National Destiny: Playing Tong Mo at the Beginning

I think it looks pretty good after watching the early stage, but it must be free of cp [crying]

It is very good at the moment, it completely fits the original work, and the writing is good and there is no AI. However, if the proficiency of this card is maxed out in the later stage, the second card obtained will be a poisonous point if not dealt with properly. After all, most people currently come here for grinding. My feeling is not to change it. Now I accept it all without getting the settings, otherwise it will be poorly written. This book is very good, with good character design, and good writing. I will write an infinite stream directly, and it will definitely be popular. In fact, it is handled well. One of the disadvantages is that you can switch roles instantly, which is not acting at all, but there are many branch lines. It is obvious that dots are used to bring out a world view. However, the problem with this writing method is that it takes time to connect the dots into a line. Connecting the lines into a plane takes time. Although the branch lines are well written, they are only good. It is difficult for people to have the desire to read more. It is more necessary to connect the branch lines with the protagonist, not too tightly, but it cannot be like a separate story that can be read separately.

A very good book\^O^/ The character of Mo Mo Tou is not OOC at all, and the writing style is also very good. Members of the team can read it with confidence. It can be said that the quality is very good among Demon Slayer fans.

Looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good, looks good! So pretty! The character creation is really perfect. Well, maybe Tongmo itself is easy to write, but it is very beautiful! There is no serious drawback at all! ......... In the later period, the protagonist always discussed his high school life as Tong Mo, which was a drama... Well... No one suspected that Tong Mo was actually a high school student... Even the official record (tampered by the system) of the school that Tong Mo attended... Hmm... It feels like there is a risk of forced intelligence reduction. What else can you say? The author is too temperamental, do you think this is nonsense? A good author for the people, this book deserves to be popular

The first part is really good, but the second part is mostly about memories... In fact, I feel like I don't particularly like to read the story of the protagonist of Under the Skin. I just hope that the author has fewer memories. That is, most of the main text is about acting, because I feel that a lot of the latter part is about reviewing the protagonist of Under the Skin (just a suggestion)

I read more than a dozen chapters and thought it was very good! But from my personal point of view, some places don't look very good (just a personal point of view!) 1. As a ghost and a child, the sense of inhumanity is too low. I understand that this is just an acting, but it is a bit out of place because of the inhumanity that is not so consistent with the original work (but it is understandable if the author really wants to create a "protagonist" with such a low inhumanity) 2. There is a conflict between flashback memory and words. As a child, it is impossible that he has never eaten people (but the "protagonist" has indeed never eaten people). At this time, I personally feel that some acting points can be deducted. 3. The barrage is really too dramatic. He is so cute and handsome all the time... Mo Mo Tou is very cute and handsome, but I think real people would be panicked and afraid after seeing Mo Mo Tou's true face. He was afraid that what he told was a lie (he had never eaten anyone), he was afraid that the ghosts he said existed in reality would come to him, and he was afraid that the people around him were also evil man-eating ghosts. As a national destiny, the real world and our attitude towards two-dimensional characters are absolutely different! (Refer to our three times and the team members and ordinary people who know ghosts in the original world of Demon Slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba) At present, I only see these questions in Chapter 17. Maybe I will add more after reading it (?) Also give encouragement to the author! It can be seen that the author really likes the character of Mo Mo Tou~ Although it is not very inhumane! But in fact, the character and actions, as well as the psychological description of certain acting moments, are very close to each other, and the interaction is also very interesting! I want to see the "protagonist" act without misery and bloodshed! ✧*｡٩(ˊᗜˋ*)و✧*｡ So I'll give it five stars. So far, except for my personal aspects, it's really good! After reading it in one sitting, my impression improved a lot! Generally speaking, I feel that there is a sense of inhumanity and inadequacy? The feeling of inhumanity improves a lot later, and it feels like a ghost) Now I'm very curious about the "main character"! I'm really looking forward to the author's description of the "protagonist", but while focusing on it, don't forget to play the role! In fact, I have always been a protagonist. Hey, this feeling of doubts is really uncomfortable, but the more foreshadowing, the more exciting the story will be. I can see that the author now wants to tell the story of the "protagonist", but does the author still have no outline? If there is a two-line narrative, I feel it is better to write a Jian Gang, otherwise it will easily collapse later. . . I hope that while the "protagonist" is hanging on the wall, no one can beat him. I want to watch a cool fight scene with a sense of evenly matched power, which is the most enjoyable! If the next dungeon is Muichiro, I can't imagine what the next dungeon will be like... I'm really curious and excited! This book is now a treasure trove. No matter what kind of dungeon the next one is, single player or multiplayer, I'm so excited! In fact, what I wanted to see later on at the beginning was the gradual integration of the "protagonist" and the role he plays. Everything was forgotten at first, but now I am more curious about the story of the "protagonist" himself!

Well, I won't praise anyone, I can only say that the author's writing is really great. I don't see anything OOC at the moment. It was really cool to write! Well, I probably read it when it was about 10 chapters old. I didn't pay attention to the chapters at first. It wasn't until I suddenly saw the shitty yellow button that I understood the seriousness of the matter. Is it my destiny to like serialized articles? [Laughs] I also want to ask, will the protagonist continue to play the role of a child molester, or will he become another character? I can only say that I can clearly feel that the author's writing is getting better and better. These shortcomings are slowly changing, and I can really see that the author is really making progress little by little, so please update more by the author. It is rare to find a book that suits my taste, in which the national fortune plays the role of a child. I hope that one day I can wake up and read the author's 100th chapter [Adoration] After typing, I realized that I seemed to have said a bit too much [face covering] Anyway, come on, author!

It's good-looking and fits the character's personality, but it's just that there are few reviews so I can't rate it.

The teacher's writing is super good~ After reading it around, I feel that the grinding head written by the teacher has no OOC at all, it is so realistic! Super awesome!

I still want to watch it, it suits my taste It's good to watch, there really aren't many good fanfics [Grieved] Tong Mo's character is not OOC at all [Admiration] It's so refreshing, come on, teacher [Shy]

It's already very good, so I feel like I can't write too many characters, but would it be too little to write just two? Qwq It would be difficult to write too many and pick out the ones with the highest voices. Can you pick some of the most popular ones? Mo Mo Tou is also great😋 Then, if the title of the book is Mo Mo Tou, I look forward to Mo Mo Tou's revival. Well, just forget it and don't stop updating. It's rare to see such a novel theme. At present, the work is slow and meticulous, and no character design has collapsed (it is completely reasonable for some minor problems to occur). Overall, it is completely amazing...! I saw a lot of people talking about Yu'an, and I felt it had a great impact. It may be a bit overdone, but it doesn't matter. After all, the theme revolves around the protagonist, so it's not a big problem to write something ⪩. .⪨The theme may be a little biased, but overall it's still on the line of the original text and it will be slowly rounded out! I hope the teacher won't give up on writing too much. Qwq's article is really good. The characters are well defined and the writing is interesting! Come on, teacher🥺😘

[Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like] Awesome This is my first time watching Demon Slayer. I searched Tongmo and found out that he is so handsome. Anyway, I think he looks good [][][][][][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like][Like]

Hey hey hey so pretty🥺 Men are menstruating when they see it 🙄 Women get crazy when they see it 💪 This is the nemesis of depression 😎 It's the alarm clock for vegetative people 😭 So cute that tears flow out of the corners of the mouth and flood into the Qiantang River 😱 So handsome 😘It is God and it is my rose that illuminates my dark life and makes my world meaningful😊I run, I jump, I dance the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor😮It makes me realize that God does exist and I am so cute The tears won't stop and the world will no longer be short of water. The nemesis of depression 😋 is the alarm clock for vegetative people 😨 It's so cute that tears flow out of the corners of the mouth and flood the Qiantang River 😈 It's so beautiful 🥰 God is my rose, it illuminates my dark life and makes my world meaningful 😙 I ran, I jumped, I danced the tango on the balcony of the 20th floor 😎 It made me realize that God does exist, I was so good that my tears did not stop, and the world no longer lacked water.

Why--! There is really no OOC at all. Ah, the writing is very delicate, the plot is very vivid, and the plot is well connected. Momo Tou is really handsome! [Sending Hearts] I was really happy after reading it at first glance. Is it my destiny to fall in love with serialized novels? [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration]

It's really good to watch, but I'm worried that the author will stop updating it. I'm really looking forward to the plot in the future.

It's good to watch. I hope it can be finished. The character portrayed by Tong Mo is very cute. He is a cute leader, but he also has the characteristics of a ghost. I hope the character will not change in the future. Wow, cute Mo Mo.

It's much better than the ones about the national sports that I've seen before. The audience always thinks that the protagonist is very bad, and the barrage is not handled well at all, and the fun is not shown at all. Currently, this book does not have these shortcomings✧٩(ˊωˋ*)و✧

The first and most important point is that if you want to read this book, why don't you read this: This book is not OOC, and some of the tone is really similar to the leader. Although the barrage is a little bit funny, some of it is a bit unreasonable, but it is really super normal. It is very real. The author is also very kind. 🉑Taste it, after all, it is not very long.

Really super pretty. I haven't seen anything so beautiful in a long time. . . As a grinding push straight to ecstasy. ! I hope I won't change roles in the future. I haven't found a good non-CP article about Tong Mo for a long time (probably the non-CP is the key point.?) (!) It's really beautiful. The author's writing is very good. No ooc at all. ! Like! Really don't switch roles. ... Please. Will keep watching. Come on, author!

It's so good. To be honest, I felt very logical after reading Chapter 99~ I've read a lot of fan fiction, and this writing is really good😋World view It's also done well, I want to follow the teacher to the death🥰😍🥰😍😍🥰😍😍🥰😍😍🥰🥰😍[Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore][Adore]

It's super fun and I look forward to seeing more demon slayer characters coming in the future. The author's writing style is great, spread flowers and flowers [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love]

This is one of the most honest novels I have read recently. The plot is very comfortable and there is no OOC. It's so good that I can't express how good it is. I can't express how good it is with my poor language. I was kicked in by the book-weary period. It's not enough. Wow.

This book is also a hit. I tied it with another account before. Oh my God, I have never seen such a beautiful article. Please beg the author to update it faster. I am already crying. This is the first time I have seen an article that plays the role of a child.

It's pretty good, but not enough. Tong Mo's need to be beaten is shown.

Some places are a bit OOC, but overall it's okay. I just hope there won't be cp and refuse homosexuality, otherwise I'll really have to give up. It's quite interesting. I think the rating will go up in the future. It's not that I don't like homosexuality, it's just that this kind of novel is not suitable. If there is a cp, then a certain original party will really break the defense 🤐

So powerful and amazing! This is a very exciting book for me. I hope it will be updated continuously!

It's really, really beautiful! The author's conception of this aspect is simply divine. It doesn't feel OOC at all, and it doesn't taste like AI. If I have to explain how I view this book, I can only say that it comes from thin blood. It is too tempting for people, and I can't resist it with all my strength [Adoration]

So pretty! ! ! It doesn't break the character at all, it's very beautiful, and it's so delicious!

This is my favorite of all the Kokuyo Demon Slayers I have seen, and it is particularly to my liking.

Super pretty! There's nothing ooc about cosplaying a character!