Senior Brother, Master, the White Moonlight You're Chasing Is Me

I own the first review. The main character plug-in in this book is the experience card of the pesticide hero. If any brothers want to see the transformation plot of certain heroes, you can leave it in the comment area. Leave your comments in the paragraph comment area (≧w≦)!

[The following content is my personal opinion, no need to discuss it with me, just say you are right] The subject matter is good and this is my first time seeing it, but the content is average. (Because I think some places are wrong with the rewriting and abbreviation, and some parts of the plot are cliche! But that's okay! Guan Jian's character description is almost boring, the character's emotions are abrupt, and I fell in love with it out of nowhere. It was really love at first sight!) There is nothing too toxic in itself! But I think the main popularity of this kind of article similar to role-playing articles comes from the popularity of the character or IP it plays? But when the protagonist is "Li Bai", unlike "Li Bai" who is written as a game or historical figure, isn't it necessary to write about the character's own heroic and ambitious emotions and the power to look down on the world? This is the cool thing about writing like this! (But no one mentioned it when I read the comments. Maybe I read for a short time and didn't see that, or maybe the "Li Bai" in my eyes is different from your "Li Bai". Because I haven't played the King for a long time, I don't know what the King "Li Bai" looks like.) I read it again later, and the author's writing skills have also improved, and "Li Bai" also looks a bit like "Li Bai"! And the author also added some funny elements. Finally, based on my scoring principle (high and not low) and the author's subject matter, I give it five stars. I also hope that the author can write better and better, and that he can write like a god!

Brothers, let me report on the progress. I read nine chapters. The second picture shows the protagonists Senior Brother and Wang Zhaojun. Starting from Chapter 5, it's Li Bai and the protagonist's master. A little poison is also put in it from time to time to test us. But overall it is acceptable, but if I write in this way again, the ugly words will come first. I believe that most book lovers have a pair of bright eyes and can distinguish right from wrong. I will continue to wait and see, and if it doesn't work, I will make another comment. What do you say, brothers? I kept watching for a while. To be honest, I really can't stand it. This feeling doesn't feel good enough, you know? There are just a lot of things, plots, and characters that are not written to the point. Watching too much makes me feel a little bored. The same feeling as when I watched Douluo Dalu.

Haha, the male hero attracts women, and the female hero is the white moonlight of men, right? [Shocked] Beautiful, love watching it!

Let me sort out the minefields here. If you can't accept it, don't maliciously give low marks. 1. The order of acting is Wang Zhaojun (original), Li Bai (Feng Qiuhuang), Wang Zhaojun (original), Li Bai (Glory Collection), Han Xin (White Dragon Song), Li Bai, Lu Ban (original) Da Tiao (Da Qiao), Cao Cao (original), Yao (Shenlu), Jiang Ziya (original), and Daji (original). 2. Not released yet but will be released: Gongsun Li Ying (not sure yet under consideration) Dunshan Cannon Cart Master Jing Li Bai's little fanboy (Dongfang Yao) Yun Zhongjun Xiao Longren Xiao Ming (not sure) Diao Chan 3. After reading the low-scoring reviews, 1. The protagonist accepted the Flower Picker (Various Evil King) as his younger brother. Because the protagonist said at the time that he wanted to learn the art of disguise (I can think that the protagonist was afraid that there would be no heroes he needed and no experience cards, so he had to learn it), he also regarded himself as the protagonist in it. Ha, leather holster, you were arrested. 2. My sweetheart almost had an accident. I was jealous at first instead of looking at where the injury was. I don't know the specific page so I can't say specifically. The author said that he was saved, with just a little skin injury, but he can run and jump. I can think that this evaluation is unreasonable. 3. Feng Qiuhuang should come out later and think this is a poisonous point. The author said that there is a chance of skins, but did not say that the skins have additional combat power, and why do you need to add multiple skins in the world of immortality? Is this the power of krypton gold? . ! It is also said that it can be drawn out later to help the male protagonist improve his cultivation. Why can't the protagonist just draw a skin after practicing immortality for several years? And the master should be able to chat with the original skin because they both like to drink. It should be that changing the skin does not mean that this hero does not like drinking anymore🥹 Changed the skin. I admit, although the background story is different, you can't prove that he doesn't like to drink anymore. There is also the one who went to participate in the martial arts competition. The author has already explained it, so I won't say more. 4. He has the strength to kill all the sects. Why is it just a humorous warning? It is too murderous, I don't want to say it. . . . I laughed so hard when I saw this comment, you know what! 5. There is a clone poison. What's the matter? Isn't it okay to have a clone? Aren't the clone and the main body the same? What's wrong? Let me give you an example. Let's take the matter of wine. If the protagonist likes drinking, then his clone doesn't like drinking. The protagonist likes beauty but the clone doesn't like it. The protagonist likes someone but the clone doesn't like that person. The essence of the clone and the protagonist is still the same. Even if they like the same person, can you say that they are love rivals? The poison in Chapter 6.23 Is indeed a little poisonous, but it is not a big problem. Should the actor treat "Liu Ruyan" like this? The actor is not the character himself, and he is avenging his master. Chapter 18 did not see where the poison was. 7. The protagonist was too surprised. Are you not afraid of showing your waistcoat? And Li Bai has many little fans. Who would have thought that there would be no such extreme 8. I am too petty and want to take a high-level swordsman to participate in the competition of young geniuses, just for a marrow cleansing pill. You can read the author's explanation below in the 3 comments. 9. It is too sweet. I have read more than 2,000 hours of books (brother, have you really read so many hours), especially the one about breaking off the engagement. This is to pave the way for the rationality of Yao's appearance. Otherwise, I can't imagine how Yao can still appear. Moreover, breaking up the engagement is a very classic one, and it is not so sweet. 10. After communicating with the Variety Evil Lord, you can kill him directly. You also have to blow up the vest directly in front of him. I think this is also a problem of being too lethal. I didn't expect to drop the B box, because it can only make the Variety Evil Lord think that he is the protagonist. He is a boss who learns too fast and will not think of the protagonist's true identity at all. And this is not a vest blast. He just turns into an ordinary immortal cultivator. Moreover, the protagonist himself is not famous. 11. Repeatedly emphasizing, this is called repeated pulling😜 12. Emperor Wu dared to call the protagonist's vest a little friend. I don't understand this. Let's go to the author's explanation. 13. In the early stage, vests appear one by one, and then use an organization name. It can be thought that the author is here to make it reasonable for these people to suddenly appear. Otherwise, they are so powerful and suddenly appear. I can't understand that Chengdu is an expert in hermit cultivation. . 14. There are too many. I don't want to say it. It's probably OOC. You can bring in the protagonist, but don't take it too seriously. Not everyone can think of it like you, okay? The role is not 100% the same. Chapter 15.36 Han Xin's experience card is lifted. By 37, the protagonist of Bian Que's experience card is still Han Xin. The system explains in the article that you can temporarily keep it in the experience time and then go experience other heroes. The clothes have been changed. I can understand it as this system play, directly changing all the faces and clothes. 16. The protagonist is a coward. I don't think the protagonist is very coward. I think the protagonist is too high-profile. 17. I'm so embarrassed after reading more than a dozen chapters. I don't know what to say. Then don't read it. You'll have to leave a low score if you read it. 18. It's too toxic. You don't have to read it. Why do you have to leave points? 19. Don't read it either, sugar. Can you please just go away? OK, this is my evaluation of the bad reviews. The good thing is that the author is very diligent in updating, three posts a day. Please take my advice. Plot review: Previously, the senior brother who played the role of Wang Zhaojun was seduced away. As Li Bai, he seduced the protagonist's master (with that Liu Ruyan). He played Li Bai because he heard someone else pretending that he was getting married to that Liu Ruyan, so he went to slap her in the face. Played as Han Xin saved the field, played as Li Bai to participate, so why did he forget l meow) played Lu Ban to gain experience, played Da Tiao because Lu Ban was uh, then who gave it (can't be said to be imprisoned? It can only be said that he was treated as his own property) Da Qiao teleported Lu Ban back, Cao Cao went to save the field, and he forgot who he was saving. Yao works as a master for a young man whose engagement has been broken off. Jiang Ziya, in the front, makes people become gods, and in the back, he summons the secret realm of King's Canyon, and lets the immortal cultivators fight the king. Aunt Daji gave out rice, that's probably it. Yeah, it can only be said that Lao Bai is finally getting better at acting! That day, everyone finally remembered the time dominated by Lao Bai. . . .

It was quite toxic at first, but later on it was fine. Forget it, it's still a little bit, I ran away

How should I put it? At present, I feel that this book is at best a short-term refreshment, and it is difficult to savor it. It feels like drinking a drink with only sweetness. Although it brings short-term sweetness, it is difficult to savor it. I feel like I just wrote it for fun, which is a bit cliché.

Most of them don't have it. The little poisons are constant. (The constant is really constant. Unlike other books, there are minor poisons after a few chapters, but this book has minor poisons and there are minor poisons a few pages later.)

As the saying goes, "Everyone has their own preference for carrots and vegetables." Everyone's opinion is different. I am just giving my personal opinion here and do not mean to offend anyone. That is to say, a new book that has not even reached 100 chapters is like a newly born little life. Even if you see that his (her) behavior is more or less "blocked", "embarrassing" or sweet because of something, it will not kill him (her) in the cradle. I took a rough look at the book reviews, and found that the majority of them were five-star reviews. Some of the negative reviews were just saying that they were "not good enough" or for other reasons. The author shouldn't take it too seriously. I think the author's writing is pretty good. The reason for the ratings is purely because of a small number of people. And those guys who wrote negative reviews couldn't say anything but they were wrong. But looking at the author's reply, it really has everything. At a glance, it can be compared to a short essay - everyone's work is the hard work of every author. Even if you don't appreciate it, you don't have to be so disparaging, and you must have a precise reason for disparaging it. But what I saw was a simple negative review that was clean and concise, as if it was defining an exact fact. I don't think there is anything wrong with the logic of the current plot development of the story. Even if there are any "poisonous points", they are just what a few people say: "the progress is not fast enough", "not exciting enough", "I thought it was a big killing" and so on. Everything needs to be done slowly. There is a process. It cannot be said that one day the sky will suddenly burst, and then a murderous god will jump down and kill everyone on the earth. This is completely impossible to happen. (Purely a metaphor from Hu Ji) In a word, I think the writing in this book is also good, and three updates a day are enough. At least among the authors of Tomato, the three updates are at least at the upper-middle level. I hope the author will continue to work hard ❤️

The content is very attractive to me, and the plot is quite rich. There are some plots mixed in with love and love. The author is also very obedient and can reply to you quickly. It's just that my personality sounds a bit uncomfortable, but I can't help but listen. There are very few books of this type. Among so many tomatoes on AI, this is a good book!