Douluo: After Four Years of Body Training, Awakening Is the Peak!

The rhythm of the plot is well controlled. From the forbearance to survive in the village, to the establishment of power in Notting College, to the search for the soul ring in the soul hunting forest, it progresses step by step without any delay. The protagonist's pursuit of polishing his own martial soul and soul ring breaks the inherent settings of the original work, which makes it very fresh to watch.

The settings of martial souls and soul rings fit the Douluo worldview and have their own innovations. The characteristics of the black star stick are highly compatible with the protagonist's body training, and the logic is online.

The early stages are solid, from survival in Ember Village to establishing a foothold in Notting College, and the protagonist's growth line is advanced step by step. The settings of martial soul, soul power, and physical body are closely integrated and logically consistent, laying a lot of foreshadowing for subsequent development.

Yes, the plot setting is very interesting. The use of modern knowledge to optimize cultivation methods and the details of adhering to extreme body tempering are very good. The characters are full-bodied and not flat, the writing is smooth and natural, the plot rhythm is well controlled, and it is very comfortable to read.

From struggling to survive in Ember Village to rising to prominence at Notting College, every step has been solid. The characters are three-dimensional, the tenacity and fierceness of the character are very contagious, and the plot is not routine. It is a good book in the Douluo series.

Hello everyone, this is my first time writing a novel. Because I am a novice, there are definitely many immature and imperfect aspects in the writing and plot. It is inevitable that there will be omissions and deficiencies. I hope brothers will be merciful and comment on paragraphs where they feel uncomfortable, and I will read them.

Not bad, not bad. It's pretty good among tomatoes. Don't be too picky [star]

There is no quarrel, no fuss, no forced cheating. The protagonist has accumulated a lot of strength through four years of silent training, and his awakening is at his peak. The rhythm is clean and very comfortable to watch. It is a rare and steady flow writing method among Douluo fans. It settles in the early stage and explodes in the later stage. The strength is well-founded and the more you read, the more interesting it becomes. There are no redundant routines. The protagonist trains in a low-key manner, and once he wakes up, he stands at the top. The writing style is calm, restrained and enjoyable. Come on, author, I'd love to read more!

It's okay. There are too few Douluo fans in Tomato. Many of them have been in the dark room. This one is okay.

It seems pretty good so far, but I don't know if the book will be removed from the shelves in the future.

Emm. . Everyone has different preferences, this book is okay for me

Cheating is reasonable

Just be low-key, don't be too scheming

It's okay, but I'm afraid it will be removed from the shelves. I can't find any other good-looking Douluo fans here.

Chapter 30 was written by a different person! ? Why did it suddenly change to third person? Or has it become AI?

The book is very interesting, the plot is not cliche, and the protagonist is ruthless enough, but it deviates a little from the original work. Overall, it deserves a five-star rating.

Wonderful and rich, never tire of it

Personally, I think this book is good

Cool and worth seeing

Not bad, not bad, not bad

Author, where is your home address? I want to send souvenirs

Okay, it's similar to the pattern of Sun Wukong, Tang San, Xiao Wu is mine [learned]

Although the ending is rushed, the content is still worthy of recognition. Other fans are tired of playing games every now and then. This Black Star Building and being crushed by cleverness are still good.

It's beautiful, I hope it will continue to be exciting in the future

I've watched about 2/3 of it and I don't want to watch anymore. But this book is good Give a good review to support it

This book ignores one of the few Douluo fans that I have finished reading. He did not follow the old Douluo plot, but created a new plot on his own.

It's really good. It's not just following the original work, nor is it specifically trying to torture Tang San.

The details are better than the original, and the map has been expanded a lot! There is just too little white space and the characters are not vivid enough.

It's beautiful. Please support the new book.

It looks good, but I've long since gotten tired of playing around with it. This one looks better.