Fail with Enthusiasm

I would like to give you a suggestion. I was attracted to this book because of its introduction. Let me tell you a few things that I think could be better: 1. I think the pace at the beginning is too slow. You see, the introduction says that the male and female protagonists will meet later. This is still very attractive to me, but after reading it, I feel that the progress is a bit slow. Of course, I understand that this is a background development, showing how the male protagonist grows from an ordinary person with no direction to a surgical director, but I think Don't write too much about this aspect. The male protagonist is currently working on a topic, writing about the male protagonist's family, how the male protagonist makes money, and the male protagonist moving out of the dormitory. After that, you can write "how many years later" and then start the story of the male and female protagonists. I think most readers should come here for the interaction between the male and female protagonists, and you can write less about the transformation of the male protagonist. 2. Regarding the landlord, that description left me a little speechless. This is a romance novel with a single heroine. To describe a supporting character who does not play a big role in such a large space is really a bit of a reversal of subject and object. Maybe she may also have a big role, but I can't imagine it. To describe a supporting female character in this way, it's hard not to think about: Will the male protagonist have something unspeakable happen to her? 3. The writing style is quite good. I personally prefer this kind of relatively light writing. I recommend three and a half stars overall. If I round up, I will give it four stars. I will talk about the rest later.

Most of the previous descriptions are bland, but the haokang and bland days are very suitable for life. The description of college is both lucky and contradictory. The sweetness of the male and female protagonists comes later. The relationship between the supporting characters and the male and female protagonists made me envious. In short, the writing style of the Haokang family is really good. More and more 🍉

The writing is very good, the writing is delicate, and it can be seen that a lot of it comes from one's own experience and the observation of emotional details. It writes about the taste of youth and the regrets at that time. Reading this novel reminds me of the past memories. Everyone has that him or her in their memories, come on! 🤭 Don't stop updating, please give your best to the author! 😢 Very well written, strong support!

To be honest, this article is one of the few that I can insist on reading, but its update speed is too slow. Sometimes it takes a week or two to update a chapter. I hope the author will update it faster #plotcomment

The subject matter is too bland and niche, so it won't do well in Tomato. Of course... The writing is okay

It's so well written, I'll wait and see.

Beautiful, love watching. There is no one at the moment.

The writing is good, although the front part is a bit messy, but the back part is still okay. Come on, author, I'm looking forward to the next plot. [Please update]

This should be a normal novel...

The writing is delicate and vivid, and the rhythm is smooth. It is worth reading [laughs]