A Modern Witch's Journey

The first two chapters are okay, but I can't understand the rest. What are you talking about? The subject matter is quite good, how is the content written?

Cause and effect, the plot is chaotic The subject matter is okay, but the content is not. I said before that I had to explain my identity to my family, but then I said that I can't let my family find out my identity. I don't know what I'm writing.