Reincarnated as the Princess of the Abyss in the Game

It's very interesting, and I like the subject matter very much, but I feel like there's no need to write so many psychological descriptions and other people's perspectives, which kind of slows down the pace of the plot.

It's quite new to me and I like similar stories. 1. But I don't like that the protagonist always pulls himself. I want to write that the character's own personality erodes the original personality of the time travel, but it is too boring. He also said that the original personality is also a disguise in society... It is obvious that the character was created by the controller with great effort, but the result is fear... Frozen has already made it clear that the power of fear will only make the power out of control, and Tai Chi also requires finding a balance. But the protagonists I've seen have always been resistant to the character's personality. 2. When someone else offended her, the strongest one actually got so angry that she decided to teach the person who offended her a lesson when it was close to chapter 90. It was unbelievable. I am the strongest, they have to return the things that were stolen from me, and if they don't return, they will come and take everything in their treasure house, but the protagonist just asks them to return it, with no time limit and no countermeasures... It's very unpleasant. 3. Different ideas for playing games. I don't like doing big things when the map is all black. But this isn't a big problem, it's just a little awkward. Looking forward to the update. I still like this story. I'll talk about the rest after reading it.

Very good, the writing is very detailed and the plot logic is very smooth. I almost thought I was no longer in Tomato [face covering] It's okay to read it in one go, but the reading experience is really poor, and the plot is too delayed. As long as a character with a name appears, I will definitely write it again from the perspective of this new character after two chapters. To be honest, from my personal perspective, a lot of things can be conveyed in just a few sentences. The author may want to broaden the world view, or he may want to practice his writing skills, but from my perspective as a reader, it is difficult to be interested in these new characters who are obviously cannon fodder. On the other hand, the protagonist's character is too coy. He wants to do many things but can't let go. When he does, he spends a lot of space describing his psychology: Actually, I don't want to do it, I have to restrain myself. The same psychological description appears many times throughout the text. Basically, if something trivial happens, a long paragraph of psychological description that has been written many times will appear. You can even add something new every time you write about psychology.

You can write. I wonder if the author has read a novel called "A New Life as the Highest Level Archmage" on Royal Road? Many of the early plot settings are very similar to this one.

Reincarnated as a max-level magician in the game, why has this book been taken off the shelves?

The main character is so good and talks like a saint.

It's very interesting, I hope the author can keep it up

I like it, I like it, I like it, it feels like Bone King Gaiden (but there's not enough blood at the moment), keep up the good work Well, it is quite different from the style of King of Bones, and there is still less inhumanity (I saw the quarrel with the mayor and the violent argument about not killing the soldiers). As a blood-thirsty audience, I feel that I can't see the river of blood in the later period.

Okay, it's a bit similar to the King of the Undead, but I hope it doesn't become the same CS as the King of the Undead I can't call it the Holy Mother. Nowadays, many children just learn a word and use it indiscriminately. It's just that the latter part is too confusing. I haven't updated it for a long time. The result is an update: the heroine's sister travels back in time. From waking up to finding someone to "ask for directions", this plot has been written for five chapters and has not been finished.

It's really good-looking, a rare good article from Tomato.

Except for the game and value settings, everything else is good, as long as the rhythm is a little tighter

It's good to watch, but I think it could be written less about the inner division of the protagonist. .

A very cool article about the fourth natural disaster

There is no one good work, and the overall look and feel is very good. It is much better than those formulaic novels. I like the Western fantasy style very much. There are small flaws but it does not affect the beauty (♥∀♥) [Sending my heart]

I knew it was time to collect it when the cultists also had their own scenes.

It's very beautiful. Please support me. There are just a few typos. Later the writing collapsed. It was actually good at first

There are no new chapters to read, and I feel itchy all over. It's amazing how this 5.5 Score was calculated. It's just two "Long Aotian" who are so unhappy [face covering]

Come on and look forward to the following plot

Excellent setting, Bone King's sense of sight [thinking][thinking][thinking][thinking][thinking][thinking][thinking][thinking][thinking][thinking][thinking][thinking]

Come on, author! Be afraid of being low!

Should he be classified as the King of the Undead? Excellent novel that transcends this genre

Very good very good very good very good

It's quite good-looking. It has a sense of déjà vu. It feels like it will be a long story. The heroine's friends will definitely be brought into this world later. I'll wait for half a year before watching it. I hope it won't be a eunuch.

It looks good, I like the western fantasy style very much. I hope the author will not stop updating

It's nice to read, and the writing is good. Quite humorous. You can watch it when you are relaxing. Solved my book shortage

The group portraits and world view are great, I look forward to the follow-up

Not bad, the subject matter is novel, and I have the desire to read it.

Not bad, not bad, quite novel.

The pace is slow and the writing is very good. I hope the author can persevere. Come on (˘ ³˘)❤