After Moving into the Boy Band's Dormitory, I Was Targeted by Them

After watching it in almost two days, I feel that the score is a little low, an eight is okay. As for the reason for the low score, I personally feel that the setting of the idol boy group and their assistant falling in love can dissuade most people. Fortunately, I am not a star-chaser, so it is okay for me. The plot is also quite smooth and attractive, making me want to keep reading. But the shortcomings are also obvious. I personally felt that the ending was so sudden and abrupt, which caught me off guard. In addition, in the first half of the novel, when the heroine was getting along with the captain, there was always a line "My heart suddenly jumped somewhere" that jumped at least three times, and once with Lu Ran. I understand that the author may be trying to express his heartbeat, but the sentence expression is a bit lacking. There are also a lot of small mistakes in the article. For example, the comment on Lao Si's 21st birthday said that he should continue to be happy even at the age of nineteen; the makeup artist said in the first sentence that the captain and Lu Ran would be put on makeup first, while the other two people did their hair. The next sentence said that Lao Si was too tight and could not put on makeup properly; the previous few people had discussed a good tour and were waiting by the stage at 6:30. A few sentences later, the staff came to the waiting room at 7:30 and knocked on the door to let her come on stage; the first sentence said that the heroine's hair was medium-short, and the second sentence said that the heroine's hair was caught in the rain. She bought a comb and said that her hair was very long and should be combed slowly. I didn't bother to mention some mistakes later. These small mistakes made me think that this article was generated by AI. It was not until I saw the comments at the end that I confirmed that it was not. Generally speaking, I feel that it is okay, because for me, the fluency and attractiveness of the writing are the most important. I can reluctantly ignore such errors that are not key points, but there must be readers who care more about details, and these errors are also likely to be one of the reasons for the low score. I hope the author can pay attention to this in his new book, which really affects the perception.

A word of praise, after reading all the articles in the current update, I still want to continue reading and enjoy it with gusto. There were a few points that made me really cry. The relationship between them and the last four people were indeed very sweet! ! !

The author said: Hello, dear children, many people asked if it was about Quan Jie. It's like this. Bai Yu's character has a colder temperament, so at first I wanted him to pretend that he had been in love to illustrate his inner sultry side. But my manuscript originally had more than 50 chapters and was written separately later. I forgot about my setting. I was thinking that after everyone falls in love with the heroine, there can be a content that slaps Bai Yu in the face. But I really forgot. I changed the previous sentence that Bai Yu said that we were in love. I changed it to "I haven't been in love yet". Sorry, dear friends. Enjoy reading the article. If you don't like it, you can leave. Don't scold me for bad reviews. Please o(≧v≦)o

After reading it, I had an expression [shocked] There is such a novel in Tomato, a boy band HG story. In the early stage, I thought it was just a novel about running a boy band, especially the heroine is just an assistant. In the later stage, it was really wow (I have never seen it in 🍅)

The author is great, the writing is very good, the characters are three-dimensional, and the plot is very attractive. I haven't seen enough yet, I hope there will be extras, extras, extras! [Send heart] [Send heart] Come on [Like]

Very nice, but a bit short. I will keep following the updates until the end! ! ! Also, the male protagonists are the four of them, right? !

Good looking, interesting plot

So pretty

The author's point of view is unique and profound.

It's so good to read. It's been a long time since I've read a book in one sitting. Usually I don't want to read it when I see it together [Like][Like]

It's very beautiful. I have never read such a beautiful book. I feel very fulfilled.

Very beautiful, very beautiful, very beautiful

It's super beautiful. Although there are some mistakes in the middle, it's really very similar to today's society.

It's so beautiful. I want to watch it again every time but I can't help it!! [Start]

Is the male protagonist clean?

It looks good, the writing is very good, 😘😘😘☺️☺️☺️The author is great, is it forced love? Is there any meat to eat? 😍

The story is full of imagination and creativity.

The content of this book is rich and colorful.

The author is so good at writing. This story is really well written.

It's very beautiful. I saw this book accidentally. I didn't expect it to be so beautiful.

The plot of this book is gripping.

Good work, this book is a good read and worth your time.

The dormitory management plot is novel and has multiple male protagonists, which makes it easy to enjoy

Sweet and sweet story about group favorites, all members fell to the top

It sounds really good. This book is really good.

The characterizations are lifelike.

Keep up the level, it looks great.

This book is both beautiful and exciting, I feel really good

The story is both entertaining and enlightening.

Each character in the article has an independent story line.