Shinto: Become Invincible Starting from Rescuing the Ocean Girl School Beauty

The author's setting is very interesting, but the plot is still the same, with the focus on the West, but the real Western feel is just like calling foreign girls. The feeling of exorcism and pretentiousness is the same as that of novels written three or four years ago. It's not that I would recommend reading the sixty-odd chapters in the two hours I saw above this morning. The author's introduction says that you need to have a sense of substitution to set up an image of a rich man in his previous life. If it is for the sake of good English, I don't think it is necessary to set up a Chinese English or tutoring at the foot of the mountain, or if the master teaches something, the number of words can also be written more Then there are foreign girls. I don't know what other people think the title is. Anyway, I was attracted by the title [laughs crookedly] Now that I've written it all, I don't think it's necessary to be like Liu Xiahui. Dual Cultivation is also fine. In the part where the heroine doesn't like the hero, she feels that she has more admiration in her heart, which is unnecessary. I have written novels before, but when the data was not good, I gave up and had no motivation to continue writing. I hope the author can persevere. If the author can achieve results, it will also give me an encouragement to try again (the author can write so many short stories, it seems that I don't need to say [face covering]). For a more Western style, I recommend reading "Krypton Game?" By Xia Shiqi? I stud! "This. Thank you, the author, for seeing this. I suddenly wanted to say this as I looked at it. I hope it can be helpful to you.

The subject matter is novel, and it looks good. It really suits my taste. I was very attracted to it at the beginning and kept reading. The characters have obvious personality traits. Oh no, it's really good-looking. Ahhhh~oh~~~~❤ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤Oh ❤ Oh oh oh~~~~❤Oh oh ~ohoh❤ ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤ Oh ❤ ah ah ah ah, no... I can't do it anymore... I want... A nest... I want it! ! ~Oh ~~~! ! !

A real person can defeat a ghost in a mage realm with one full blow. I hope the author will change it so that it doesn't overwhelm me. I really like this book and want it to be better [laughs] Don't let it go down again. Don't let it go down again. Don't let it go down again.

The plot is compact, not draggy, and interesting

It looks good. Come on, don't stop.

Good-looking, good-looking, very innovative

The writing is very good and the narrative is clear

It would be better if the author changed the setting of the protagonist who was the son of the richest man before his rebirth to a low-class person who lived worse than a dog.

It looks good so far, and there are some surprises. Cheers, author.

The plot is compact and easy to read. Praise

Everyone who understands understands, and those who don't understand don't need to know. Just read and read. Be quiet and don't talk. If you don't tell me and I don't tell, who will know?

The plot is okay. Why does the author have so many works?

This book is okay so far

It's a very good-looking work, and the content makes me feel that the author must have "struggled" on other platforms. There is only one thing: why is such a good-looking book not updated? Do you dare to post the address? ! !