. You have finished this and restarted it without data. It has taken so long to write this. If you give it a lot, you can write another thousand chapters no matter how bad it is.

Okay, good-looking brother.

Hahahahahahaha

It's okay, it's pretty.

Okay, it's really good. Don't be a eunuch.

Listen to Master Li Wei's orders

Not bad, very nice suggestion.

I love to watch and want to watch

Why is the rating so low?

A bit biased towards the Cthulhu pantheon

A very good book

Not bad, not bad, really nice