Mingchao: They All Said They Came First

There are really few fans of Mingchao, and there are even fewer good works, let alone emotional ones. This novel is quite good among the pure emotional novels I have read by Mingchao, but it is also slightly lacking. The following are the issues I found after reading the previous article Whether the writing is good or not, it can be seen that there is a certain foundation, but the mastery and use of vocabulary are slightly lacking, and occasionally there are inappropriate word choices. It is recommended to polish the writing more. The most important thing for a complete novel is the writing. The plot is relatively clichéd, and you can basically guess what will happen before you read it. Some parts are a bit awkward, which reduces people's desire to read on. I suggest you be more original and come up with some fresh, refined and novel plots. The emotional foreshadowing needs to be improved. Nowadays, the pace of the tide chapter is a little faster, and there is emotional foreshadowing, but not much, and it fails to leave some deep memories. It is recommended to simulate more daily environments, details, and character descriptions, and lengthen it to allow readers to slowly follow the story. Emotions are like boiling water. It needs to be heated up slowly and cannot be boiled directly. The emotional build-up is poor, making people confused at times. This is the problem in the Imashi chapter. If the male protagonist disappears, Jinxi will turn dark. (Why did you go black directly? This is not the case in galgame!) The above are the problems I found. If you think it is true, please select it. If you think I am here to find fault, then skip me, I will also give five stars. Some people may say, what better thing is a bicycle than a free novel? Then let me ask you, who doesn't want the novel they read to be a good work?

It's a very nice Mingchao novel, and it's also a simulation novel. Is the female beauty also the heroine?

AI? , The previous description of Jinxi's eyes is gray, and later it is said that they are golden.

Among the few Mingchao emotional novels, there are currently no poisonous points. Although the writing style is not great, it is not bad. There is nothing wrong with the plot. It is very comfortable to watch. I give it a very high evaluation. It's just that the progress is a bit slow. It took more than 1,300 pages to simulate fll. When will my little potato come up? Update soon.

The writing style is immature, but the emotional writing is good. It's not an al text. After all, al's writing is much smoother than this. Come on.

Do the female protagonists have Kati, Phoebe, Moning and Linnai @

I have read almost 100 chapters, and I feel that this simulation system is not simulating, but more like retrieving lost memories for the protagonist, as if this is how it should be, just to restore your memory. Generally, Mingchao time travel stories are written like this. They are all like the wanderers back then. They gradually lost their memories after making plans thousands of years ago or further, and then they arrived at the right time. Now they are trying to find a way to retrieve them. So what about our Tsubaki?

It's quite unique, and the connection between characters is relatively smooth. The description is very good and detailed. When will my little love be served?

The reason why it is not popular is that the update is too slow and the hot spots are not grasped. Now is the era of Amis.

I think it's pretty cool, because it reminds me that before, there were three kinds of knives. The lowest level is the villain. I forgot about the middle one. The highest level is the natural disaster, where the protagonist chooses to die.

It's very interesting, and the author is a master [blowing kiss]

Very good Ming Chao Tongwen is particularly beautiful

Looks great, no need to say more about greatness [Sending Hearts]

When to write Aemi

Greatness needs no words

There are few new era articles that are good to read.

So beautiful. Recommended

If you kill me again, Xiao Ran will marry you😭

The seedlings and ears will be harvested soon [Salute]

There are really very few Mingchao books, and this one is above average.

Can the author write about Cantrela, the head of the family? Can the author write about Cantrela, Augusta, Yuno, and Gabrielina.

Yes, this simulated book is still okay!

After reading this, I felt like there was sand in my eyes. I'll go to the rooftop to get some air first [I'm about to cry] [Cry]

It is a simulation novel that is more in line with popular tastes.

So pretty, so pretty, so pretty, so pretty

FWhen do you eat?

Very good, but can the cover be changed?

Will the author write about Changli in the future?

Yes, thank you so much, author

When you wake up, continue writing [eating melon]