Who says a bow isn't a sword? Watch me work miracles with a bow in a world of swords!
“Is this a long-awaited reunion?♪”
A burst of pink light suddenly flared, not the blinding kind, but soft, as if it were about to wrap around him. A silhouette began to emerge in the glow: slender arms, soft curves, and flowing hair.
The voice grew clearer, brimming with an indescribable delight.
The light faded.
A girl stood before him.
She was barefoot on the rubble-strewn ground, the skin around her ankles almost translucent in its whiteness. Her form-fitting outfit, a blend of white and pink, traced her full curves. Long pink hair fell to her waist like a waterfall, its tips still glowing faintly.
Her face was so exquisite she hardly seemed real, yet it was full of life. Her pink-gem eyes curved into crescents, and her lips formed a perfect smile.
“Or is this...”
She tilted her head, her voice touched with teasing laughter.
“...a fateful encounter?♪”
The meaning is unclear. The protagonist has lived in two lives. He does not have the arrogance of a time traveler, but has a feeling of, well, a loser.
I know the bow is very special, but I really don't need to keep writing about the feeling of warmth when I touch the bow, and I don't need to feel wet every time I draw the bow. The impression is really bad, very poor, very poor 🤮
The writing is good, but the official presence is not strong, or even almost non-existent. The protagonist has lived two lives, like a junior high school student, and is still the kind of person who has been suppressed for a long time and has no self-confidence. Lu Mingfei Plus is a little better, but only a little bit. The plot is nice and detailed, but ugly, too draggy. In Tomato, you are not happy, and it is difficult for anyone to watch it. Some people, including me, watched it for Ai Li, but the sense of presence is not strong, really.
It's weird, it feels like the author is completely immersed in his art. In the author's book, this country is completely free of any national influence. It is just a few teachers sent by a few schools throughout the whole process. I looked back and looked at the city where the protagonist was, and it was just an ordinary city. The school assigned an ordinary city teacher, the one named Su Wan. She was the one handling such a unique weapon for the protagonist throughout the entire process. Even when she came to school later, her energy was not that great. It would be fine if the protagonist just had a high level, but as the author, you yourself added a bunch of garish descriptions to this weapon, saying it transcends legend, and that a casual attack has an energy level of level 30. Later, when it came time to decide which school the protagonist wanted to join, one of the four schools came. It feels like it's the author. He has actually decided to join this school. The other three schools are too lazy to write in and compete with each other.
The author's level is definitely not 5-star, but the writing is different from other Tomato books. To put it crudely, it is too useless, but it is very close to life. The protagonist is like an ordinary person, and it is not the kind of passionate youth or the stability of middle age, but more like a 20-something who has been polished by society in advance. If the author wants to make money from this book, he can cut it in advance. If he wants to write about himself, he can write it down. This book is not suitable for any novel website.
The whole thing feels very strange. It keeps suppressing the protagonist, and then the people around him are also weird.
There is a lot of nonsense and it is very watery. It is recommended to jump directly to Awakening after reading the first chapter. Character or weapon Ellie? Very ooc. It's very similar to the character I made up after looking at Alicia's pictures. Being refused touch (normal) but "not allowed to come near" (outrageous).
There is a depressing feeling like being in prison eating boogers with rice. I wasted several chapters in the beginning. The description of awakening the bow does not reflect Ellie's feeling at all. It feels hot when touched. I don't know if you have awakened some kind of sun god's bow. The protagonist is even more of a loser. The psychological description is like depression. There is a feeling of passing by and slapping him in the mouth, and he can only hide in bed and moan and shed tears.
How to say it? The writing is good, but I just feel like the author is committing literary youth syndrome. It feels too pretentious 🤮 🤮 Moreover, the protagonist has played Honkai Impact 3, so he should know what Ellie's special skills look like. Why did he act like he didn't recognize it at the beginning? Moreover, the protagonist is a time traveler, so it seems that this article is not about fetal transmigration. Why do you feel that the interaction between you and your parents seems to be pretentious and takes up the content of the blockbuster? I personally think that in this kind of plot, the protagonist should have a very complicated feeling towards his parents. He knows that he is not the child of these parents, so he should be like a stranger to his parents. Even if his parents are very good to him and can accept transformation, there should be a paragraph, and writing this book title will make him Everyone is watching it, at least I want to see the story between the protagonist and Alicia in another world, rather than being a literary person here, so I personally don't like it. I will give it a rough look and if it really doesn't fit the content, I won't watch it. Some people may like it, but I really can't like it. I'm sorry.
I don't recommend watching it. The author seems too depressed in the early stage, and the college's reaction is not normal. It's not towards the students, but towards the protagonist with an attitude of cherishing the material. The author said there is a reason for the protagonist's personality, but the writing was completely autistic and cowardly, and the early mockery was not dealt with. Most of the people who read this book came to read it for Ellie, and as a result, there were no traces of more than thirty chapters. It's a summary of right and wrong, so book lovers who don't like the main plot of frustration should not read it! I lasted for 30 chapters and finally got poisoned.