At first I thought it was just too cold in winter, and the two single beds pushed together were just right for warmth.
Until the marks she bit on my arm turned into marks of ointment that I had to apply every night,
I only realized it later——
Some intimacy cannot be excused by friendship.
That confession in the coffee shop that was swallowed back,
Finally, the moment I climbed onto her bed, I blurted out:
"Do you want to... Stay with me?"
In the darkness I heard her chuckle:
"This bed was not put together just for you to ask this."
Reader comments
It's really well written. From the beginning of each other's warmth when we were young, to the temptation and sweetness when we were young, to the quarrels and running-in in a foreign country, getting along and healing, companionship and perfection, it is very real and beautiful [I almost cried]
It was pretty good, and it was finished in less than an hour👀.
Although the plot in the middle part is a bit brief, the logic is clear and smooth, the writing is springy and realistic, and the emotions flowing in it (especially the extra chapter) are even more detailed and real. There are no big ups and downs in the whole text, but you can see that they are not falling in love for the sake of falling in love. They both have a career that they are good at and the ability to work hard for their goals [Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts]
Not bad, the writing is very true
It's super nice and doesn't feel like a web text.
Prose style
It's really well written. From the beginning of each other's warmth when we were young, to the temptation and sweetness when we were young, to the quarrels and running-in in a foreign country, getting along and healing, companionship and perfection, it is very real and beautiful [I almost cried]
It was pretty good, and it was finished in less than an hour👀. Although the plot in the middle part is a bit brief, the logic is clear and smooth, the writing is springy and realistic, and the emotions flowing in it (especially the extra chapter) are even more detailed and real. There are no big ups and downs in the whole text, but you can see that they are not falling in love for the sake of falling in love. They both have a career that they are good at and the ability to work hard for their goals [Sending Hearts][Sending Hearts]
Not bad, the writing is very true
It's super nice and doesn't feel like a web text. Prose style