Just Born, the Snake Fairy Sister Wants to Play and Grow Up

Dear readers, I dare to predict that this book will be a very popular novel in the future. If I am right, can you give me a thumbs up? First of all, my evaluation of this book (the characters are well drawn and the storyline is also good. I hope the author can continue to complete this masterpiece) OK, there is nothing more to say, remember that children must read it! ! ! ! It's too early to say this, because I haven't had much time to read this novel since school recently started. What happened last weekend, after that, I opened this novel again with great excitement. When I read the first few chapters of Chapter 90, I thought it was okay, but when I read Chapter 90, I felt as if I was fully expecting the follow-up plot of this book, but in the end I was full of disappointment (Ｔ▽Ｔ)

Okay, okay, I personally think it is a book with great potential. Most books like "The Ancient of Days" and "The White Snake" are written in a mess, and they are also systematic texts. Systems appear in large numbers. The protagonist of this book has grown up, but I hope that the author will pay attention to handling the protagonist's character, and indeed write an explanation like the explanation of Nie Xiaoqian's paragraph, so that more book friends can understand it. So far, this is what I see today

This book is really good, read it carefully, the people who can't stand it are those who want to have a harem and always want to eat. This book probably also has multiple female protagonists, but it's not too frivolous or sentimental. I just let nature take its course and accept those who feel that the character design is not consistent, and they are all people who really want to recruit women. I think the protagonist will attract many women with his appearance after the hairstyle. I feel that the character design has not changed, it is the same. That means the protagonist is relatively cold. Is it possible that the protagonist has been locked in the stove top for more than 100 years after training with the Blue and White Snakes for a period of time? They have never experienced anything, they must be cold and have no bonds. They have lived in this world for a total of more than 100 years, and they have lived alone for more than 100 years. Just a few decades, which is not a large proportion of this age, so how could they encounter the situation of non-stop looking for the two green and white snakes as soon as they come out of seclusion, and then renew their relationship? There must be a progressive process. After all, the years when he was bound to this world were probably only one-tenth of his life and age at most. It is impossible to say that he is very enthusiastic. Do you think that an old man who is over 100 years old will still remember things from when he was a child and a teenager, and will it be the same as when he was a child? It will definitely change, so I feel that there is nothing wrong with the writing of this book and it is quite good. It is a bit slow. The author should be faster.

It's okay, but there are a lot of minor poisons, and there are a few bosses that I have been fighting for a long time, and I haven't finished them yet, which is overwhelming. The savior was robbed and his real body disappeared. Instead of looking for him, the protagonist ran home to get married.

It's okay to watch it without thinking [laughing evilly]

It has great potential. Keep writing. As long as there are no accidents, according to this quality and rhythm, it will definitely be a good book. The descriptions in the first few pictures gave me a sense of journey to the west. It is not only about the green snake and white snake in the mountains and forests, it is very different from other types of writing.

Run quickly, the author treats readers as minotaurs [pouts]

I really like this style. It does not belong to the traditional prehistoric or fairy tales, nor is it limited to a specific background setting. It combines the plots of various strange stories and adds my own magic changes to avoid a sense of fate and enhance entertainment. But I hope the protagonist can use his true form, especially after turning into a dragon. After all, he is handsome.

Even if you try your best to pretend to be an actor, the final result will not be to accompany you. There is always background music in the acting class, and if you have the ability, you will get drunk with a warm breeze below 20 Hz, or above 20,000 Hz, and just call Hangzhou Bianzhou. Students sleep in the warm breeze and only use the classroom as a bedroom. If you don't study hard now, by the time you take the college entrance examination, you will be full of nonsense and a handful of bitter tears. Some students in the back row were sitting there thinking with melancholy expressions and doing nothing. I saw Fan Zhongyan's demeanor in their faces—worrying before the world's worries, I admire him! If you don't study hard, you won't even be able to write a love letter. .

After reading it for a while, I couldn't stand it. It may be due to my speaking problem. Let me share my opinion. It's just my personal opinion. First of all, I think the protagonist's personality is a bit contradictory and his emotional attitude is a bit outrageous. For example, when he practices in a cave in the early stage and meets again in the later stage, although I see that the author is overlapping, the reading experience is really not very good. If the author wants to create a cold character, it is best to do it in the early stage. It needs to be well prepared, otherwise it will seem very abrupt. The other aspect is the plot. Although everyone says that reading a book does not require thinking, at least when I saw this book, I did not feel that it was outrageous. If the author feels that he has a more legitimate reason for advancing the plot, it is best to write it down and not acquiesce. Otherwise, it is not easy for people to communicate with each other, and the reading will feel more abrupt. It represents a personal opinion and is a reference for the author. Come on author [like][like]

The characters are vividly portrayed, the pace is slow, and the protagonist's journey is relatively rich. Currently, there are two updates a day, and there is a certain risk of writing. I only hope that the author can handle the subsequent relationship well, and how the story should be after killing the national master. (Only my own point of view)

The female author has a unique and delicate writing style. After reading more than 10 chapters, I found no poisonous points. For male readers, it is not satisfying enough.

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I read it in one sitting. Although there are some minor flaws in the article, the overall impression is good. But I have always been worried that the world view of this book is too grand, including dynasties, immortals, journey to the west, and even prehistoric times. Although it is more attractive, it is still a double-edged sword (because I have seen too many such grand worldviews in the early stage, but one-third of them are unfinished, one-third have a rushed ending, and there are too many holes to fill in later. Only a small part can be really well written, and the ones that are written become the best without exception.) And I don't know whether the author accidentally or intentionally set many traps. The whole book has a conspiracy theory feel. If I want to finish it, I feel like I can't finish it if there are no more than 700, 800 or even 1,000 chapters. The author has a lot of imagination and I hope he can persevere and develop steadily.

Xiaodu is an inexplicable Shura field. Big Brother and the others live in ancient times. In ancient times, polygamy was normal and monogamy was rare. Why do they feel that if they have one, they will have no chance? [What]

Many ancient films and TV shows about cultivating immortals integrate world views, which is really good-looking and rare. The characters are portrayed with such depth and depth that it is currently toxic. There are many women, all QC, known: Xiaoqing, Bai Niangzi, Xiaoqian (not dead), Qingyi. The author just doesn't want to be a saint (humans and monsters are treated equally, don't screw up your butt). But the number of words in the update is small, so we need to wait.

It's really interesting. I've edited a lot of interesting Xianxia movies, including Strange Tales from a Chinese Studio.

There are constant little poisons, and the protagonist is just like a personal computer

I think it's quite interesting [thinking], the setting should be mythical and prehistoric, the main plot and emotional line are fine, the rating shouldn't be so low [what], I hope the author will work hard ✊, and wait for the plot later [laughing]

The description of the protagonist is meticulous, the writing style is very delicate, the character description is in place, and the content is interesting. I hope the author will update it soon.

It's pretty good, a very rare Liaozhai type. As mentioned later, Dongsheng Shenzhou has a very good world view. The heroine is Xiaobai Xiaoqing (who needs to be eaten), followed by the locust tree demon from Lanruo Temple (not from the movie, the plot is very good), and Nie Xiaoqian. The plot is fine, but some people mess with the rhythm. I hope the author can work harder💪. Hmm ~ a little bit poisonous 1. The protagonist has been burned in the alchemy furnace for 100 years and has some emotional problems. He and Xiaobai Xiaoqing were estranged for a few chapters, although they reconciled again. 2. There is a bit too much description in Kingdee Yellow Disc, and it's strange that it's just a soft meal, and then Kingdee and Huangdie are dead. 3. Lu Yi knew that she was being targeted, and there was obviously some interest in Lu Yi, but she still left. Although she was not strong enough, she had no choice. 4. I would like to sort out the combat power system. Is it the type of refining Qi and transforming Qi into God? Or is it the type of Qi training and foundation building? Masters of martial arts still have internal strength, and they also have acquired realms. In general, the world view and the overall plot are good, the ideas are very good, the character plot can be polished more, don't be too brief (flowing text) [laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh]

It's okay, I can watch it. This is the adaptation, I almost didn't recognize Calabash Baby.

I have been practicing for 90 years, and I was trained to become a gourd little King Kong. I added a bunch of monsters and trained for a hundred years, and finally got a 300-year cultivation. It is really difficult to improve my cultivation.

It looks good, the subject matter is the kind I like, the author is not a eunuch, come on!

It's a very nice book. Please keep writing. The writing is clear and fluent. It's a nice book.

There is no poisonous point at the moment, maybe I skipped a few chapters and didn't pay attention, the harem lightning avoiders can take a look.

It's super good-looking, I really like this kind of protagonist who plays dumb (｡ò ∀ ó｡) (ಡωಡ)

It's good-looking, very good-looking, there are flaws but the flaws are not concealed (for example, the part where Qing and Bai were indifferent when they first met, I don't think it's impossible to write about the lack of emotion, but at least I need to mention something in the front, otherwise it will be too abrupt and deliberate), it is a very charming little pornographic book [shy]

Not bad, not bad, when did the Tang Dynasty Imperial Master let him die? From the time he appeared until now, he has been lively and energetic [cover face][cover face][cover face]

I think the setting should not be about dragons. Dragons are not the most powerful in mythology. It should be better to be innately divine with a dragon body. In the eyes of those big guys, dragons may be similar to food.