Under One Person: Asshole Buster

It's almost impossible to find a one-person fanfic in Tomato that has a strong character design. The relationship between the two gave me a natural feeling. I don't like to read about daily trivial matters, but the author's description of the heroine and the ball's graduation trip is very detailed and rich, and the plot development is very consistent with the original work, so I added it to the bookshelf, and I will continue to follow it as expected.

I rarely write book reviews now, so I'm here to join in the fun~ The author's writing style, character setting, and characterization are all very good. It's rare to have such a delicious meal (I'm about to cry). Other articles are either written in primary school students' style, or messy, and some of them smell like AI. I go crazy looking for articles every day, and end up eating a piece of shit. The life of a female fan is really miserable. I don't mean to be dissatisfied, it's just a fact. I hope you will continue to work hard and I won't be able to watch anymore when school starts. In fact, I like Wang Ye and was attracted by the author. When reading the first chapter, the heroine introduces two paragraphs and the hero introduces one sentence. Immediately happy. The more I watch it, the more I like it. The young couple is sweet and happy

A stroke of genius, a great novel. First of all, I would like to state that I am not a human machine. In terms of plot: After all, the fanfic is not an original work, and there is no thrilling adventure. All the contradictions that promote the development of the plot are to promote the development of the protagonist's emotional line without being abrupt, and readers can understand it psychologically. In terms of character design: The best part is that the author must have studied the character's character. There is basically no OOC. It is different from the villains written by some fans. This book is very gentle and the writing is very gentle. Especially the asshole character! People who have read it will say that he is a jerk, and there is little psychological description in the comics. However, this novel vividly depicts the image of a jerk in my mind from the language style and handling style.

Really beautiful The plot particularly attracted me and the trend was very clear. I knew I was going to be tortured, but I felt a little uncomfortable and a little bit looking forward to it. This author is quite capable, because now I am obsessed with the follow-up to this article [crying]

It's cool to see those who are enlightened and those who are not. Moreover, the author's writing is good and the story has a unique flavor.

In the blank space of the original work, fan fiction can always fill the readers' unfulfilled regrets and expectations with gentle touches. This fanfic of "Under One Person: Asshole Busters" does not deliberately subvert the characters and world view of the original work. Instead, it uses delicate narrative and sincere emotions to outline a new warm story in a familiar framework, allowing readers to relive the heartbeat and healing when they first met between the lines. The most moving part of the work lies in its precise grasp of the core of the characters. The author did not distort the character's personality in pursuit of dramatic conflicts, but followed the trajectory of the characters in the original work and dug into their inner softness and struggle. Whether it is the long-lasting bond between the protagonists or the little-known thoughts of the supporting characters, they are all portrayed in a three-dimensional and vivid way. The care hidden in daily conversations, the inadvertent eye contact, and the mutual protection across difficulties make the characters no longer symbols on paper, but living beings with flesh and blood, who can cry and laugh, and can easily poke the softest corner of the reader's heart. In terms of narrative style, the rhythm of the article is slow and natural, there is no ups and downs of bloody plot, but the most touching warmth is hidden in the ordinary daily life. The author is good at using delicate scene descriptions to create atmosphere. The afternoon sun, the evening breeze on the street corner, the late night lights, simple pictures and sincere emotions outline a gentle world that heals people's hearts. The writing is fresh and fluent, without the accumulation of gorgeous rhetoric, but every word is full of true feelings. Reading it is like warm water entering the throat, warm and comfortable, bringing a rare peace and healing in the impetuous time. What's even more rare is that this fanfic is not only a continuation of the original work, but also a sublimation of emotions. It retains the original healing core of "Under One Person" and interprets the meaning of companionship, growth and redemption with a brand-new story line. In the world of fan fiction, the protagonists make up for the regrets of the original work and achieve a more complete growth, allowing readers to gain new emotions while reliving the classics. This is the charm of high-quality fan fiction: it uses love as the pen and original intention as the ink. Based on the original work, it creates a parallel world full of warmth and hope for the characters and readers. When I closed the book, my heart was filled with tenderness and warmth. This fanfic of "Under One Person: Asshole Nemesis" is a love letter to the original work and a healing gift to all readers. It makes us believe that those beloved characters will always have the best ending in another time and space; and the love and tenderness hidden in the text will always transcend dimensions and warm everyone who reads it with heart.

It's really good to watch. I searched a lot of fans and read it. Many of the original protagonists feel like their left and right brains are fighting each other, but this one is awesome. I like it very much. 66 Has a good personality, and Qiu has no OOC. The author is really good at writing about their character. Many people write about Qiu and only write about his liveliness and unrestrainedness but do not look at other aspects of him. The genre is also my favorite, sour and a little sadistic, and it really touches my heart [sending my heart] [sending my heart] [sending my heart] [sending my heart]

It's very interesting. I never like to review any book, but I like this one very much. The personality of the heroine Liu Liu seems to me to be very sound and beautiful. She is kind, generous, knows how to advance and retreat, but is not ignorant. Thanks to the author for creating such a beautiful woman. In my opinion, the male protagonist has not lost his original character. He is truly protective and sincerely in love with the heroine. As a woman, my whole life I want to be like the heroine in the article, I want to have the right to speak, I want to be in a high and powerful position, and at the same time have a lover who only has me in his heart and eyes. People say you can't have both, but unfortunately I don't have either. But having this book is also a comfort. Finally, I wish the author this book will be a hit and the manga will be adapted into a drama. I hope your future journey as an online writer will be smooth sailing.

The wind from Xiaguan 💨 blows the flowers from Shangguan 🌸, and the Erhai moon 🌙 shines on the snow on Cangshan Mountain ❄️ The wind, flowers, snow and moon, the snow, moon and wind and flowers ˗ˋˏ ♡ ˎˊ˗ If the story is vivid enough, the fate will not be too shallow I sincerely invite all readers to join me in entering the world of Yo-Yo CP!

I like it, so I, who don't really like writing reviews, will review it (*^▽^*). It's very beautiful. The character design is something I've never seen before. [Blowing kiss] [Flowing kiss] [Flowing kiss] It's very beautiful. I kept raising the corners of my mouth when I saw it [Admiration]. Look at it. After reading the comments, I found that the teacher is so sincere and cute. It is not easy to meet a writing teacher that I like. It shows that it is fate [love] [love] [love] I will now go after the teacher's other articles [smirk] I also like to read stolen pens👀

It's not a loss for me to invest in it. The low rating may be because it's being serialized. Damn, the author's writing style is really cool. I feel really good about it. . . . And what's rare is that the characters don't have OOC. . . . . Astonished. . . . I saw the update in one go. [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Admiration]

I have been obsessed with this fan novel recently. The author has vividly portrayed the couple Liu Liu and Qiu. The interaction between them is sweet and natural, and every look and conversation is full of tension. It is a perfect pairing. The author has unique insights, the plot and characters are delicate and not obtrusive, and the whole book is great. What impressed me most was the author's precise grasp of the characters' psychology. Liu Liu's arrogance and softness, and Qiu's straightforwardness and delicacy were all naturally revealed between the lines. The plots of the story are intertwined, from the first meeting to getting to know each other, and every twist and turn is reasonable and unexpected, making people unable to help but read it in one sitting.

It's great to play with the ball while walking [blowing kiss], our Liu Liu is a kind and attentive baby, caring about people, and a medical animal. Hehe [making faces], what a good baby, Duoduo is also a good baby. The whole article is sweet at the beginning, sweet at the end and slightly sour in the middle [get it]. It's not equal yet, but even though the author has said it, I still really want to say, it's so well written! (Yelling), I wrote Qiuqiu, how should I put it, it has that kind of feeling, ruffian, a little bit indebted. In the front I smiled and laughed, and in the middle I cried and cried, and in the back I was expressionless 😐, author, look at the good things you did [roll your eyes] [roll your eyes] [roll your eyes] [roll your eyes] [roll your eyes] [roll your eyes] [roll your eyes] [roll your eyes], for my wounded heart, I want a hundred more! ! ! (Super Loud Diao Rose)

It's really great. It's already the second edition. I beg the author, can you please make another book with one person writing the same text? Please, I want to read all of them. Absolute masterpiece, it's rare to find someone who doesn't have OOC writing in the literature.

The rating is too low, it looks so good, the ball suddenly came to life. Love is forbearing and restrained (but I still support Sister Liuliu's violent play, forgiving him too easily is a bit too much), Qiuer's style is very caring and caring, Sister Liuliu is super cute, how come there is such a warm and lively little sun, it is nothing more than attracting people like Qiuer. I wish you both a 99! I wish you two eternal happiness. Whether it is the if line or the current line, both of you are people who can sacrifice for each other. Liu'er understands the forbearance under Qiu'er's joy, and Qiu'er understands Liu'er's persistence. You will always be each other's best friends, family, relatives, and lovers, and hold each other. I didn't watch it anymore after seeing the if line. I was afraid of the plot that would follow, and I was afraid that lovers would not be able to be together. Now that it is over, I can read it in one go. It's great. I am a reincarnation and no longer a supporter of the predecessors. I think the most important thing that makes up a person is memory and experience, so in my opinion, if is still be. The if line he added later is more of two happy people who have some relationship with the predecessors (maybe it is a bit disappointing), but I am still happy for them. Moreover, the if line can be regarded as pushing the current line of Qiu'er not to give in, not to let go, and to seize the love that he likes. Qiu'er, who likes the ghost feeling very much, showing such ghost feeling in front of Liu'er, means that he knows that he is loved and favored, so he is confident. That's it, I wish Liu Qiu 99 again in this life.

It's great! I really recommend it. The characters' personalities are quite realistic! While watching it, I suddenly thought of the sentence "Between us, I'm a bad person but sincere, but you're a saint because of your selfishness." It really feels right.

The article is not abusive, I don't know why it was marked as abusive [laughing and crying] The writing is very nice, the characters in the original novel have no OOC, and Liu Qiu's emotional line is handled harmoniously with the plot of the original novel. The heroine is super sunny and cheerful, she is like a little sunshine, so it is natural that the ball likes her. There will definitely be twists and turns when two people go from being strangers to falling in love. I personally don't think these twists and turns are cruel. Qiu's life experience is doomed to make his emotional journey a little more complicated, but! Sober while sinking into super good products, fairy products! The author wrote a great heroine. Liu Liu is an ordinary person, but her strength is different from that of aliens. She is not weakened because Liu Liu's strength is not enough. The author describes a living person. She has thoughts, a family, and her own career to carry out. It's really great (I'm running out of words)

It's so beautiful that I had a blast watching it and watched it all in one go. Because it is a serial, I have a little bit of stamina to read it. Can the author make more updates? I look forward to adding more articles every day. And the article is not OOC at all. It is the best one I have seen written by anyone in Tomato, bar none.

The big writing style depicts the scene that I had never imagined. I saw a lot of balls from different perspectives, and it also made me understand a lot. The big writing style is like the sunshine in spring and the breeze in summer. It is very gentle and touches my emotions. I also saw a very good Liu Liu. She is kind and beautiful. Maybe I can't describe her well, just like my writing can't touch people's hearts like Xiang Da. Well, I wish you all longevity and happiness every day. I wish the author peace and joy every year. I also wish Qiu'er and Liu'er in the parallel world happiness and peace, and may their love last forever.

The plot line is a bit bland, but the emotional line is very good. It's a blast from the wide bench. Liu Yier in the extra episode was really touched, and reminded me of a lyric "If there is no if." The teacher was so good at writing abuse that I dare not click on the if line now, but I have read the others.

The plot is fluent and the writing is good. It's one of the best fanfics in the world. It's really delicious rice. I'll post more soon. I eat the delicious rice like crazy [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

It's super good-looking. It's the best-looking fanfic I've ever seen. Although the heroine is an ordinary person, she has a close connection with the alien world and has an identity as an alien. The emotional line with Qiu'er is also very well written. The previous part is the relationship development with Qiu'er, and the main plot begins when she arrives at Biyou Village. It ended so suddenly, just past the main plot of Chen Duo. It was well written but too short.

You know 🦋, I almost missed a good book because of its name. The following is purely based on my personal feelings after reading the full text. First of all, the article is clearly organized, and the characters can basically be described very fully. The author has carefully checked the words that may cause deviations in the description. 🎗Although the story of Chen Duo and Chen Junyan is not too long, it deeply interprets the long-term friendship💫🤗💫. Bastard met his scabbard, but Liu Liu did not let him lose his edge. Liu Liu also has a unique charm. Kindness is Liu Liu's background. Perseverance, bravery, wisdom and tolerance are the foundation of people's deep love for her. There is never any preference for no reason. Qiu'er and Liu Liu are achieving each other🤗🤗🤗

Super pretty! ! The text is soft, relaxed and happy, and the emotional description is delicate and soft! ! ! ! There is not much love, but the process of falling in love is super interesting! It is particularly exciting when it incorporates the setting of aliens. From a novice who is ignorant of aliens to a consultant who knows everything, the process is a little twisty but it is definitely a one-on-one experience. You can find the source of some other settings, which is a complete rarity~~~~~The heroine is like a little sun, warming the people around her. Although Chen Duo is gone, she really has no regrets. It feels better than the anime version

It's so pretty, it's so pretty, it's too pretty, it's too pretty, it's too pretty, it's too pretty, it's too pretty, it's so pretty, it's so pretty, the author is here [sending heart] [sending heart], [blowing kiss] Yo-Yo 99

It's so beautiful, author, why are you so awesome? Why are you so awesome? Why are you so awesome, awesome, awesome, awesome, awesome, oh my god, oh my god, why are you so beautiful? It is completely based on the characters in the original comics. For a moment, I seemed to see them come to life. Why are you so awesome?

Although I haven't watched Under One Person, I have seen Sister Baoer's video. This book has been recommended several times but I haven't clicked on it. It's so delicious when I read it today! ! The sour feeling between Liuliu and Qiu is very well written [laughs] Although I haven't seen it, Qiu's image is very clear. He is a very free-spirited person who can do whatever he wants. I also specifically searched for Qiu's image. He is a very beautiful person! ! ! Delicious. I hope the author suddenly adds twenty chapters to scare me [eating melon]

So pretty! ! ! I feel that the plot is really good. Chen Duo did not let Da Liuping regretfully let her live, but respected her choice. Although it made me want to cry, the writing was very touching. And the relationship between 66 and Qiu feels very real, in line with the relationship between ordinary people and people they like. All in all, the plot of this article feels very smooth, but the author adds too little and too slowly. I can't wait to read the rest!

The plot line of the story is also very different, very beautiful, and the emotional line is relatively clear. It is different from other fanfics, it has more sense of story, and all the characters are not OOC. The heroine is also very cute. The relationship between men and women also has that kind of progressive progression, instead of being inexplicable like other novels. I hope it will be updated soon [Blowing Kiss]

First of all, I personally think the content of this novel is very good The interactions between the characters are very natural, and the emotional descriptions of the male and female protagonists are also very delicate. If Qian is a bit sadistic, but the ending is He, very sweet Moreover, the author is also very nice and often interacts with readers.